Dying on my path

Slowly I am walking down my path,
step by Step, it is getting more exhausting,
people are looking out of windows ; children laugh,
while the sadness in the air is everlasting.

Smoke is coming out of houses roofs, dark and grey,
cars are driving beside, some of them leave the street,
I am raising my head, raise my hands and prey,
the sun is shining bright, I am beaten down by heat.

Birds are singing their melodies ; spending delight,
when raindrops start pouring down my window,
questioning, if I live or if I am just blinded by light,
if it is the love I feel or another kind of sorrow.

 

-By MiSun

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isolated Written by isolated on 2009-04-28 12:06:42 IP: its truly said dat d one who hurts u a lot u love him d most... same wid me... he got tired of hurting.. betrayed me... n i still love him n will love him forever...

lOve iS pAinFuLL Written by yAmIni_gUrL on 2009-02-02 08:21:28 IP: LovE iS pAinFuLL 4EvEr....mY bOyfRiEnD cHeAt mE

love sucks! Written by jing on 2008-11-21 01:26:04 IP: show and express what you really feel

Written by i dont know on 2008-04-04 21:20:56 IP: why people are criticizing it so much  but it's the only truly touching one i've read so far

its iight Written by karinna on 2008-02-18 08:56:35 IP: it was OK NOT GREAT JUST OK, it just doesn't express your true emotions at all its just as if a path to your true emotions and the path is cut of you could've done better.

so good Written by tasha on 2007-12-05 23:43:33 IP: hey im tasha and i have to say i love your poem im a poem writter my self well a starter and your poem as well shown me something i havent seen before so thank you

meh could have done better Written by Guest on 2006-11-24 19:35:41 IP: Doesn't exactly show how you feel, if oyu want to express use more deep words that dig down to your heart.

monica munoz Written by Guest on 2006-11-20 19:48:49 IP: Didn't read all but its okay I think

it's okay Written by Guest on 2006-05-28 00:23:17 IP: this isn't exactly showing how u feel

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