Vicious Cycle

I am tired of trying
tired of caring
we can't be together
but we cant seem to stay apart
when I finally have my heart set
on walking out that door
you walk in with that cocky smile
full of empty promises
and I cant help but stay

we cant have a civil conversation
between my temper and your pride
we're both too stubborn for our own good
that's why we don't leave
that's why we cant stay
so now you've finally decided
you've had enough
when I walk in with my shy smile
full of empty promises
and you cant help but stay
 

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Thats us Written by Rosie on 2009-12-05 02:42:53 IP: OMG, I swear i wrote that.. (Not litteraly) But i could have.. That is ridculously accurate.. I love it so much i wrote it down and im goin to keep it forever and maybe send it to my ex..

Written by krystal on 2009-08-08 14:55:04 IP: null

the tru you Written by jacob on 2009-05-30 01:11:10 IP:

once upon atime Written by jack on 2009-05-30 00:57:31 IP: ]

Written by XXHEARTBROKEXX on 2009-04-04 02:23:19 IP: that came from the heart and i can tell man it spoke 2 me you now i mean it was so deep

Written by Maria on 2008-12-03 10:09:28 IP: this is exactly wat im goin through rite now i luv this poem

WOW Written by Abigail on 2008-11-29 03:34:28 IP: This is exactly how my husband and I feel, it is good to know that there's people out there with the same problems we have and that we are not wrong to stay together!

omgg Written by mee on 2008-06-19 02:12:39 IP: okay.. seriously...    my boyfriends name is jake  he has a tember.. and i have pride issues...  we're always talking about leaving and breaking up for a while now... but yet we love eachother too much to do so...    whats this kids last name??  because honest to god i think he wrote it...?

Written by mee on 2008-06-19 02:08:12 IP: seriously...?    i think my boyfriend wrote this.  it describes what he thinks of me...   about the cocky smile..    and how we both talk about leaving.. but never do..    whats the jake kids last name?  because my boyfriends name is jake...    thats reallllly creepy to be honest!

Written by Corrielyn on 2008-06-01 20:38:45 IP: I so know what this poem is saying.  It's exactually what happens between me and my boyfriend. I love this poem.

Written by Sarah Kristine on 2008-04-05 18:59:00 IP: this poem is reallie deep your righting is so pure and real i love it.

Written by geust on 2007-11-10 12:36:43 IP: This poem is the bomb cause this is what im goin through right now! its crazii!

Written by lexus on 2007-07-06 15:45:18 IP: i can relate to this poem a lot. this poem is exactly what i feel.

O.M.G Written by jaymie on 2007-06-18 09:36:58 IP: DAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM BUT NOT MEANINGFUL ENUF UR HIDING SUMFIN JUST LET IT GO AND YOU WILL BE OK XXX

Woah. Written by BraveGirl<3 on 2007-06-05 07:26:19 IP: This poem is really good. I can see exactly where you coming from. Think everyone can. It's Great xx

Written by amanda on 2007-06-02 10:43:03 IP: this is exactly the relationship i just got out of. and itz hard. love hurts when u lose it.

WOW!!!!! Written by lilmiskatie07 on 2007-05-30 22:08:06 IP: wow I know how this feels I have been through it before and it hurts sooooooo bad and everytime I think of him I get so mad I let it go on for that long!

Written by Ariel Martinez on 2007-05-10 17:16:22 IP: I think that your poem is amazing, just that feel of pain kept in your heart. i have gone through the cycle and think that the worlds that you wrote are the truth

squeee!!!! Written by Hanajima on 2007-04-23 14:37:53 IP: Your poem is really good and has a bitter feel to it. I really like it.

Written by Natasha on 2007-04-19 13:15:56 IP: Going through that right now and this poem took the words right of my mind

Written by cindy on 2007-03-19 23:40:49 IP: Loved this poem so much i went trhough this recently and i thankyou for making it so easy to bare

... Written by Monica on 2007-02-04 01:53:47 IP: i looovee this poem. i can realli relate to it. && i can see that alot of other people can to.

poem Written by me on 2007-01-30 16:55:14 IP: mine

good work Written by Tinkerbell on 2007-01-17 15:32:19 IP: thats a good poem and a lot of gurls can relat to the topic with heart break and all it is really good keep up the good work!!!!!

Written by Megzzz on 2007-01-09 21:48:48 IP: Bravo! lol I like it. A lot! lol

Edoria Written by Guest on 2006-11-11 19:58:36 IP: Out of all the poems in this site. This onez awsome. Next to mine of course. lol. Kinda what I'm going thru now.  I love the poem.

Written by Guest on 2006-11-01 10:45:03 IP: I like it because it relates to me and my boyfriend(well Ex-boyfriend)

Written by Guest on 2006-11-01 01:58:19 IP: Nice poem..

... Written by Guest on 2006-09-29 18:33:49 IP: this poem is incredibly touching. i can relate to it completly. i can tell it came straight from the heart.

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