Mar 21 2005

Heartbroken

Published by adminwp at 9:23 am under Heartbreak Poems

Heartbroken


Is there a better place,

To be right now,

Than to be home,

Listening to the crickets’ sounds,

Outside the windows.

Is there a better place,

To be right now,

Than in the bed,

Closing my eyes,

Falling into a deep sleep,

To forget about the days,

Forget about the nights,

Forget about you.

Heartbroken,

Nothing better than to sleep,

To forget that you are gone,

To forget your lies,

Forget the way,

You told me,

You never loved me,

Forget the way,

You looked at me,

When you left me,

I want to forget,

I want to leave this world,

Close my eyes,

Fall to sleep to stop the heart,

From beating.

I block my ears,

From hearing the sounds,

Like your voice,

Like when you sing to me,

Those lovely songs,

They sounded to tender,

Now they kill me,

They hurt me,

I don’t want to hear anything,

Don’t want to hear the waves,

Hitting against the sand,

Don’t want to hear the birds,

Chirping outside the windows.

Don’t want to see my face,

Don’t want to see you,

Don’t want anything,

That has to do with you,

I want to close,

I want to block away,

The world to stop the pain,

In my heart.

I want my heart to stop beating,

To stop bleeding,

From your words,

Your lies.

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152 responses so far

152 Responses to “Heartbroken”

  1. Gueston 14 Jun 2005 at 9:10 am

    i absolutley loved it. This poem reminded me so much of me wondering about peopl.

  2. Gueston 23 Oct 2005 at 4:59 pm

    So we all do feel the same things in the same way.

  3. Gueston 25 Oct 2005 at 1:27 pm

    I know what you mean

  4. Gueston 17 Jun 2005 at 5:26 am

    I love this poem…it reminds meeh of my heartbreak..i can relate to it easily….

  5. Gueston 16 Nov 2005 at 6:21 pm

    That\’s amazing

  6. Gueston 19 Oct 2005 at 12:03 am

    I can totally relate my current situation with this poem. It\’s so true. I feel the same!!!

  7. Gueston 23 Sep 2005 at 2:52 pm

    your poem was best i have ever read

  8. Gueston 01 Aug 2005 at 4:38 am

    i can feel the pain

  9. Gueston 01 Nov 2005 at 10:09 am

    that was sooooo sad and beautiful i can realate to all of it and it was sooo heart felt it made me want to cry

  10. Gueston 11 Nov 2005 at 5:10 pm

    It reminds me about the way i feel about somebody! I wish sleeping would make it all better.

  11. Gueston 08 Nov 2005 at 10:16 am

    gosh i can really realate to something like that! it\’s really sad~

  12. Gueston 09 Nov 2005 at 10:37 am

    such a gd poem! expression feelingz!
    i can relate 2 it perfectly
    as i read it i nearly cried :\’(

  13. Gueston 09 Nov 2005 at 1:02 am

    this is EXACTLY how i feel right now. it\’s nice to know i\’m not the only one who feels this way…

  14. Gueston 15 Sep 2005 at 5:52 am

    i like it

  15. Gueston 04 Jan 2006 at 11:48 am

    i know exactly how you feel…at first when you are with him everything seems wonderful but then as time goes on he stops doing the things he once did and it all goes downhill and you once again find yourself alone an heartbroken.

  16. Gueston 21 Dec 2005 at 8:15 pm

    That was so great. It helped me alot Love sucks. I hate waking up and remembering that he is gone and wanting to go back to sIeep to ease the pain!!!!

  17. Gueston 19 Jan 2006 at 7:54 pm

    wow this poem is deep

  18. Gueston 15 Jan 2006 at 11:05 pm

    that is totally how i feel, i can so relate to how u input pain into the poem…well written

  19. Gueston 13 Jan 2006 at 6:15 pm

    It hurts when the one you love more than anything in the world leaves. You Expressed the pain perfectly in this poem. I can absolutely ralate. You said it for all of us. Thanks!

  20. Gueston 10 Dec 2005 at 9:15 pm

    hah this is how i feel and its hurting me so bad becasue my bestfriend is like a sister to me and shes gogin out eith him

  21. Gueston 24 Jan 2006 at 4:57 pm

    [B]edwardin[/B][LIST]

  22. Gueston 30 Jan 2006 at 3:54 pm

    This poem is amazing it really tells it how it is and how people really do feel this is one of the best I have read in a while!!!!!

