The end of love, the start of pain

The end of love, the start of pain
The blood from my heart that now aches, stains
With the thought of your image, the thought of you care
Devoted to another, whilst my spirit is bare
Where am I to go, where is my hope now
Am I no longer important like our dedicated vows
You promised to always be there, and love me no matter what
But it seems you’ve moved on, loved another and forgot
The breakdown of our relationship, the break of my poor heart
You punctured it with your cruel ways; you stabbed it with a dart
You took away my faith, my dreams, I now have nothing left
My happiness has disappeared; a brutal act of theft
You promised to always be there, but now it all depends
On if you’ve found another love and when my heartache ends

-By Lucy Arnold

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omg Written by meee on 2010-01-07 02:53:29 IP: omg does everyone feel the same way when there heart gets brokeN?? how do we move on? please tell me!

=/ yyyy Written by mari on 2009-11-17 13:58:29 IP: i now dats haw i felt wen i brok up w/ mi booo i miss him soo much i felt lik i wuz goin 2 die!!!!!!

love kills Written by sabrina on 2009-11-03 10:56:54 IP: this is so true it happend to me with my ex boyfriend we where together for a year and then he dumped me

it really hurts Written by myemye on 2009-07-13 22:54:39 IP: THis poem is very true, really happened to me right now. although we have no formal breakup yet, it means, it will lead to this. For the past 5 years of relationship, he promised me that he will never let me go, that he will always there for me. But he just left me without a word, no communication for 4 months now.Until now, i still holding on to his promise and believe that it will come true. To you my honey, i hope that you find inyour heart the love that you feel the same feeling. You are my life, my dreams, you know that. I love you very much.

Written by YEW on 2009-06-15 19:56:58 IP: i hate love and i hate boys.. but im not lezzO!!!!  FROM MY FRIEND    I have had my heart broken and its hard but you move on and you kow wat i shagged some one ese nd it was mmmm gooooodd!!!  LOL, itsounds bad but im 14 and it ws my 1st time!!  I really wanted to with my ex but he left me for anothe chick. I think thats the worst part coz i loved him so much and he was farking hot as!!!  But i realised shagging some one else really doesnt help get over it!  I have my best friend wiht me and really supportive friends that were there for me! Im better then him anyway, i have to stay possitive!  There are so many people around us that can guide and help us. Listn to your heart, theres nothng else you can do!    dont make the mistake i did by getting drunk, smoking, shagging to cover up my upsetness!    mm..yea, so thats the firt time ive opened up to strangers!    LOL        xoxoxoxooxnullnothing

I need help Written by Yolanda on 2009-06-10 09:08:46 IP: I am looking for a poem that I can give my husband who after 19 yrs of marriage who has turned into this sex addict, drugs, and pron addict. He has started taking drugs and I can not longer live with it. I want him to know how he has hurt me and how he has forgotten about our marriage, how he blames me and has made everyting about him. I am deeply hurt and I want him to feel my pain. I need to be alone now and not in a relationship inwhich it has to be all about him and his insecurities. Someone help me!!!

Written by Heartbroken on 2009-05-18 17:33:20 IP: Omg , im in so much pain and this poem explains things well , i loved someone so much tiwas unreal , the way i felt , he sed hell always love me but has moved on and rubs it in my face , but i cant help but love him , i tell everybody im over him and say i dow care , but deep down im tearing to pieces the walls in my world are falling down , ive never felt pain like this before , its unbearable , im so scared i love him so much ill never be able to stop, but if its not meant to be why wont the feelings melt away , will i evert truely move i ? i dont think so , ive tried so hard with everything i have and its doesnt help , i need him , i cant live without him , but hes says he misses me ? :S im conused wot does this means :s

help Written by Spanky on 2009-03-25 06:31:16 IP: i really want to use this poem in an asignment but need help picking out the poetry techniques used . . . . .

Written by spanky on 2009-03-25 06:27:04 IP: I really want to use this poem in an asignment but i cant pick out of all the poetry techniques used . . . . . . .

