Sep 28 2006

A Little Smile

Published by at 8:40 am under Missing you Love Poems

A Little Smile

Will you smile for me?
I’m feeling a little weak,
the light’s gone from my world.
I need to see your smile.
To get through another day,
to walk past all the hurt.

Please smile for me.
Part the clouds of grey,
and calm the stormy sea.
Smile that caring smile of yours.
Make the flowers bloom,
and the sun to rise.

It warms my heart,
and melts the pain and sorrow.
And above all things magical,
unbelievable, incredible, and impossible,
it makes me smile too

1 Star2 Stars3 Stars4 Stars5 Stars (1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)

35 responses so far

35 Responses to “A Little Smile”

  1. Gueston 04 Oct 2006 at 8:56 pm

    loved it!

  2. Gueston 31 Oct 2006 at 9:22 am

    that was so sweet! i love it!

  3. jenineon 30 Nov 2006 at 6:39 pm

    [font color = hotpink]
    how cute
    [/CODE] :cry

  4. jessicaon 15 Dec 2006 at 5:34 pm

    :zzz thanks that really touched me in lots of ways…keep writing!!

  5. Mrs.MC DUFFYon 24 Jan 2007 at 1:22 pm


  6. cindyon 31 Jan 2007 at 12:10 pm

    [I]null[/I] a sweet poem

  7. Jessicaon 23 Mar 2007 at 8:47 pm

    This poem is really sweet because the smile of someone you really care for can brighten your day even when nothing else seems to :p

  8. Rachelon 23 Mar 2007 at 11:53 pm

    Thank-you all so much! I am the writer of this piece, can you believe I was 17 when I wrote this? My name is Rachel, nice to meet you all! ^_^

  9. veronica murilloon 19 May 2007 at 1:08 pm


  10. ANNEon 22 Aug 2007 at 3:08 am


  11. sanaon 07 Sep 2007 at 8:38 pm

    luved the poem a lot especially because i am missin some one a lot now u rock 🙂 :sigh

  12. Amberon 12 Sep 2007 at 1:00 am

    :cry That is such a pretty poem! It made me think of my boyfriend. I haven\’t seen him in a while but when I picture him in my mind he\’s smiling \’cause he is always smiling. You have made my day!

  13. Danielleon 04 Oct 2007 at 5:24 pm

    :cry i love it

  14. Ashleyon 21 Oct 2007 at 2:53 pm

    I really enjoyed this poem, It reminded me of my boyfriend because he is what I need to get through each day at school. Things have been rough between us lately, but getting better. For English class we are supposed to find a poem that relates to who we are, then memorize it, then present it to the class on video. I am definitly going to use this poem if you don\’t mind, and don\’t worry it isn\’t plagerism I am putting your name on it XD, but yea I have been searching for three days now to find a poem to represent me and finally I found one. Thanks so much!

  15. brittneyon 28 Nov 2007 at 11:33 am

    aWwhH… tHiS PoEm iS So cUtE, I AbSolUtElY AdOrE It! i cAn rElAtE To iT sO MuCh WhEnEvEr iM WiTh mY BoYfRiEnD iM CoNsTaNtLy sMiLiNg tOO. :grin

  16. Shilzon 15 Feb 2008 at 6:10 pm

    WOW this is amazing… wat a strong poem 🙂 i love ittttttttttt…………….

  17. Dick McScrewon 27 Feb 2008 at 11:34 am

    :cry :eek :upset :zzz :sigh 🙁 😡 😕 :roll 🙂 :grin 8) 😉 :p

  18. Noraaon 26 Mar 2008 at 6:53 am

    There are too much beautiful love poems,I like them ,,Well,godd luck to everybodyy,Bye,Bye :grin

  19. personon 16 Apr 2008 at 5:20 pm

    it was retarted. i hate it. you suck. learn how to write better poetry loser. who the frig writes a poem about \” a smile\”? no one cares. and if you people do care then you also have some problems. 🙁

  20. Racheton 21 Apr 2008 at 9:49 pm

    Hello. I am Rachel, the writer of this poem. I have loved reading all your comments, they\’ve made me very happy. But this last comment, this \”flame\”, is far from making anyone feel good. I can take a little critisism. But \”I hate you, you suck\” and so on, it\’s not a comment. It\’s not even critisism. If you don\’t like this kind of poetry, then don\’t read it. If you don\’t like this poem in particular, then that\’s okay. If you have something constructive to say, a reason you don\’t like something, that\’s fine. But calling me a loser and telling me that I have problems… Who\’s the one with problems, then? -_- Everyone else, thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them very much. ^_^

  21. Rachelon 22 Apr 2008 at 2:48 am

    I don\’t want to hear such name-calling. How can I unpost this poem?

  22. Rachelon 22 Apr 2008 at 2:50 am

    I don\’t like such name-calling. How do I un-post this poem?

  23. Rachelon 22 Apr 2008 at 2:51 am

    I don\’t like such name-calling. How do I un post this poem?

  24. D1ABLAon 16 May 2008 at 9:19 pm


  25. allenon 03 Jun 2008 at 1:32 am

    i need to get a famouse poem with an evaulation
    i was jsut wondering if u can gimme ur full name so i can make it look famouse instead of just some random person

  26. Raeon 09 Jun 2008 at 2:08 pm

    🙂 i loved this peom.

  27. noraaaa. ♥on 09 Jun 2008 at 2:10 pm

    awesome poem girl.
    keep it up.

  28. melissaon 14 Jun 2008 at 2:35 pm

    I love this poem, me and my long time partner have just broken up and he has such an amazing smile. I feel the poem is about him. The writer is truly talented.

    Melissa x

  29. Yagurlmimion 27 Aug 2008 at 11:56 am

    :sigh i really liked dis poem it was cute

  30. anabellon 16 Oct 2008 at 11:30 am

    I can Relate to alot of these poems. It\’s a warm feeling to know that you\’re not alone. I enjoyed reading these poets work of art. Thank you. You\’ve made it easier to just let go. 🙂

  31. cityandcolouron 30 Jan 2009 at 3:44 pm

    :sigh Amazing writer

  32. kerryon 02 Apr 2009 at 6:52 pm

    I couldn\’t have said it better myself….this poem is fantastic and it was just what I need to lift my spirits….thanks. 🙂

  33. tapasshreeon 02 Mar 2010 at 4:37 am


  34. iwait4you4everon 30 Sep 2010 at 10:15 am

    all i can say is inspiring 😀

  35. Baby Girlon 10 Jan 2012 at 8:46 pm

    I Really Love This Poem , This Reminds Me When I Told My BoyFriend To Hold His Head Up And ” SMILE ” My Day Gets Better And Better Once He Smiles For Me <3 :love: ;-( 😀 ^_^ I SO LOVE THIS POEM ALOOOOT Great Job

Trackback URI | Comments RSS

Leave a Reply