So Close To Good Bye

I don't know how to tell you,
I don't know what to do,
I want to say that I Love You,
But our Love is fading too.

Your always gone with friends,
Leaving me alone to cry,
I've been telling you about this,
But all you do is sigh.

I wish it was like it use to be,
You always wanting to hold me,
I know that it is just a wish,
And that it will never be.

Now I hope you finally realize,
What it almost came down too,
I didn't want to do it,
But I was close to saying...Good Bye.

 

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Written by Sunshine on 2010-01-07 21:37:58 IP: so so true

babygirl Written by karel on 2009-12-31 04:10:36 IP: i lovvvveee this poem soo much! , i love it because this is exactly the position i am in..thanks for something so true

Written by Brandy on 2009-09-07 22:09:26 IP: I Love You

so sad!!!! Written by candygrl on 2009-07-24 06:34:23 IP: life has a lot of surprise for us!!!! loving someone is always like taking a risk!!!

Written by suset on 2009-07-20 07:16:17 IP: ugh this is so truee!!

so close to goodbye Written by jessica sepulvado on 2009-03-24 01:22:21 IP: i really respect this poem. i personally take it as giving the guy another chance. you love him and you are hurt because of the neglect and having to dealk with the memories of you too ACTUALLY happy together. all you want is that back and i get it. i want the same thing back. i gave him so many chances...i finally realized it would never happen. i had to except the pain. except the heart break. i hope things are going better for you.

Written by Emily (: on 2009-03-01 21:23:59 IP: this is exactly what ive been trying to tell my ex boyfriend.! im glad i found this (:

Emotional Written by Amy on 2009-02-26 07:14:19 IP: I hate to say this but I used to do this to my ex... my love for him was fading.. but to be fair he was extremely clingy... ii agree slightly that hatred makes you stronger... but so does love... this is a beautiful poem i loved reading it =] a life without love iis like a world without oxygen x

ouchh..... Written by arshie on 2009-02-24 10:35:32 IP:     Loved d poem, so true!!!  i feel tha same way at time [

Written by DESI on 2009-02-19 20:59:53 IP:

Written by loveless on 2009-02-18 05:10:36 IP: gosshh:]] kmusta namn euin at ntMaan ako:]]hahaha.weLl nice poem:]]

Written by stacey bennett on 2009-02-17 10:27:02 IP: null

WTF Written by Uchiha on 2009-02-11 03:04:13 IP: u guys are pathetic! life isn't always about love... love is wat makes you weak.. hatred is the meaning of strength.. u guys are pathetic

Written by amalgaa on 2009-01-20 11:52:41 IP: Really beautiful poetry there,  i really can relate and i know its hard  to get past it butt you feel like shit, mayb saying goodbye was best ?     Love x

i actually did it Written by megan on 2009-01-10 17:14:43 IP: i really like this poem  my now ex used to cancel on me all the time  he would make me cancel plans i had made with friends then at the last minute cancel on me to go hang out with friends    i told him how i felt and he said i was over re acting    but today i finally stood up for myself and broke up with him.      girl i dont know you  and you dont know me    but you deserve better then getting cancelled on for friends  i know what it feels like to miss the holding  the surprise hugs from behind  the little pecks on the forhead or nose for no reason  i KNOW what its like    you deserve better  all girls out there deserve better    but i know how you feel  we want our old boyfriend back,  the one we fell in love with...

Written by mangesh on 2008-12-31 08:12:46 IP: this is hoe i feel

Written by Rabi on 2008-12-26 15:37:48 IP: OMG this is soo goood! :D Except i love my dude!!So im good >But i still like the poem. its sad!

Omg.! Written by danira on 2008-12-15 17:20:58 IP: this is JUST how i feel.!! man my boyfriend right now..he changed sooo much nd it hurts me soooo much nd i dnt think that he kno's whut he's doing.!! but i cry nd cry nd cry nd wont stop just crying about him..!! =[ i wish that he could understand.! but im giving him until new years to prove that he can change the way that i miss..he would call just to say that he loves me.!! man i dont know this all started bkus of his dumb little cuzzin who had to ruin EVERYTHING that we REALLY had nd i hate it.!! but when we got bacc...he CHANGED a lot.!!   =;[ i can relate.!

Am so disappionted Written by melly on 2008-11-10 11:58:44 IP: wow this is true....but in my case me heart was broken a lot of times..even after i forgive him a million times...he really never understood why i did the things i did for him...and i know that 1 day he will go through the same thing and understand..all the pain i had and still do when he broke my heart..... ......am so disappionted in him....never expected that from someone who said they love me.....i know that none of that was ever true...