  23. Gueston 01 Feb 2006 at 10:52 pm

    when i read this it reminded of everything that happend to me
    a guy hurt me
    he took my heart from under me
    and its like a thousand stabbing knives

  24. Gueston 08 Feb 2006 at 4:48 am

    wanderful

  25. Gueston 09 Feb 2006 at 4:48 am

    this poem was well gd, it remains me, of my x bf, he onley whant it one thing from me, and when he got it, he tould me tht he wasent gd for reletionships :\’(

  26. Gueston 12 Feb 2006 at 5:18 pm

    that poem has made me realise how i feel about my life that is the way my x gf has made me feel 4 the past month n a bit but reading that i now see y feel so upset because sorrow is jus mans way of giving up and i [B]wont give up!![/B]

  27. Gueston 24 Feb 2006 at 9:44 am

    that was really good…i can really relate to the pain you feel about heartbreak. its horrible :( you have my sympathy
    keep strong bruvva
    xxxxxx

  28. Gueston 15 Apr 2006 at 2:08 pm

    [I]It was soo touching.. I can feel the pain.. I felt like crying when i readi it… =\”([/I]

  29. Gueston 27 Feb 2006 at 7:04 pm

    everything about that poem hits so close to what happened with my ex and it all seems so true

  30. Gueston 06 May 2006 at 8:43 am

    i know exactly how that is… not even kidding

  31. Gueston 23 May 2006 at 8:50 am

    wow,this was a very good poem,i can really relate to it automatically because i have been through something like this not too long ago,and yes i know it still hurts…

  32. Gueston 23 May 2006 at 8:50 am

    wow,this was a very good poem,i can really relate to it automatically because i have been through something like this not too long ago,and yes i know it still hurts…

  33. Gueston 18 May 2006 at 4:31 am

    i must say this poem is damn good.i felt the pain of the writer but would really like to tell those who are heartbroken to never loose hope because life reserved better for you my dear i\’m sure…

  34. Gueston 02 Jun 2006 at 8:09 pm

    just had the same experience…. i can feel the words in the poem.. =(

  35. Gueston 28 May 2006 at 1:20 am

    this poem relates EXACTLY what i am passing through right now!!!

  36. Gueston 15 Jul 2006 at 4:46 pm

    I WRITEN APOME ALL MOST JUST LIKE THIS

  37. Gueston 15 Jul 2006 at 7:00 pm

    I loved your poem. It\’s a bueatiful poem.

  38. Gueston 14 Jul 2006 at 8:35 am

    Wow!!! thats really deep. i think im heading that way. I really loved it.

  39. Gueston 02 Jun 2006 at 1:28 pm

    thanks to the person who posted this poem in this web page and i thanks to the owners of this website

    and this is really what happens in the real life with all i
    its having its meanings

  40. Gueston 18 Jul 2006 at 7:02 pm

    wow !! this was great, really said how im feeling!!

  41. Gueston 16 Mar 2006 at 1:51 pm

    u kno this poem dosnt discribe the way i feel at all but it was ok for ppl that r going threw that but id rate this 4/10!!

  42. Gueston 20 Mar 2006 at 8:56 pm

    this poem was scattered in its thought yet created an emotional image that one can appreciate…pain is life so ponder life insearch of how pain may \’enlighten\’cleatsup6@hotmail.com

  43. Gueston 23 Mar 2006 at 10:10 pm

    i know how you feel i want all those things to happen to me..but when i thought about it..there are better people in the world who will care for you much better just need to open your eyes

  44. Gueston 28 Mar 2006 at 11:23 am

    this peom was awsome it reminds me of the guy who broke my heart i like it alot good job

  45. Gueston 28 Mar 2006 at 3:44 pm

    wow this poem is great i can relate i just dont wanna wake up to feel the pain either it hurts to lose the one you loved so much

  46. Gueston 31 Mar 2006 at 8:37 am

    there isnt much to say about this its too good ur too good this is simply the best

  47. Gueston 04 Apr 2006 at 11:44 am

    that relates to the relationship i was just in and how i felt after we split up and i still feel that was cause he was the love of my life.

  48. Gueston 30 Jul 2006 at 10:44 am

    YOU CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN SAYING BY THAT DESERT

  49. Gueston 08 Jun 2006 at 12:17 pm

    its so nice.. it reminds me of someone that i really love so much..

  50. Gueston 09 Jun 2006 at 9:52 am

    [B]this is great i loved it[/B]

  51. Gueston 13 Jun 2006 at 8:04 pm

    i know what u mean and noboby can really know how much hurt you\’re going through not even me because no one can understand what i am going through.

