Sep 24 2011

The Triangle of our Hearts

Published by at 2:34 am under Teenage Love Poems

Numbers on my forehead reveal the errors I’ve made,
My heart and courage covered and masked by the tempted veil.

Now we all follow the unwritten rules,

Rules as empty as a mirror for a mole.

We seek for a leader to guide us through,
When what we are missing is the knowledge we once knew.

This wisdom comes not from the senses
And not from synthetic words.

But instead it comes from the hardwired system deep within.
The one stained upon our skin.
The very one that cannot be cut, stolen, or given to say.
An unacknowledged gift for the ignorant to misunderstand.
A feeling that awakens at the dawn of life itself.
Slowly beating and rocking to the tempo of the ones that have lived before us.
The triangle that brings masses together.
Three words that shape our hearts.
Passion, commitment, and love.

This post was submitted by anonymouss.

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5 Responses to “The Triangle of our Hearts”

  1. serena93on 15 Nov 2011 at 11:22 pm

    I must say it makes me laugh the poems that people like on this sight and rate and comment on, the cheesey typical “love poems” then a poet like you comes along and theres no reaction. I love your work, your original, creative and expressive through every shade, no black and white here your covering the grey. thank you, your amazing

  2. anonymousson 16 Nov 2011 at 9:13 pm

    I dont know what to say, except that im so happy you like my poems! You’re too nice! And I don’t think it’s me thats creative, cuz i dont control the way you process things, you’re the one that makes sense of it all. So this situation is backwards, I should be thanking you for being… your awesomeness self :D

  3. serena93on 16 Nov 2011 at 11:52 pm

    haha well heres to us both reading between the lines then. we have a similar writing style but yours is just better :P check out my work :D

  4. anonymousson 17 Nov 2011 at 12:04 am

    :woot: cheers!! Nah, its pretty stupid actually :P
    I think i sound pretty lame.
    I will check it out, check it ALL out.

  5. StarfireBluestoneon 17 Jul 2012 at 5:59 am

    never put yourself down, this was really, really well written!!!

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