Written by chris on 2008-09-28 08:13:53 IP: dude yor a fukin genious.

i have the same feeling Written by rufaida on 2008-09-25 14:23:32 IP: i have the same feeling i think im about 2 go the same thing u did and i feel sooo down right now but im hopeing that things will get better i hope its not just a dream

Written by Jenn on 2008-07-05 23:04:55 IP: i love this poem i really understand what you were going through cuz i went through the same thing and i ended p having my heart broken

i understand Written by Fany on 2008-07-05 23:04:23 IP: i love this poem i really understand what you were going through cuz i went through the same thing and i ended p having my heart broken

Written by calista on 2008-06-25 22:33:00 IP: when you love someone and they break your heart dont give up on love have faith restart     its hard yer but trying to forget the person you love is like trying to hide a sandwich in your sock they will alwaiz have a peice of your heart and its not goign to change no matter how many people you date to try and get rid of them from your hart then eventually a great guy will come along and save your life so have faith and hold on just a lil longer

Written by angel on 2008-06-25 10:30:56 IP: This poem is da best!!I love it

Written by Jamie Thrasher on 2008-06-15 13:31:10 IP: omg amazing poem this is exactly how i feel sometimes its scary thinking about leaving the one you love and i kno i truly love hikm but theres something thats not being said somethings being hidden i just cant figure it out yet

Written by Jazzy on 2008-06-03 23:27:24 IP: That is exactly what happened to me, except I did say goodbye and then I regretted it and I miss him so much... Turns out he really didn't want to be with me either and I never admitted to anyone that it ripped me apart inside. Now I just live everyday pretending that not one piece of me is holding on to him. Except a good friend of mine, she knows. But she's moving soon... Beautiful poem as well! It made me cry a little...

broken heart Written by devil gurl on 2008-06-03 18:52:46 IP: this is soo..ture ..this is wat had happen to meh..and my loved one

wow! Written by davison on 2008-05-29 00:04:07 IP: all this time i was thinkin it was just me that felt this way....but now i see im not..but we all know how it goes they wont miss a good thing till its gone....

I Love You Written by Sophie *&* Gina on 2008-05-12 09:55:51 IP: I Lovee You..!    Awww Very Nice Poem    Me And My Friend Are Heartbroken Once Again...! :'(    Boys Just Dont Unerstand The Damage They Actually Do..!    But We No They aint worth the tears but Yeah We no its hard not to cry but You Just Have To Try..    Try *&* Smile :D    They will soon realise wot they have losted and they will Come Running Back ..!!    Lovee From Sophie *&* Gina    Sophie-Leigh Grant Loves Ben Roy Beckely 14.07.07    Georgina-Alice Driscoll Loves Adam David Barker 8.02.08    Forever *&* Always

Written by zeinab on 2008-04-23 00:07:49 IP:   thats wat i was goin through   its sad that ppl are doin this to other   i hope i dont go through this again

love Written by erica lewis on 2008-03-27 20:52:35 IP: i love this poem and this poem had made me cry with tears. : cry

Written by Mikki on 2008-03-06 21:03:41 IP: Im going through this right now!  This is going to make me cry...All my bf every wants to do anymore is go looking for fights when all he used to care about was knowing he was the reason for my grin.. when now all he does is make my head fall down Im going through this right now!

hurt bye him Written by jessica adams on 2008-02-28 11:13:33 IP: i loved him but have you ever woundered why guys love to hurt girls

Written by Sad:''[ on 2008-02-17 21:26:49 IP:   awwww it hurts aye?  but remember just dump him, cry a river build a bridge and get over it...  if he's hurting you then he's definatly not worth it sweetie.  so many ppl will be there to help u through it. and when u think ur life is over another guy will come help u back up on to your feet.    good luck beautiful.  xxxx

Written by TaMiE on 2008-02-11 09:05:11 IP: i wah jus lukin for a poem tah send 2 ma bf to let him no how i feel, and i find this 1. its describes exactly ow i feel cheers! keep up the gud work i myt need 1 of ur poems in the future hehe

Wow Written by Fran on 2008-02-02 02:31:45 IP: Wow, I understand that pain hurts, but don't you ever think that, that your guy was thinknig the same too, I've been in this situation and it hurts to know that love fades. But in time people even you and me will find someone better. In other words never give up!

Awwww Written by *~TheRealReasonAGirlCriesIsBec on 2008-01-25 22:42:50 IP: Awwww that was really touched my heart and soul.  I had to say goodbye yesterday to my boyfriend coz he wanted to be friends... i just think life does go on.  Theres nothing u can do but get rid of all your tears and let out and move on.  May happiness watch over you...  good luck.  Hang in there x x x x

Written by katie on 2008-01-23 08:32:53 IP: OMG i thought you could never fall out of love but you proved me wrong

when i saw your face again Written by omgg goshh soo sad on 2007-10-10 10:42:17 IP: i saw yu again the feeling is bak.  i knew this wld of happened,  my feelings were over  now there here where they were.  i thought i was over yu,  obviously not..  im starting to think about yu again non-stop  the touch of yur kiss is soo soft  like words cant explain!!  i am going crazy thinking about wat yu want  more than a friend or not?  im sick of this feeling coz i always get hurt  but wen im with yu i dnt care  bcoz wen i think of us i feeel the sparks flying in the air,  sometimes i think yu like me nd some times i dnt  but all the tym i no where my heart is nd its with yu!