Written by *(Mrs. Ford*( on 2009-03-13 08:25:19 IP: :s igh THE POEM WAS STR8 COULD OF BEEN BETTER

heartache Written by lizette on 2009-02-07 20:12:05 IP: jUst dRoppin' bY!!

Written by Franchesca on 2009-02-05 18:09:51 IP: this poem is beautiful..i love it...I just went through a break up like this about a week ago..so i feel you!

? Written by karla on 2009-01-27 08:56:46 IP: i love this poem dude its awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

... Written by leah on 2009-01-14 21:09:51 IP: mind if i use this in a song and include your name?

oooo emmm geeee! Written by slumberdork on 2009-01-08 02:50:44 IP: i feel you..love it

Written by selena mcgarity on 2009-01-07 16:08:23 IP: Man i like this one it is so pretty and reminds me of my ex gurlfriend i miss her so much nullnull

Written by lovehurtsss on 2008-12-21 23:42:11 IP: this happened to me first the guy tells me that he loves me then the next day he calla me saying that he kissed his ex girlfriend and that he was confused and then the girl told him that he had to chose who she wanted to be with and he chose her and let me heartbroken love really hurts

none Written by brooke davidson on 2008-11-17 14:28:03 IP: null i hide my feelings from him, casue i was scared he wouldnt like me for who iam,everything seems fine, after i finally do, another month goes by..than out of no where, he says i never let him in, and im a pathick bitch that held on to my last break up and couldnt get over it..on top of that he was cheating on me. Now im left out in the rain, feeling like my heart was ripped out, and im left in my own cold blood that drips from where i used have a beat.. I THOUGHT HE LOVED ME!!!! if anyone wants to add me, go ahead.

Written by Native-1 on 2008-11-03 11:58:22 IP: dang this kind of calming

Written by nina on 2008-11-02 22:35:32 IP: i really lke this poem it just describe any any every felling that i have. it almost made me cry.

love issues Written by elise on 2008-10-30 12:52:42 IP: they are afraid of loving someone else in their life cause once they feel it they run away from it and move on without a care in the world  and that is why some people on this earth have love issues

Written by TAMKAZI on 2008-10-07 02:56:00 IP: like i totally can\'t believe that there are writers out there who can actually describe my feelings, cause i was like with this guy and even though neither of us has said that we should break up i can tell that the relationship is over and i know that it\'s because of this other girl that he was tutoring at the beginning of the year, even though he constantly denies it. it hurts so much but still i can\'t let go and it feels like i\'m addicted to his abuse and even though my heart says leave, my feet wont move.null

my own heart Written by TAMKAZI on 2008-10-07 02:50:04 IP: like i totally can't believe that there are writers out there who can actually describe my feelings, cause i was like with this guy and even though neither of us has said that we should break up i can tell that the relationship is over and i know that it's because of this other girl that he was tutoring at the beginning of the year, even though he constantly denies it. it hurts so much but still i can't let go and it feels like i'm addicted to his abuse and even though my heart says leave, my feet wont move.null

Written by Ayush on 2008-08-02 05:27:58 IP: I can sense the feeling of the writer as I am going through the same. She used to love me for what I have and didn't love me for what I am . Now I am alone and looking for someone who love me for what I am. Any beautiful single can contact me

wow Written by Chelsea on 2008-07-27 22:46:14 IP: this is amazing  my x cheated on me twice and left me....ugh i hate love...

awts!!! Written by lightsnoozer on 2008-07-25 00:43:12 IP: this is indeed true!!its like losing everything in a blink of an eye.worse is when you see them together and look at you straight in the eye and says hi while she's holding her boyfriends hands..and later that night you could hear them talk about their plans and dreams which are the same dreams both of you used to have together..sad part is that you can't do anything but to just walk away.

