Apr 12 2014

Stuck without Sunshine

Published by at 7:13 am under Lost Love Poems

…Blarin’ the music,
Starin’ in the mirror,
I swear this house is haunted,
Cause I swear I still can hear her,

All of my time spent staring down the hallway,
Wondering what happened to the vision of our yesterday,
Expecting you to come back and save me from my sanity,
Expecting you to snap back and come back to reality,
Tragedy; tragically gone but not from my memory,
Haunted by the memories we’ve shared through out our history,
They’re gone with the wind
Gone through time,
They say that it gets better when you lay it in a rhyme,
They say that it gets better if I block you from my mind,
But what they say just doesn’t matter cause you were a one of a kind,
It’s like their blind,
Stuck in time,
Stuck without Sunshine.

This post was submitted by Dennis.

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5 Responses to “Stuck without Sunshine”

  1. adminon 12 Apr 2014 at 7:18 am

    awesome poem Dennis
    Thanks :)

  2. pixieon 12 Apr 2014 at 10:21 am

    Amazing poem.
    I love the use of the ellipse at the start of the poem, seems quite controversial in terms of general poetic devices seeing as I don’t believe I’ve ever seen anybody use it quite in that way.
    The rhyming is formless, almost. As if you’ve done away with normal ideas regarding rhyme scenes and patterns and have just put down the words as they needed to be written.
    “Tragedy; tragically gone but not from my memory,
    Haunted by the memories we’ve shared through out our history,”
    These lines are incredible. I found myself rereading them over and over again.

    “But what they say just doesn’t matter cause you were a one of a kind,
    It’s like THEY’RE blind,
    Stuck in time,
    Stuck without Sunshine.”
    Those lines were also absolutely amazing.

    Thank you for posting :3

  3. pixieon 12 Apr 2014 at 11:33 am

    schemes* :p not scenes.

  4. meghanon 13 Apr 2014 at 12:45 am

    wow, dennis I love your poems. I get instant feels…wish I could dissect this like pixie but oh well, for now all I’ll say is wowzers that was an awesome poem

  5. Dennison 15 Apr 2014 at 3:36 am

    Thanks guys! 8)

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