  52. Gueston 28 Sep 2006 at 9:52 am

    really love it…
    i hv ben seaching for words to express me…then, i found out abt dis piece…It makes me wanna cry…

  53. Gueston 30 Sep 2006 at 4:24 am

    wonderful…touches the heart

  54. Gueston 03 Aug 2006 at 6:29 pm

    The Best, It made me cry.

  55. Gueston 06 Aug 2006 at 3:36 am

    last year your my angel
    but now you\’re just a stranger
    you told me, you love me
    you told me, you care for me
    but now, you just ignore me
    you told me you\’ll love me forever
    you told me, you\’ll die for me
    but now, it\’s just a lie
    you told me, you can\’t live w/o me
    you told me, you can\’t breathe w/o me
    but now, why are you doing this to me
    you\’re the reason why i\’m living
    but now, you\’re the reason why i\’m dying
    for me you\’re just a lie
    for me you\’re just a stranger

  56. Gueston 06 Aug 2006 at 4:08 pm

    i am always hearing my ex boyfriends voice in my head and i always try to block it out…but the the thing is whenever i try to stay away from him it seems like i think about him so much more…and thats what hurts the most!!

  57. Gueston 08 Aug 2006 at 4:38 pm

    [B]I effing Luve Your poem keep it up!!

  58. Gueston 09 Aug 2006 at 6:08 am

    this is a realli g8 poem it touched me because of wat im going through i h8 my life n i just want to lay down and die

  59. Gueston 27 Aug 2006 at 2:17 pm

    ii ABSOULETLY LOVE THiiS POEM!!

  60. Gueston 27 Aug 2006 at 2:56 am

    wow… this really speaks to me… i\’m feelin that… good job!!!

  61. Gueston 07 Oct 2006 at 8:49 pm

    absolutly me i love this poem alot OMG i just realize that everyword is there is true thx alot

  62. Gueston 14 Aug 2006 at 11:13 pm

    this is nice. i wish i knew when heartbreak ended. you get your heartbroken but when does it heal. if only there was a set time. of course it would never be that easy.

  63. Gueston 15 Aug 2006 at 11:11 pm

    THAT WAS….GREAT .

  64. Gueston 25 Aug 2006 at 2:55 am

    [B]it just made me cry coz that is wat i felt ryt now…ouch as in ouch [/B]

  65. Gueston 28 Oct 2006 at 12:34 am

    i love it .. im going through the same

  66. Gueston 01 Nov 2006 at 5:32 pm

    I just want to print the poem NOT the 101 comments. Please fix your print.

  67. Gueston 09 Nov 2006 at 3:10 pm

    This poem is good it says whats in your heart and how hurt you are i think that i can say i relate to it cause i would also just want to forget about the person who hurt me ans has broken my heart. touching

  68. Gueston 13 Nov 2006 at 7:48 pm

    I can feel ure pain 4 i am in da same position lyk u. i can totally relate 2 wut u sed.

  69. Gueston 14 Nov 2006 at 1:17 pm

    its totally awsome

  70. Gueston 20 Nov 2006 at 3:19 pm

    incredible!!!! exactly what i needed to hear..lol

  71. Gueston 20 Nov 2006 at 7:58 pm

    i felt the pain inside of me…

  72. Gueston 23 Nov 2006 at 8:42 am

    your poem just touched my hart.

  73. Gueston 23 Nov 2006 at 5:38 pm

    i loved this poem!! it reminded me of myself sooo much!!!

  74. Gueston 24 Nov 2006 at 8:08 pm

    That poem was awsome, I loved it and its true, thats how you feel when you get heartbroken

  75. Gueston 27 Nov 2006 at 9:20 am

    This poem is totally true..i can relate the heartbreak..so sad..

  76. Annieon 01 Dec 2006 at 12:59 pm

    Hay i really liked it! itss really awesum..its really good to speak your mind…..i rite tooo….
    \”i fell for a guy but i alwayz end up hittin the ground heart first\”
    well keep riting!
    Later

  77. Kellion 04 Dec 2006 at 10:53 am

    it takes me there
    and takes all away
    jack daniels, jim bean,
    what more can i say?
    it takes me there, and makes it good
    it makes the memories as they should
    it takes me there and makes me smile
    so i sip and sip some more awhile
    but as i sip i sometimes wonder
    if i didn\’t have this drink to live under….
    but nevertheless i sip and sip
    until a drunken sleep is where i slip
    and then i wake up and all is gone
    except my problems,
    they still live on
    and my stomach churns and my head aches
    jack daniels, jim bean, you\’re all such fakes
    you make it good, you make it fun,
    but then the next day i can\’t face the sun
    your drink won\’t forever mend my problems
    so another way is how i\’ll have to solve them