Written by jack barret on 2008-07-02 04:52:34 IP: its a well sad poem as if   it made me laugh like hell

wow Written by Danielle on 2008-05-19 14:24:40 IP: OMG this poem is ssssooooo good!! I am like in love with this gay and it just hurts when we fight this is AMAZING!!!!!

so true Written by adriana on 2008-05-06 16:07:48 IP: it's so true. i have had my heart broken and it does hurt to see the one you love to have feelings for another. i know because my ex left me and he has feelings for another. i want to tell him that i still love him and see if we can work things out but i don't know how. these poems give me courage to do it. so thanks

I kno how u feel Written by amythest on 2008-05-03 18:48:03 IP: That's such an awesome poem!! Omg, I kno how u feel, my fiance just dumped me cuz I told him I might be preagnant   I cried so much, im not preagnant thank god but the heartache is still there

Guys to. Written by Anthony C on 2008-04-24 01:02:05 IP: Ok well I am a guy and I know exactly what you are saying, I never knew anything was wrong because she always acted happy, and then after 8 years together 6 of those years married she left me. So its not just women that feel the way you do, its just that some men think they are to strong to feel this kind of pain...

wowowow Written by wowow123 on 2008-04-21 12:20:49 IP: I as just surfing around lookin @ poems, but 1 lyk this I neva read.... amazing!!!!!

wow Written by kandice craver on 2008-04-10 11:55:14 IP: i know how all you girls feel mine just left and didnt tell me or anyone anything he just up and left this is a great poem it made me think and cry

woww!! Written by aisha on 2008-04-01 05:36:45 IP: da poem is vry nice but it made me

COOL Written by Migz on 2008-03-22 08:50:26 IP: I LOVE IT... ... but it kinda struck my heart...

Written by Anonymous on 2008-03-19 23:33:45 IP: aww this is so sad   like very sad.

Written by Alma on 2008-03-17 09:54:05 IP: He did tha eact things to me i hate him with all my heart

the end of love, the start of pain Written by jamie - leigh atkins on 2008-03-03 09:44:22 IP: i cried my eyes out when i read this i was not just crying on the outside i was crying on the inside too my heart was bleeding. i have experianced something just like that and i know the feeling.

OMG Written by Naz on 2008-02-27 20:03:59 IP: nullnull OMG WOT A TOUCHIN POEM PUT STRIAGHT IN TEARS BY JST THE NAME OF THE POEM, I KNW WOT UR GOING THROUGH CUZ I AM ....

Written by angela rivera on 2008-02-13 15:37:23 IP: null this is like gonna make me cry

Written by Destiny on 2008-02-12 20:06:24 IP: i CRIED WHEN I READ THIS Poem. I mean my boyfriend and I were just going through this. I don't want to admit to him that I miss him

Written by APRIL on 2007-09-28 23:57:55 IP: man diz was so so sad!man diz was so so sad

Written by MS UNKNOWN on 2007-09-01 02:32:58 IP: DAMN I REALLY CRIED WHEN I READ THIS.....I KNOW EXACTLY THE FEELING!

SAD Written by shana and skye on 2007-08-21 22:50:38 IP: null i love this poem it so sounds like me and my ex that just broke up after 7 months and he doesnt care about me any more he has a new girl on his mind and its hurting i love him so much and always will!    love shane & skye

WOW Written by OH MY!xx on 2007-08-16 19:11:41 IP: oh my god this poem so reminds me of me its such a true poem keep the great work up its so great!!!

Hellooo x Written by Kay on 2007-08-06 16:00:48 IP: Wow , Thats soo true i just split from my boyfriend it hurt so much to realise he doesnt love me as much as he made out its left me wrecked and broken, i dont know how i will move on , i cant eat or sleep iam always so down and to make it worse i cant contact him no more!! i dont know what to do but this poem really is exactley what iam feeling xx

Written by Assad on 2007-07-22 22:00:39 IP: Fabulous. Thank you so much     Hope you get past the pain

cool Written by may bee on 2007-07-19 13:53:03 IP: I dont want to cry

dam its scary good Written by abby on 2007-06-15 16:43:06 IP: im glade you write about things that are real cuz everybody has been heartbroken already im sure but this wuz on of the best poems i have heard its really good plz keep on writting stuff like this. its so good it mad me want to cry for the guy that broke my heart so plz keep up the great work and keep writting.

Written by Rica on 2007-05-16 15:49:57 IP: WOW THIS POEM WAS REAL GOOD I CAN RELATE!!!!

