Jun 26 2011

Camoflaged treasure

Published by at 11:40 pm under Cute Love Poems

People search for treasure there whole lives.
Heaps of cash, Diamonds, rubies and sharp golden knives.

But theres a treasure out there unseen by all but my own precious eyes, and she’s worth more than money, she’s truly a special prize.

Of wisdom,beauty,and love she is comprised. Her personality never concludes to surprise. She’s my day and night. My sunset, and sunrise.

She wasn’t easy to find, and thats why to her, my love will always bind.
She’s a treasure beyond measure, and she’s and shes here to stay, all mine.

I used to be a trasure hunter. Gold, and money I used to plunder. I was greedy, a treasure hound.
Until I met her..a camoflaged treasure I found.

This post was submitted by Josiah Goodman.

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2 Responses to “Camoflaged treasure”

  1. pixieon 27 Jun 2011 at 7:57 am

    lots of spelling mistakes. cute title. ending was a bit weak.
    what was really good to me, was the way ur whole poem was focused completely on what u were trying to say. no stupid lines that had nothing to do with the subject at hand.
    really nice.

  2. gothic angelon 12 Oct 2011 at 7:10 pm

    i loved it !!!! :D

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