If You Died Tomorrow…

Sep 21 2010

Published by madelaine7 at 4:32 am under Love Poems for Him

If you died tomorrow I would cry until
I couldn’t cry anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would write your name until I couldn’t wrote anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would pick you up in my arms and carry you until I couldn’t walk anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would die too

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7 Responses to “If You Died Tomorrow…”

# Amandaon 21 Sep 2010 at 4:36 am

rated +5

This is so powerful, so short yet so amazing, beautifully explains the strength of the bond of love
# madelaine7on 21 Sep 2010 at 5:21 am

Thank you so much for your kind comment. My ex boyfriend actually inspired this…we ask eachother deep thinking questions all the time and I asked him this and he answered what the poem says. (except for the last line.) I was so
inspired I had to write about it
# baaby54on 21 Sep 2010 at 3:33 pm

Such a meaningful poem.
Your a fantastic writer.
Its short, lovely and very detailed. Loved it !
# angel709on 21 Sep 2010 at 6:29 pm

i realy like this poem!
# Dannielle Lovesongon 22 Sep 2010 at 2:29 am

It’s really good. I’m glad I got to read it. Good job.
# lost_in_the_worldon 09 Apr 2011 at 2:11 am

Oh God, that’s an amazing poem. The words you used were so strong and carried the message across so perfectly. Actually, it inspired me more than a lot of longer poems I’ve read have. Really, REALLY good job, I absolutely love it. 5 stars.
# saanjon 30 Jul 2011 at 9:22 am

i need this………