  78. antonetteon 08 Dec 2006 at 1:00 am

    [B]hey[/B] [I]umm what should i do wen my crsh likes me freind[/I]

  79. babie gurlon 12 Dec 2006 at 6:15 pm

    hey omg ur peom is awesome it was sooo sad i can relate to it cuz i like this guy and he dosnt like me and hes soo sweet and everything but ur peom is soo sad dont stop writing

  80. Amandaon 14 Dec 2006 at 9:33 am

    :eek WOW love it that is exactly how i feel. I have to admit though I hate being single. I miss TYLER :cry I acusered him of cheating for the 5th time any advies

  81. holy crapon 18 Dec 2006 at 2:58 pm

    :cry i feel u

  82. danielleon 19 Dec 2006 at 1:56 pm

    [B]heyy i just got my heart broken and i dont no what to do and everyone hates me and i cant get them back but most of all i miss my boyfriend i love him but he said he didnt have time for a girlfriend so now i dont no wat to do i just really love him but he wont take me back what should i do and love your poems

  83. amberon 30 Jan 2007 at 6:19 pm

    Hi i broke up with my b.f. a while back and belive it or not i still have feelings for him. all the time people tell me to get over it but i cant :sigh for all you girl who has lost a guy that you realy care about listen to \’ Not Gonna Cry\’ by \’Marry J. Blidge\’ :roll [B]null[/B]

  84. Terisaon 31 Jan 2007 at 1:01 pm

    [B]I loved it alot[/B] 8)

  85. laura escmillaon 06 Feb 2007 at 6:50 pm

    hey thats pretty cool mine are okay but they dont make sense but the mean so much well yeah

  86. Jennon 07 Feb 2007 at 10:40 pm

    i\’ve had my heart broken after being in a relationship with a guy for 3 years almost 4 he left me for my best friend i was best friends with her for 11 years.. i know where al lyou guys are coming from but you can get threw it no matter what… it will take a while but you can.. cause if can you can believe me. :)

  87. lisaon 14 Feb 2007 at 1:29 pm

    They lied to you so why the pain. Move on to a newer day.
    They treated you like no good. So dont let the melodie do you good. :x :zzz

  88. Alisonon 11 Mar 2007 at 7:26 pm

    :sigh The second paragraph is me tonight…..

  89. SHANAEon 15 Mar 2007 at 3:47 pm

    MY BOYFREIND BROKE UP WITH ME 4 MY FUCKIN FREIND..I KNEW BOTH OF THA BIITCHEZ 4 8MONTHS I STILL LOVE AND WANT HIM BACK BUT SHE THA FUCKIN PROMBLEM!!!!! :cry

  90. Shawn-Ton 16 Mar 2007 at 6:16 am

    When my brother read a poem I had wrote for my first love, he threw my book onto the ground and smothered it with his foot. He told me…\”Thats what I think of that…..Thats exactly what this person did to your f**king heart……\” He was right. F**k him, Cause he F**ked me!

    Shawn-T

  91. Jenniferon 22 Mar 2007 at 12:52 pm

    Hey,
    Well i recently broke up with my BF b-cuz he said he loved me but he was confused! He said that he started to like the girl that i hate the most in school! Now he tells me to give him time and that he wants to be my best friend while he unconfuses himself. I don\’t even know what to do, move on or let him have his time. Hopefully by the time he unconfuses himself it\’s not too late……….

  92. Macyon 24 Mar 2007 at 8:05 pm

    I know how you feel. Don\’t worry. There are other guys out there who are MUCH better. I am going through the same :cry

  93. ashleyon 30 Mar 2007 at 1:29 pm

    :cry i really love the poem that\’s how i feel sometimes me and my boyfriend just broke up but hey am hurting but i can move on ladies don\’t sit and sober over him it will be okay go find u somebody else and have fun instead of stressing yourself over him

  94. mirandaon 06 Apr 2007 at 10:09 am

    :cry i have been their 2 so well i so sad

  95. Katieon 10 Apr 2007 at 8:45 pm

    I just got out of a good realtionship. At least your ex didn\\\’t say he loved you and then told you he loved your best friend, then take back he will always love you. But, I\\\’m not mad at either of them! :)

  96. Me,on 18 Apr 2007 at 1:45 pm

    Mk, That Was Gay.

