Aug 19 2013

Another gone

Published by at 6:32 am under Goodbye Poems

Another tear not shed
Because thine eyes are dry
No restless nights in bed
why doesn’t it bother me that he died?
Another one I loved is gone
because disease won in the end
no I know that this is wrong
Why couldn’t he have lived instead?
Another funeral to attend
Because the kemo did not work
no my condolences I do send
Why tonight must she be alone?
another uncle I loved is gone
Because he has died
no I wish he wasnt gone
Why must another on I love be dead

This post was submitted by meghan222.

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2 Responses to “Another gone”

  1. pixieon 25 Aug 2013 at 8:56 am

    Very heartfelt poem. I enjoyed a lot of the rhyming, as well as the overall feel of the words.
    What I did notice, is that you misspelled chemo.
    Besides that, fantastic poem, good job.

  2. meghan222on 25 Aug 2013 at 9:24 pm

    lol guess I should have looked up how to spell that xD
    and thank you

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