What now (Heartbreak Poem) ?

By Edoria

I looked forward to sleep.
Sometimes I dream, and you are there.
And then
I realize,
Here's the reality of my life I've come to hate.
Careless whispers heated the coldness of my smile.
Once upon a time,
Long sexy strokes of confidence coloured my skin,
Because then,
You were there.
I don't know if I'll ever forget
How you made everything to me
Seem complete.
You were the passion underneath the harshness of those tidal waves.
They used to sink me and drown me.
And then,
You gave your breath to me,
And then
I tasted the sweet flavor of life.
Now, I need to break the intricate web,
You have woven around me.
Safety cradles me like a soft lullaby.
But then,
That was the only song I wanted to hear.
And then, you threw it away.
Bittersweet sensations,
Lingered like an unwanted scar.
You hid me far away from the painful truth,
And then
You tossed your heart high into the nighttime sky.
Far enough,
I cried because I couldn't see it.
Now, I look forward to sleep.
I can dream,
When you were there.
But like love insatiable,
You remain where memories call like haunting winds.
 

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Written by Kim phillips on 2009-11-06 09:55:44 IP: im in this situation now. i love my boyfriend so much..i cry when were apart,and i cry when were together cause i dont feel like im exactly wat he wants. now im under the impression that i jus have to do wats best for me and let him go.

Written by IF;(L) on 2009-10-28 03:44:24 IP: Well if you dont feel the same way he feels i think you shud break up with him becoz oviously u havent found mr.Wright just tell him how you feel he will hate u at frist and be upset but then he will realize u did it for the good becoz if he loves u and you dont love him thats making him go threw mor epain if you thinkg about it hope it works out xxxnull

need help! Written by kelly on 2008-12-05 14:32:26 IP: i love him to death but some of the things he dose if just weird and not normal.i wont to brake up with him but i dont know how! he is the sweetest guy ever but i dont think he is the one for me.and one have any odeas?

dont lyk it but.. LOVE IT!! :P Written by audrey on 2008-11-18 06:42:44 IP: COOL!! I felt those too..

Written by nicky on 2008-06-18 21:43:32 IP: i feel the same way damn thats soooo freakin true

umm Written by sara on 2008-05-28 20:33:11 IP: idk but this isnt exactly what i was looking for to describe wat im feeling but its retty close!

help Written by angle on 2008-05-19 14:42:57 IP: i love him but he loves her what do i do? love is pain

Help Me Written by Taylor on 2008-02-22 17:32:20 IP: I have a boyfriend, but i want to end it with him.Hes such a jerk. And i don't like him at all. The guy i like is always there for me when hes hurting my feelings. I want to end it but he'll probably hurt me. What do i do. I know the guy i like will be there when i do it just to make sure he doesn't hurt   me.I hope I'm doing the right thing and this is true for me as well: and I'm scared to get close to anyone because everyone who ever said "i'll be there",has left Me.

Written by kate on 2007-12-09 12:55:03 IP:

so cutr Written by summer on 2007-04-03 00:39:36 IP: this is sooooo cute

wow. Written by meredith on 2007-03-29 22:54:03 IP: this poem is truly amazing, you are an amazing poet you made me cry.  this poem is so much like what im going through

Written by Nikki on 2007-03-05 11:51:36 IP: that is so cute n sad ... its great

Written by Raul on 2007-03-05 09:04:52 IP: This is the best poem ever G....i know what thats like... i feel that every single day of my life...when she left me..and then went out with another...the one i used to call.....friend...keep them coming and dont ever stop wirtting G...my god bless you and be with you in your troubled and darkest times...

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