Oct 25 2011

A body falling

Published by at 1:53 pm under Lost Love Poems

There was noise
But I couldn’t hear it
Everything was white, one low keening filling my head

I was flailing
But no matter how hard I hit, I never got free
I was bound, held, fastened. But yet there was no way out

There was blood.
It was coating my body
It was all over the floor. It was on my hands, in my hair, on my face

There was a shot
Something loud, a swish of air
One desperate pull of breath as I fought with everything inside of me

A body falling
Lifelessness. Hope lost.
His body went down, collapsing, falling. Gone.

I could hear screams
Wrenching through my body.
Screams of agony and heartache. Loud screams, rendering the night speechless

I remember running
Remember falling to my knees
Thick metallic blood. Desperation. Fear. Loss.

My eyes glued to his
My body shaking, my throat aching
I saw him. I saw the blood. I saw the wound. I saw no life

I was waiting
For him to blink. For him to stand up
Hollowness. Time passed as nothing moved

Everything was still as I waited
No sounds. No screams. No sobs
My eyes were blurred as I waited for him to get up

He never did

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4 responses so far

4 Responses to “A body falling”

  1. starduston 08 Dec 2011 at 11:43 pm

    Love this! You are the best poet on this site!!!! 😀

  2. pixieon 09 Dec 2011 at 6:49 am

    Thank you for all of your comments :p

  3. xxPlagueRatxxon 11 Dec 2011 at 2:00 am

    this is amazing, a very well golly done:3

  4. pixieon 11 Dec 2011 at 8:11 am

    Thank you ^_^

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