Nov 22 2011
A Moment In Time
In the vast expanse of the meadow
I watched the stars appear in the sky
musing on how the day’s been
oh let it hasten to an end.
Stars whirl and flee
and kiss the dewy grass goodnight
how I wish I were the silhouette of the lone tree
so that the whisper of the soft breeze too
would sing me to sleep tonight.
The stars sense my desire
and make my wish come true
they summon the fireflies to convey it
and light up my world.
You walk to my shadow
your touch sends a shudder up my spine
I turn around into your ardent smile
oh you’ve transformed my whole life.
Deep down, you discern my desire
and make my wish come true
holding my hand next to your heart
you light me up
with the warmth of your love.
‘Tis a moment in time
I’ll cherish all through.
This post was submitted by AWalter.
(5 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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Very good. You are very talented. I loved it, from beginning to end.
i agree, your use of imagery is outstanding, jaw dropping in fact.
Your mature writing style is a breath of fresh air, i enjoyed every moment of it.
keep it up!
Thanks guys!!
it was really awesome…………………vaise kuch chakkar to nahi h…itni intense feelings…??:):o
@ akanksha: class X me likhi thi… U would’ve known… 😉
Its awesome… It flows really well.
Thanx everyone!!