Jun 03 2005

A girl I knew

Published by at 3:12 pm under Sad Love Poems

A girl I knew

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There was a girl that I once knew,
She opened up a world to me,
A girl that when with, it seemed time flew,
A world only me and her could see,

Her love it seemed would never end,
Until her outlook took a bend,
I didn’t understand or see,
How now her love could just not be,

Her love it made me sad and mad,
My jealously took a tole on us,
But happiness is what I had,
Even though It made me cuss,

Her beauty could stun a blinded man,
A celebrity with just one fan,
I watched her fall asleep at night,
Even though it didn’t seem right,

Friends would get right in our way,
It made me mad at times,
I started hating what they’d say,
A fuel for all my rhymes,

Her smarts could kill an able wise man,
So off to college she then ran,
I watched no one all through the night,
Even though it didn’t see right,

I’d sit and think of her and me,
And how perfect our life could be,
But prefect would need love from both sides,
And deep inside that girl it hides,

Her love could taunt just any man,
But a man can do just what he can,
So I sit and think all though the night,
It doesn’t matter if its right.
-Dennis Mayer

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21 Responses to “A girl I knew”

  1. # Gueston 11 Oct 2005 at 11:10 am

    i thought it was pretty darn good good job

  2. # Gueston 14 Nov 2005 at 1:51 pm

    awesome poem–sounds like my own love history–except i am the girl who left for school–i\’m impressed that you express your feelings so well!!

  3. # Gueston 01 Nov 2005 at 5:47 pm

    Wow, i was so impressed, i love poetry and your poem was really good, great job.

  4. # Gueston 28 Jul 2005 at 4:11 pm

    hey Dennis Mayer..

    u worte such a beautifull poem i luv Shakespeare buh now i think i might jus fall in love with your poems!

  5. # Gueston 05 Dec 2005 at 1:55 am

    Dennis… I find it unlikely that you\’ll even get ahold of this for some reason… But your words touch me in a way hard to describe. I\’m young, but aspire to call myself somewhat of a poet… and if you get this, or feel like it really, my e-mail address is [email protected].

    I\’m not gay… and this isn\’t some kind of internet rape attempt. But I\’d like to hear more of your words if they are available… and maybe even have you hear mine if you\’ve got the time. Whether you could give me imput on my poetry, or just share conversation about the feelings you have obtained, which feel so strong and present in MY current life, I can foresee only good to come from it.

    So yeah… if you get this…
    [email protected]

    Hit it up?

  6. # Gueston 04 Feb 2006 at 9:06 am

    wow wat a great poem its hard isnt it just to think u are a specail person ad she should of saw that

  7. # Gueston 09 Feb 2006 at 1:51 pm

    omg this is like the best poem ever i love it[B]null[/B]

  8. # Gueston 01 Mar 2006 at 9:31 am

    This poem made me think of what happen to me with my girl.

  9. # Gueston 04 May 2006 at 1:34 pm

    hey…just wanted to say that I luvd d poem…dnt really read poems…but this poem in particular reminds me of what happened to me a few dayz ago 🙁

  10. # Gueston 01 May 2006 at 11:45 am

    \’\’Her beauty could stun a blinded man,\’\’..lovee dat line along with the whole poem! very touchinnn keep it up!

  11. # Gueston 07 Jul 2006 at 1:32 am

    I just wanted to say i enjoyed the poem it made me think of my love and how he makes me feel

  12. # Gueston 06 Aug 2006 at 3:45 pm

    [I]NNIICCEE PPOOEEMMSS[/I]

  13. # Gueston 15 Oct 2006 at 2:15 am

    i like this poem,,, who was the girl?

  14. # Gueston 26 Nov 2006 at 6:39 am

    this poem means alot its hurttin me alot an to people who understand whats going on i like ur poem alot

  15. # emilyon 14 Dec 2006 at 8:30 pm

    that was very nice i really felt inspired to write my own poem it seems like you really loved her hopefully you find a good love agian so i can read a happy love poem from you instead of a sad one well be happy youve always got your words to express the way you feel thanks for the inspiration

  16. # Rachel: A Poetic Dreamer withon 17 Feb 2007 at 5:40 pm

    I liked it but it was a bit off rhythm. It went from every other line rhyming to two lines rhyming together and all. I don\\\’t know, if the rhythm didn\\\’t change, I would have really liked it, but it was just slightly above average. 🙂

  17. # BIZon 10 Mar 2007 at 5:47 pm

    you have written this so well and i can feel every word in your poem with the respect it deserves as i am experiencing the excat same thing in my life now. i sometimes wonder if i am doing the right thing by loving her even though she loves someone else? my head says no, but my heart says yes. i hope we can communicate, for pain is a weak concept.

  18. # lizon 30 Nov 2007 at 7:08 pm

    hey,
    reading this made me rememeber about my ex-boyfriend.

  19. # Mikeon 14 May 2008 at 4:25 am

    This was great. I feel the pain, it is what I went through and still going through it.

  20. # jeanieon 06 Jun 2008 at 12:33 am

    that is what my love did to me he left me for his friends and other reasons i can\’t say.

  21. # Nameon 19 May 2010 at 8:51 pm

    I was looking for poems with meaning for a school assiment and I read this 1 an it just touch me so deep. I really hope you get this girl or another girl who thinks your so special and wants you in her life 🙂

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