Nov 20 2011

Huney nd Beez

Published by at 3:28 am under Teenage Love Poems

I was just wondering
I now I’m not the only one
But how can you crush someone that you reall, really love
The person you think about before you go to sleep
The person you think about throughout you day
The one that you think about, who is perfect in all their ways

I have one person that I love very much
He confuses me
One minuet he loves me
The next he doesn’t

Love can be as sweet as honey
Or sting like a bee

This post was submitted by Belle Nae.

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6 Responses to “Huney nd Beez”

  1. Maxon 21 Nov 2011 at 5:34 am

    This is my last hate for the day, can’t wait for tomorrow!

    Wow, you have surpassed the limit of awful. Kudos, not many people are capable of such potential.

    You write like a teenager, because you probably are. You’re sloppy(your grammar confuses itself) and you write with no depth. This should be banned from existence, and I can probably predict this is what you would say “No Max, you ***hole, YOU should be banned from existence! Have a good day”, but since I just said that you have no more offensive language. But you ARE tremendously ghetto, so you can come up with something new.

    Love you sister, thank you for reading my comment, and have a wonderful life :D

    Now don’t kill yourself, because I would miss lmao(laughing my ass off, just in case you don’t know what it means) at your “poems”.

  2. pixieon 21 Nov 2011 at 12:06 pm

    The thing I adore about this poem is the very last line. It leaves this terrifyingly ominous feeling prickling over your skin.
    Honestly, you’ve got talent. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.

  3. SWeet.Candyies**on 22 Nov 2011 at 12:00 am

    WOWZERS
    >>Max, Max, MAX, max max
    you truely are one of a kind
    I just love how you hat on *Pretty….Swagg*
    Now that I thought of it, you started all this when you had to say something rude about that one persons poems.
    And yeah you SHOULD be banned from existance
    >>Pretty>> you do have some grammer mistakes but overall I like the poem and like Pixie said, you do have talent so write write write
    >>MAX>>> RT just fuck off :wink:

  4. Lucianrockstar14on 13 May 2012 at 7:05 am

    I agree with SWeet.Candyies** max, this format of speak is a phase of writing that is very popular amoung the average american (other nationalities as well) teen, and even a few adults. so if you would please think before you post next time it would be much apreciated.

  5. <3Pretty_Gurl_Swag<3on 14 May 2012 at 10:53 pm

    thanksss:)<3 ^_^

  6. StarfireBluestoneon 17 Jul 2012 at 5:51 am

    nice poem :)

    lol FAIL.. a poem by a ‘teenager’ under ‘teenager love poems’
    who would have thought it max!

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