True Written by Vinamarata Kaur on 2007-10-04 04:48:46 IP: Loved d poem, so true!!!

Written by April on 2007-10-03 15:02:38 IP: Im really close to this...

OMG...:-( Written by Eddie on 2007-10-03 12:55:18 IP: :-[[...that was sad!

i thought!!!!!!!!!! Written by jessica on 2007-09-26 11:54:54 IP: i THOUGHT LOVE NEVER DIIEZ BUT I GUEZZ I WUZ WRNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Written by kiera on 2007-08-30 22:16:09 IP: wow! i have just been put through that, but instead we actually said goodbye!

it really hurts!!!! Written by kayE on 2007-08-21 23:58:17 IP:   i know that feeling!!!.. coz at dis moment, im suffering that kind of pain!!!! a pain of bieng dumped, being rejected, being betrayed by the person i love!!!..

Ezz is awesome Written by Erin on 2007-08-16 22:02:48 IP: Dump him.     There are pleanty of fish in the sea.

Umm.. Written by Ash aa leeee :) on 2007-08-16 22:02:12 IP: nullUmmm.null  Sweetheart I think you need a consellor,    You sound a little bit emotional.

Yess. =) Written by Ezz on 2007-08-16 22:01:03 IP: I'm Awesome.

Written by Ezz on 2007-08-16 22:00:01 IP: I'm awesome.

i almost say goodbye... Written by a lover on 2007-08-08 03:49:38 IP:   i hate you for making this sad poem!!!!    haha...joke...thanks to you..  its ssssssooooo wonderful...

Written by laura on 2007-08-02 23:54:06 IP: this perfectly describes the situtation i am in now. i loved it.

close to goodbye Written by rica bonne on 2007-07-18 01:10:39 IP: take this poem and read it and understand like a heart breaker like me rica hi hw r u?

it hurts me so bad Written by br0kenheartedgirl on 2007-07-16 22:38:26 IP: i know what is the feeling of a br0ken hearted!!! me and my bf rcntly breakup bc0z he d0esnt l0ve me anym0re.... he l0ves s0me0ne else!! and it truly hurts me a l0t..... n0w im all al0ne evryday im crying bc0z i l0ve him s0 much nd n0w he's n0t mine anym0re....

Written by mike on 2007-06-11 19:45:08 IP:

how fallfish of me Written by fatima on 2007-06-05 10:04:59 IP: how fallfish of to want a men that is not mine.  how fallfish of me to think that u would choose me ofter all we talked about and da same dreams we had  how fallfish of me to think this tine i would live happly ever ofter

Written by Mz.$MA$HGiRL on 2007-05-18 03:07:39 IP: WOW....I READ THIS AT THE EXACT TIME THAT I FELT IT.nullnull

i know Written by shykia on 2007-05-11 09:52:39 IP: i know how u feel cuz some time it comes to that point cuz i feel like that every other day but its good to get it out and tell some one but if u love them then it's best to let them know

Written by Kristen on 2007-05-05 10:59:33 IP: I know exactly how you feel, my bf can be the same way sometimes, my friends always tell me to 'get rid of him', and to 'dump him, cuz he's such an ass...', but noone knows how he really is, and if they knew why I loved him, they would understand... he's my everything, and I don't want to lose him.. I DEFFINETLY know where you are coming from!!!

i love it Written by shawna on 2007-04-26 13:36:49 IP: omg i really like this poem

Written by laquosha on 2007-04-11 13:49:08 IP: LOVE COULD MEAN A GOOD THING OUR A BAD THING! BUT I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM!! ~ ~

Written by ME on 2007-04-02 01:01:44 IP: i know exactly how this is. i'm kinda going through something like this. it makes me real sad. well i love this poem keep up the good work. your awsome at writing poems!

love Written by gg on 2007-03-29 11:35:55 IP: i really love this pome i feel tha same way at time

Written by nikki on 2007-03-04 17:34:53 IP: i lov it ..pain from heart

i know how it is Written by Kim on 2007-03-01 10:28:42 IP: yeah i know how you feel it hurts dont it kinda reminds me how me and my boyfriend are he always has time to hang with his friends and party but he can never hangout with me i want to tell him its over but i jsut cant i love him to much!

Written by MEGGYN on 2007-02-18 01:06:46 IP: Awwe. I like it, I can relate. Always feeling yu should end it, but knowing yu just wont.. love sucks eh?

So Close To Good Bye Written by Marilee on 2007-02-13 17:13:42 IP: omg i love this poem i have problems like this and i always write a poem to let my feelings out but i LOVE YOUR POEM

Written by qudsia on 2006-12-16 18:40:44 IP: love poems

Damn! Written by Ladymarion on 2006-12-14 16:43:02 IP: that was touching....i actually felt where you were coming..

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