Sep 22 2010

Pathetic Heartbreak

Published by at 10:18 pm under Heartbreak Poems

You warned me to never say goodbye,
Because of your irrational fear,
I told you not to worry,
And to never shed a tear.

But not so long after,
Thought I would never see the day,
That it wasnt me,
But it was you who walked away.

All I did was cry for hours,
I could never let you go,
Wishing you would come back,
Knowing it would never be so.

When I close my deep brown eyes,
I see yours just the same,
I weep at the thought,
The beautiful spark in them was a game.

I cherish a sacred photograph,
Your lips locked on mine,
How could it be,
The same lips are what made me cry?

Two perfect dimples,
One on either cheek,
Remembering when those were mine,
Makes my knees go weak.

Why am I so afraid to lose you,
Even though we’re not together?
I guess it’s because in my mind,
I know we’re meant for eachother.

You say the same thing to everyone,
Why do I waste my time,
On someone who for every girl,
Uses the same line?

The answer to that is easy,
Its because I love you, I really do,
But do you know how bad I wish,
Your love for me was true?

They say that I should move on,
But do they even know,
That for me its so impossible,
Impossible to let go.

So for now I’ll let you go your own way,
But please remember this my dear,
That if ever you need me,
Ever so pathetically I’ll be here.

This post was submitted by AutomaticTorix3.

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24 Responses to “Pathetic Heartbreak”

  1. adminon 22 Sep 2010 at 10:32 pm

    must say that it is an amazing poem .. just reminds of the line
    “You broke my heart … and I love you with every piece of it”

  2. angel709on 23 Sep 2010 at 1:23 pm

    i actualy am going through this right now, so this is an extremely touching poem

  3. BrokenBabyon 23 Sep 2010 at 8:23 pm

    Thank you sooo much! I’m going through this right now, and its hard, so I know how you feel, Angel. :/

  4. meghanon 23 Sep 2010 at 11:16 pm

    have you ever been through this cause Im only 12

  5. BrokenBabyon 24 Sep 2010 at 12:40 am

    Im only fourteen -.- .
    Haha .

  6. Dannielle Lovesongon 24 Sep 2010 at 1:13 am

    That’s really good. I’m going through this to some extent. It touched one of the pieces. Thank you for writing such an AMAZING poem :) Bravo.

  7. angel709on 24 Sep 2010 at 1:41 pm

    most of the time people will say that time heals all wounds but the only cure iz that one person. just hold in there cuz sum day you will find a new cure that will be there for the rest of your life keeping you warm and never be bored!

  8. natalieon 29 Sep 2010 at 4:05 am

    Amazing poem! Seriously. I loved the last line, it stuck with me. Very well written. I loved it.

  9. Joeon 01 Oct 2010 at 4:56 pm

    Very touching and heartfelt. How bout this for last line…
    And just remember this my dear
    if you ever need me
    f.u I won’t be here

  10. BrokenBabyon 02 Oct 2010 at 9:32 pm

    I like that, haha.
    Except to keep the poem based on reality, that wouldnt be true, :/ .

  11. poetry_girlon 06 Oct 2010 at 12:37 am

    beautiful :)

  12. BrokenBabyon 06 Oct 2010 at 1:23 am

    Thank you so much (:
    This poem is truly straight from the bottom of my heart. ?

  13. BrokenBabyon 06 Oct 2010 at 1:23 am

    * <3

  14. AllieBabeon 20 Oct 2010 at 1:16 am

    I love this, i’m going through this right now and it’s really hard to even wake up in the morning and trying not to think, about him. This poem is really touching and I can honestly relate to it</3
    Very well written(:

  15. pixieon 23 Oct 2010 at 5:03 pm

    Thanx so much for sharing! Keep on writing; you’re really good!!!!!!!!!!!
    :D
    xoxo

  16. Scarlet Netter McCoyon 24 Oct 2010 at 3:51 am

    This poem made me cry ;-( . I absolutely love it. I’m going through this as well.

  17. Trenton 15 Nov 2010 at 8:43 pm

    This is a wonderful poem. The last line truly blew me away. Kudos to you.

  18. Mommaon 01 Dec 2010 at 10:20 pm

    My baby is famous! <3 I love your poem…it just breaks my heart, though. I love you!

  19. brittanyon 02 Dec 2010 at 8:39 am

    my boyfriends broke up with me a month ago today and i still not handling it very welli cry all the time,have nightmares,and hopefull dreams ;-(
    my friends say i should hate him,but i truely cant.
    he’d freak out if ever he thought id leave him,but i told him i NEVER would.
    together for a lil over 2years and he dumps me like that.
    “i just wanna be friends”he wont say a word,wont even tell me the cause of it.
    but no matter wat i will always love him and will always be there for him if he needs a shoulder to lean against
    ..i love this poem it made me cry,but i wont give up

  20. BrokenBabyon 01 Jan 2011 at 7:00 pm

    Thanks everybody!

    Allie – Thankyou! Its really hard to deal with :/
    Pixie – Thanks! I love writing < 3
    Scarlet – Awe, thankyou! It's not fun, I know.
    Trent – Thankyou SO much! (:
    Momma – < 3 Haha, thanks, ily too (:
    Brittany – I'm sorry :/ . That's probably horrible, I was only with the person this is about for the summer, I can't even imagine what it would feel like after two years. I know exactly what that feels like though. :(

  21. natisson 29 Jan 2011 at 5:45 am

    I can relate to this line so much.
    “they say I should move on,
    but do they even know,
    that for me it’s so impossible,
    Impossible to let go,”

  22. adminon 26 May 2011 at 4:02 am

    the closing lines are awesome

  23. AutomaticTorix3on 02 Jun 2011 at 6:04 pm

    Thank you (: !

  24. Trisha Runelon 05 Jul 2011 at 7:17 am

    man u r only 14????……AWESOME!!!!! :D ………..I CAN REALLY RELATE…..i remember when i got heartbroken…….. couldn’t stop the tears..for over a year …………but whatever happens happens for good…….but i still love him soooo much..it breaks my heart to even look at his face……… ;-(

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