  97. Jessiekahon 19 Apr 2007 at 5:10 pm

    :cry :? :cry :? :cry :? I LOVE THIS POEM BUT AT THE SAME TIME I DONT GIT IT!!! :? :? :? :? :? :? :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :? :? :? :? :? :? :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry

  98. some one like yu!on 20 Apr 2007 at 4:39 am

    :sigh hey i know how yu feel i mean my bf jst broke up with me and said hey lets jst be frens! i mean he broke up with me cuz of his frens i mean c\’mmon yu trow away love for yur frens!
    well he saya he dnt want to be in a relationship for a while! bt knnow he is goin out with some grl! i mean it hurts i know! bt jst like every one else told me keep yur head up dn yull be fine!i promise ♥

  99. Love Hurts on 23 Apr 2007 at 7:23 am

    :cry I don\’t know what I did to him to hurt me so much, Its been months since we where going out,, And I love him more than anything in this whole world I think a part off me always will.. It\’s not faree, I want to give him another chance.. But I can\’t, We have one out god knows how many.. And he said to me he never loved me, And yea.. Thats bout it.. god i hate him now, Cya all take care xox

  100. kimon 24 Apr 2007 at 6:10 pm

    i think that was kooly poem and no it did not make mme cry :zzz :zzz

  101. Rebeccaon 27 Apr 2007 at 4:21 pm

    it made me sad. i can relate though.[B]null[/B]

  102. ISAIAH HALEon 30 Apr 2007 at 2:39 am

    :cry my girlfriend briea sad she will never cheat on me but she did.

    it happened like this, i told her give me her password or i was gone breakup with her and she gave me her password i guess she forgot i had it so i went on her page and i said some stuff that i did not want 2 read so i would like some help…….. WHO EVER WOULD LIKE 2 HELP ME JUST E-MAIL ME AT moneynunu04@yahoo.com
    PLEASE IM ASKIN 4 ALL HELP THAT I CAN TAKE..

  103. Isaiah Haleon 30 Apr 2007 at 2:42 am

    :cry my girlfriend briea sad she will never cheat on me but she did.

    it happened like this, i told her give me her password or i was gone breakup with her and she gave me her password i guess she forgot i had it so i went on her page and i said some stuff that i did not want 2 read so i would like some help…….. WHO EVER WOULD LIKE 2 HELP ME JUST E-MAIL ME AT moneynunu04@yahoo.com
    PLEASE IM ASKIN 4 ALL HELP THAT I CAN TAKE..[B]love hurts [/B]

  104. sophieon 02 May 2007 at 3:58 pm

    hey im only 13 but ive already experienced my heart being broken but you have always got to remember gurls hold your head up high because any man that makes you feel that way is not worth the effort. You will be fine if you just remember this 1 thing…..Men are scum. Like I said im only 13 but i know that already x Take a piece of my heart to mend yor broken 1 x
    sophie, 13 :) :)

  105. Yanion 03 May 2007 at 5:36 am

    it\’s been 3 months now
    since we\’ve broke up.
    & it still hurts to see him whit that other girl.
    :cry
    cause hell. that\’s were he belongs. cause that\’s where i am right now. & he doesnt give a shit \’bout me.

  106. sarahon 03 May 2007 at 8:39 am

    :cry aww dese r sooo sad n i know how it feels 2 b heartbroken…i miss him so much n i love him more dan ever bu all he did was hurt me…i wish dis pain wud jus go away! :cry

  107. Katianaon 06 May 2007 at 3:20 pm

    THIS POEM JUST REMEBER ME ABOUT A TIME I HAD AN IT IS AN MY HEART THAT WHY I READ THIS POEM

  108. bethon 08 May 2007 at 11:21 am

    :zzz :sigh :p 8) ;) :grin :) :roll :eek :upset :( :x :cry :? that was a good poem

  109. marbearon 09 May 2007 at 1:50 pm

    Ah-Mazing :zzz

  110. maryon 09 May 2007 at 2:10 pm

    i have 2 words for you:
    Ah Mazing!! :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz

  111. Terisaon 10 May 2007 at 1:57 pm

    Thanks i feel the same way :zzz

  112. ......on 12 May 2007 at 9:25 am

    i need help i love this girl but im to shy to confront her. i really love her, a lot. but she loves someone else and that someone else loves her back too. if shes taken by that somevody, ill get very melancholy. :sigh :sigh :sigh

