Nov 22 2011

A Moment In Time

Published by at 2:25 am under Forever Love Poems

In the vast expanse of the meadow
I watched the stars appear in the sky
musing on how the day’s been
oh let it hasten to an end.

Stars whirl and flee
and kiss the dewy grass goodnight
how I wish I were the silhouette of the lone tree
so that the whisper of the soft breeze too
would sing me to sleep tonight.

The stars sense my desire
and make my wish come true
they summon the fireflies to convey it
and light up my world.

You walk to my shadow
your touch sends a shudder up my spine
I turn around into your ardent smile
oh you’ve transformed my whole life.

Deep down, you discern my desire
and make my wish come true
holding my hand next to your heart
you light me up
with the warmth of your love.

‘Tis a moment in time
I’ll cherish all through.

This post was submitted by AWalter.

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7 Responses to “A Moment In Time”

  1. Maxon 22 Nov 2011 at 7:55 pm

    Very good. You are very talented. I loved it, from beginning to end.

  2. serena93on 22 Nov 2011 at 8:37 pm

    i agree, your use of imagery is outstanding, jaw dropping in fact.
    Your mature writing style is a breath of fresh air, i enjoyed every moment of it.
    keep it up!

  3. AWalteron 24 Nov 2011 at 12:21 pm

    Thanks guys!!

  4. Akankshaon 30 Nov 2011 at 12:19 pm

    it was really awesome…………………vaise kuch chakkar to nahi h…itni intense feelings…??:):o

  5. AWalteron 11 Dec 2011 at 1:54 pm

    @ akanksha: class X me likhi thi… U would’ve known… 😉

  6. Mandeepon 20 Dec 2011 at 6:51 am

    Its awesome… It flows really well.

  7. AWalteron 10 Sep 2012 at 1:30 pm

    Thanx everyone!!

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