DAMN Written by Katie on 2007-05-09 12:02:00 IP: Wow that is so sad, I know how that feels though I am going through the same thing with my 2 biggest loves ever. My ex-fianse, andex-boyfriend. I would do anything to be back with them, but they don't seem to want me. It's okthough you will make it through though I promise.

well the poem is hurtfull the inspiratio Written by Offie on 2007-05-07 19:20:15 IP: I love this... I was once the person who broke there heart but now that i know how it feels i will never be the same

ahahhahahahhaah Written by james on 2007-05-05 12:18:03 IP:   wow.. dumb asses

Written by guest on 2007-05-03 16:58:11 IP: i am just another random person on the internet but i really appreciated this poem and i think that alot of other ppl did 2... it would be really great if u kept writing other poems like these, and anything else that comes 2 mind .. BTW it is VERY touching and very inspiring.

i know how you feel Written by Niya on 2007-05-02 19:21:48 IP: I know how yall feel even thought me is still young but da** i just got out of a relstationship and let me tell you that my home gurl text me saying your boyfriend said it over and he loves me know so stay the F*** alwaly from him B****

love Written by kaylyn on 2007-04-25 19:55:59 IP: love is not a fair game.  we may all feel bad after a heartbreak but its natural.  everyone feels pain if there really in love.  and you can tell when your in love when reality is finally better than your dreams.  telling everyone that your mopey and that you show it, it makes people scared of you.  love has intimacy passion and heartaches.  you experience all of those.  plus more.  but you'll get over your heartache when a new boy/girl comes along.  you wont be sad forever.  you have to keep your hopes up and not focus on these types of things all the time.  be happy not mopey.  because love isnt a critical thing.

WHAT A POEM Written by JESSICA on 2007-04-13 12:56:48 IP: WOW THIS POEM IS SO GOOD I LOVED IT. IT REMINDED ME OF MY SITUATION

Love Written by summer on 2007-04-03 00:21:37 IP: Well im only young and im sure i dont no wat love is yet but when i read this it made me scared of love.  i hope that one day i will find someone who makes me happy.  I have had a few boyfriends and there name were Joe, Lewis and Jonno and i thought i loved them but now im not sure

i love it81822 Written by Tashauna on 2007-03-22 16:42:52 IP:

omg!!!!!!!!! Written by lulu on 2007-03-20 16:44:43 IP: null wow that was awesome dude!! i kno wut ur going through.. my boyfriend broke up with me over 3 months ago and i still have feelings for him.. he went out with another girl there but u kno ssh*t happens... n.e ways I LOVE THIS!! IT ROXXX

the end of love, the start of pain Written by tiearra on 2007-03-13 15:59:50 IP:

Amazing! Written by Guest on 2007-02-28 15:46:54 IP: This poem is out of this world!....It has so much meaning and i know where you are coming from! This poem has soo much meaning i almost cried! I love it...Keep writing and I will keep reading!

i kno Written by REESE on 2007-02-27 09:03:01 IP: wow thats really good. i just went through a breakup last week..and he meant everything to me and it was perfect. and this is how i feel yea. null

this .... is just.... beautiful... Written by roxylvr_02 on 2007-02-10 00:25:54 IP: WOW! This is totally amazing! I don't knowhow old you are and I don't really need to know, but this is just perfect... I went through a break up like this just over a year ago... and the pain is still woth me... everyday, i go to school and look at him and ask myself why i'm th one who had to suffer.... but now i know... it's because they never wanted me for me in the first place... they just wanted the label as the Boyfriend... yeah the pain is still with me, but after reading this, it's eased my mind on why it was me who suffered... Thank you so much! Keep the poems coming!

Written by Brooke Latham on 2007-01-15 23:17:11 IP: this poem was so great and so touching i just burst into tears bcoz u took my feelings and made them wordz  wow itz amazing

U can get thru it Written by Ladymarion on 2006-12-14 16:39:43 IP: Hey...ur poem was touchin and it made me feel like yourself..u kno, so keep it up and believe that u can get thru it.