  113. JESUSon 13 May 2007 at 11:10 pm

    [B]I LIKE THIS SHIT HERE SORRY FOR THE BAD WORDS BUT MAN IM FUCKEN HEARTBROKEN CAUSE I LEFT THE LOVE OF MY LIFE SHE LOVED N SHIT N I LEFT HER FOR AN OBSESSION FOR ANOTHER GURL I WANTED TO BE WITH N NOW SHE DONT EVEN WANTS TO LOOK AT ME OR TALK TO ME I MISS HER SO FUCKEN MUCH DOGG–>>>WHERE EVER I GO I THINK ABOUT HER N WHEN IM TALKING TO SOME OTHA GURL IM THINKING ABOUT HER I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO I DONT WANT TO ASK HER OUT AGAIN CAUSE I KNOW SHE WONT GO OUT WITH ME NO MORE I BROKE HER HEART AS WELL WHEN I WENT OUT WITH THE OTHA GURL DAYYUM IM STUPID,THE LAST TIME I TALKED TO HER I TOLD HER I LOVED HER N I MISS HER N SHE SAID TO ME SHE DONT LOVE ME NO MORE N SHE DONT CARE ABOUT ME NO MORE N WHEN I HEARD THAT I WAS DOWN FOR A WHILE..I MISS HER KISSES N HUGZ N WHEN I TOLD HER \”I LOVE HER WITH ALL MY HEART DAYYUM LOVE HURTS..BUT WATEVA THATS HOW LOVE IS..{{{>>>FUK LOVE

  114. Britanion 16 May 2007 at 11:12 am

    [I]batang[/I]Okay i know how you feel becasue this just hapened to me!!! and yea u can find some one eles to fall in LoVe wItH okayy :cry ;) :p :upset :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry ;) :sigh :sigh :sigh :x

  115. HANAon 18 May 2007 at 6:34 am

    It hurts when the one you love more than anything in the world leaves.that was really good…i can really relate to the pain you feel about heartbreak :( :cry :? :sigh

  116. cadieon 18 May 2007 at 9:24 am

    dude

  117. Danaon 18 May 2007 at 1:12 pm

    i just broke up with my boyfriend after a year he thought he could yell at me whenever he felt like it and lie to me constantly and after being friends for four years and together a year he acts like he does not no me but i am stronger than that i will get over him and so can everyone else just believe in yourselves

  118. Elizabethon 18 May 2007 at 2:10 pm

    i know how you feel like i have been talking to this guy and i thought i knew him but it was all a great big lie…. hang in there.. life will go on take the good with the bad and just roll with it!!!!!

  119. LyNdA GaRcIaon 21 May 2007 at 2:29 pm

    *omg, dis is excatly how i feel bout my ex…it just really hurts an di do wishmy heart could stop beating*:[ :sigh :sigh :cry :cry :x :x

  120. jaminson 22 May 2007 at 8:15 am

    good poem
    :cry :eek

  121. jaminson 22 May 2007 at 8:15 am

    good poem
    :cry :eek

  122. Vuyiswaon 22 May 2007 at 4:02 pm

    Oh man, I knw how u felt I feel like busting out right now. Men wil always be men! I\’m feeling so ashamed for you, anyway we\’ll just have 2 kiss a lot of bustards before u get Mr right IF THERE IS!

  123. marionette bernardon 23 May 2007 at 2:04 pm

    :sigh IIVE FELT THAT WAY A MANY OF TIMES. ITS SO DEEP.

  124. stellaon 24 May 2007 at 6:35 pm

    omg..i love these poems they are so sweet true like heart broken…and right now i am heart broken from some1 that i really loved and that i trusted…but no look how i am…. :cry

  125. Nekoon 24 May 2007 at 11:30 pm

    I felt alot like this…
    I cried when I read this.. :cry

  126. Ashlynon 26 Jun 2007 at 1:20 pm

    [B]Brushscript MT[/B] I am reading this because last night I lost my true love :cry this poem makes me cry.

  127. natton 10 Sep 2007 at 3:30 am

    i felt da same way too
    that guy\’s an arsehole
    erghh he put me through HELL!he\’s my first bf..he said he dont wanna leave me but at last he did..n also lied to me abt something that\’s way beyond my thoughts

  128. alexon 19 Sep 2007 at 12:24 pm

    i cried so bad for a long time its been a month since my x left me for someone else n since then i haven\’t stoped crying for her i love her and i cant stop loving her i miss her and want to get back with her.1 week b4 turning a year together she left me and im still trying to get back with her after everything.this poem says everything that im trying to do but i can\’t.i forward her voicemessages sying that she loves me and misses me.i send her songs relating to her or me or what she has done…. i miss her alot (please come back priceless.) i love this poem all true………

  129. Kahleikon 22 Oct 2007 at 9:39 am

    :cry my x brokee my heart too. i know exactly how you feel. i thought she meant it when she told me that she loved me. we were dating for 15 months. three days before she broke my heart she told me that i was the one she wanted to spend her life with. then i go to check my messages and theres one from her. it said i dont want to go out with you anymore. and a whole bunch of other stuf i shouldn\’t say. ever since that day i haven\’t been to sleep, i haven\’t eaten, and i haven\’t stopped loving her. :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry

  130. Gueston 05 Dec 2007 at 12:01 pm

    This is a very good poem! I feel your pain right now. this made me cry! And i wish i could sleep all day and erase the pain.

