Oct 25 2011
A body falling
Noise
There was noise
But I couldn’t hear it
Everything was white, one low keening filling my head
Flailing
I was flailing
But no matter how hard I hit, I never got free
I was bound, held, fastened. But yet there was no way out
Blood
There was blood.
It was coating my body
It was all over the floor. It was on my hands, in my hair, on my face
Bang
There was a shot
Something loud, a swish of air
One desperate pull of breath as I fought with everything inside of me
Thump
A body falling
Lifelessness. Hope lost.
His body went down, collapsing, falling. Gone.
Screams
I could hear screams
Wrenching through my body.
Screams of agony and heartache. Loud screams, rendering the night speechless
Running
I remember running
Remember falling to my knees
Thick metallic blood. Desperation. Fear. Loss.
Staring
My eyes glued to his
My body shaking, my throat aching
I saw him. I saw the blood. I saw the wound. I saw no life
Waiting
I was waiting
For him to blink. For him to stand up
Hollowness. Time passed as nothing moved
Silence
Everything was still as I waited
No sounds. No screams. No sobs
My eyes were blurred as I waited for him to get up
He never did
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