Amazing Written by Guest on 2006-11-02 07:52:14 IP: Hey there,  This is a very good poem, its very powerful, it made me start crying. I always remember this poem.

touching Written by Guest on 2006-10-22 10:49:45 IP: ur really talented and im glad i got to read ur poem it really helped me alot. thank u so much

that waz realli g00d Written by Guest on 2006-09-18 23:42:29 IP: that waz realli beutiful i am g0ing thr0ugh this rite n0w,n this realli did t0uched me al0t

awesome .[x Written by Guest on 2006-09-11 06:38:31 IP: touchhiin . ndds iit's killiin ` me .

AMAZING Written by Guest on 2006-10-07 21:34:04 IP: hey, that was really well written. It captures alot of emotion and the true dealings of ones heartbreak. I have recently been dumped by a guy who sed he loved me one day then the next was like see you later. So it brought out alot of emotions on how i am feeling. Well Done!! Should be proud!

toched my heart Written by Guest on 2006-10-11 12:55:24 IP: every word touches my heart. This is how I feel. Thank u.

the end of love the start of pain Written by Guest on 2006-09-25 11:57:34 IP: I loved your poem. We share the same feelings.

wow Written by Guest on 2006-09-27 19:25:40 IP: i can really relate to this poem

wow Written by Guest on 2006-09-29 04:50:06 IP: this is a really nice piece...I feel the same way.

PETE Written by Guest on 2006-09-28 15:25:57 IP: am heartbroken and the pain is killing me this poem means alot

wow Written by Guest on 2006-04-05 16:20:55 IP: wow i like that a lot. I feel like i can relate.

waahhhhhh!!!!! :( Written by Guest on 2006-03-28 15:48:41 IP: awww its so freaking sad...*wait what am i doing! im supposed to be doing a poetry project not moping around!*     Kathryn aka Kitty

Beautifull! Written by Guest on 2006-03-17 13:49:22 IP: I really enjoyed your poem, very deep and touching. Excellent!!!!!

damn Written by Guest on 2006-06-01 20:45:56 IP: Damn great poem.. so much feelings .. loved it.. im cryin right now, cant take it.. damn.. uff.. im gonna make it through the rain, im gonna make it

OUCH!!! Written by Guest on 2006-05-31 12:53:49 IP: THAT WAS SO GOOD IT HURT

touching Written by Guest on 2006-07-04 15:42:57 IP: that poem is beautiful and very touching u should b proud of ya self. x x

just been heartbroken n its killin me Written by Guest on 2006-06-30 08:47:00 IP: that is rei good

peter Written by Guest on 2006-03-08 21:42:56 IP: reeally nice poem..i loved it..im getting over a relationship right now..it helps and stregnthens me

thanks for the poem u shared Written by Guest on 2006-05-11 13:38:58 IP: i've just been dumped too and this poem really sums up all that i'm feeling now. it's so sad and heartbreaking. thanks for sharing it!

sweet Written by Guest on 2006-05-09 21:37:03 IP: That poem is so lovely!!It makes me wann cry.

so amazing Written by Guest on 2006-05-09 14:41:06 IP: that was so beautiful that i got tears in my eyes..you know how to write poems that mean something..that poem brought tears to my eyes because i feel inlove and then we broke up because of other people..i really enjoyed your poem alot thank you for sharing it..  holly aka baby bug

it made me cry Written by Guest on 2006-05-23 10:02:58 IP: your poem is so awesome!!!

Heartbreaking Written by Guest on 2006-05-01 10:04:02 IP: I love your poem. It relates alot to me. I recently had a girl who I thought to be my friend backstab me with my boyfriend and your poem says exactly how I feel. Thank you.

Written by Guest on 2006-05-05 15:23:22 IP: exactly how im feeling, ur a very good writter

cool Written by Guest on 2006-04-23 20:41:37 IP: cool

brittni Written by Guest on 2006-02-27 12:52:38 IP: hello. youre poem was really meaningfull because im still fresh from my first heartbreak.

thats a great poem Written by Guest on 2006-04-11 12:44:41 IP: this poem makes me think bout all the times ive been cheated on

amazing Written by Guest on 2006-04-12 14:51:57 IP: This poem is very nice and it relates to me a lot

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