  131. Crystal Dukeon 17 Mar 2008 at 4:30 pm

    I LOVE ALEX DECKER 4 EVER -N- ALWAYS.HE\’S THE MOST PERFECT BOYFRIEND I EVER HAD IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE.ALEX IS SO WONDERFUL.:) I WOULD JUST ABOUT ANYTHING TO GET ONE MORE CHANCE.THAT WOULD MAEN A LOT TO ME.SO IM NOT AFARID TO SAY IM STILL IN LOVE WITH HIM SO MUCH. :) :) :) :) :)

  132. Bailieon 18 Jan 2008 at 9:41 am

    Exacly Hoow I Feel.
    && Thiink I Am Boout To Go Craazy Withouut Hiim.

  133. ?on 22 Jan 2008 at 3:25 pm

    gr8 :grin :) ;) 8) :p :roll :eek :upset :zzz :sigh :? :cry :( :x

  134. Dannieon 14 Apr 2008 at 4:43 pm

    I too understand my heart is breaking and has been for a long time and the more it breaks the more i seem to disappear. The poem is great i have written a few myself but they are never to be read by anyone else. I feel the emotion from your poem and it\’s hard but im starting to realise the longer i let my heart break the long my life fades away before my eyes.

  135. abion 10 Mar 2008 at 3:07 pm

    :cry :sigh

    my biggest mistake in my life in first place is to like this boi who broke my heart bad.has 3 years now but still am afraid 2 go out with some1 in case they break my heart!HATE HIM VERY MUCH!

  136. brandi on 12 Dec 2008 at 1:29 pm

    this happened to me to he told me he loved me and hed never let me go and he never cheat on me but he lied he cheated on me with my own cousin :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry i loved him so much we went out for olmost 7 and a halve monthes i think tha it was love but if it was he never would have cheated i loved so much wen we broke up i just wanted to kill myself like i couldnt deal with it he did the same thing to some other gurl to but they said that he really cared about me and i really cared about him to and i LOVED him so much and for him to cheat on my like that is really fucked :sigh :sigh up and sometimes i wish we could get back together :cry :cry then again i dnt want to cuz he lied to me alot and he never ment it and i should have know but i didnt and im so dumb cuz i fel for him and i shouldnt have said i loved u back he was my first love and other stuff he talked shit like hes tha shit wen he aint but im slowly moving on but if i see him i might just die i hope i dnt he a lieing cheatin son of a [B]null[/B][B]null[/B]

  137. Valon 26 Sep 2008 at 6:31 pm

    This is amazing is just how i feel right now..Hope you find someone that wont make you ever feel this way again :)

  138. Melvyon 18 Sep 2008 at 10:55 am

    this poem is so good i\’d like to make it into a song with my band please let me. :grin

  139. staceyon 07 Sep 2008 at 1:03 pm

    a week agoo i truly lost my LOVE, he told me everyday that that he loved me and would never let meh goo..
    &the day before he broke my heart, was the day he told me he wanted to grow old with me, &i believed him. but the next day he broke my heart & now isee him with some other girl. probably telling her those lines that were once minee, and my heart tears itself into more pieces than two. :cry :cry

  140. shahhanon 07 Aug 2008 at 1:51 pm

    u knw wah, people say dt boiz r prikz, buh u knw wah galz dnt dsrv boiz dat love dm alot cuz all day do is tke u for grantage, dey tel u dey love nd put so many dreams in your mind nd dn break it demslvs. i was wiv sum whom i luvd mor dn ma slf, nd to b honst i still do, she usd to tel me dt she luvd nd she wud neva leav me, buh gues wah, she came out wiv dat all does feelinz i had for you wer a misunderstandin. i would neva want no one to feel lyk i do, i will neva 4gt ha nd she wil b alwz in ma heart cuz i love ha, nd wt tha hek mn love aint havin sum1 o being wiv sum1, its da name given to whne a person would do any thing to keep the person dey love happy. im heartbrokn buh i would neva want her to be.

  141. Adrianaon 13 Aug 2008 at 7:05 pm

    This poem is so beautiful so true. This is a poem dedicated to the one i use to share my life with. Its confusing love is a mess but at the same time it is AMAZING! I still love him. Ill always will.

  142. Emaanon 22 Oct 2008 at 1:14 pm

    i loved this guy called we went out for 5 months then he brok my heart he had an x gf too that he really loved but she brok his heart so now that he brok my heart i think he took her revenge from me becoz she really hurt him alot. but becoz i love him for his happyness i pray that hse comes bak to him so get gets happy.

  143. anaon 10 Nov 2008 at 2:00 pm

    So i had this guy who i loved to death he was the one i loved. We were together for a year and two months. Then all of a sudden he left me he wants to date this freshman now. after all the lies he told me that he would always loved me all he wanted to do was get in my heart really well then tair it apart. :cry it was so painful. i cant let him go i need him in my life with out him im nothing. :sigh :sigh :cry

  144. Melindaon 03 Feb 2009 at 7:45 pm

    Loved the poem… It made me think of how i ended up loosing my first true love. He broke my heart so bad. We dated for awhil and one day he just walked out my door and never came back ever. I still love him to this day and i cant get him out of my head. I cant forget are memories at all. I just miss him so much and i wish i could have him back. My heart is still shattered and i cant even get another bf without me mentiong or saying or thinking about him. I just hurt so bad and i want him back. He bet on me and he got the money, and i hate him for it but somehow still love him,

  145. la shortyon 25 Feb 2009 at 3:02 am

    hey i was heartbroken 4 months ago.. Our relationship was going so well bt his father didnt like me nd my mother didnt know at all. when my mom found out the first thing she said to me was that he didnt feel the same way i felt for him. next day he left me nd said it was for our good… i thought he really loved me nd wen you love sumthing u fight for it bt he didnt even try to tlk to my mom… i got so depressed i didnt eat or sleep i just cried. weeks later i got wif his other guys that told me he was going to help me forget him bt that didnt work nd wen my ex found i was going out wif sum1 he got mad nd started flirting wif my cousin they did it behind my back bt i found out nd felt like my world had fallen apart.. i told him i hate him nd i do for wat he did to me bt i also love him. i dont wat to do anymore cuz to my family nd friends nd boyfriend i have to act like everything ok wen its not at all… NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME!!!

  146. Someoneon 10 Apr 2009 at 6:11 am

    I swear[B]null[/B] its really sad ae…! I mean wen loosing yah 1st love is real pain ful ae…! After dey teo yew dey will neva leave yew nd dat dey love yew heaps dey end uhb hurting nd breaking yah heart ae…! Buh i gues dea are bda ones owt dea ae…! :eek :sigh :sigh :sigh

  147. Kallion 14 Apr 2009 at 3:19 pm

    this is an amazing poem.
    i know that i have messed up many times.
    && i lost the one i love.
    so you guys dont mess up.
    know for sure when you find the right one.

    :sigh :cry

  148. angelon 10 Aug 2010 at 5:33 pm

    i love this poem.it made me feel free but i feel like killing myself as well.you got good skills making poems.i almost cried because i had this song by seconhand serenade called “your call”….. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( ;-( ;-( ;-(

  149. GamerChIcKaon 21 Aug 2010 at 9:40 pm

    last year your my angel
    but now you\’re just a stranger
    you told me, you love me
    you told me, you care for me
    but now, you just ignore me
    you told me you\’ll love me forever
    you told me, you\’ll die for me
    but now, it\’s just a lie
    you told me, you can\’t live w/o me
    you told me, you can\’t breathe w/o me
    but now, why are you doing this to me
    you\’re the reason why i\’m living
    but now, you\’re the reason why i\’m dying
    for me you\’re just a lie
    for me you\’re just a stranger
    whoever did this i feel da same but just a lil diff thgh ;-(

  150. Toshion 24 Aug 2010 at 5:28 pm

    Y did u said u luv me, wen all u did ws lt me go. Y did u said u luv me, wen nw all i fl is lone. Y did u said, u’ll grow old wid me, wen all i cn see u wd sm else. Y? Y sch a lie? Y did u evn luvd me

  151. Michael Yoderson 25 Aug 2010 at 1:27 pm

    This hurts my heart because its about me i hurt my wife didnt cheat physically abuse her. I hurt her emotionally so bad i am such a bad person

  152. Beccy-Roseon 28 Aug 2010 at 10:12 am

    This Poem describes how i feel . The week my little neice died me and my (6 month ) boyfriend on our 6 months anniversary broke up he broke up with me for my best friend . Because she is the pretty one . I still live in depression . I have to see several professionals , So those who judge can do fuck em selves because what heart break does to some may lead to the wost like i tried to commit suicide but i didnt wanna be selfish ,,,,

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