May 28 2011

Ashes to ashes

Published by at 10:42 am under Goodbye Poems

ashes to ashes
dust to dust
i deny ur love
i know it’s lust

like calls to like
blood to blood
u beg for mercy
i overflood

my sould calls to urs
my heart shies away
i dont trust u and
dont know what to say

heaven and hell
love and hate
i think little of u
this is fate

This post was submitted by pixie.

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6 Responses to “Ashes to ashes”

  1. Bri!:)on 01 Jun 2011 at 4:33 pm

    Do these poems just flow out of you? ha when i write poems they just sound dumb. but yours.. make sense hah mine seem to have no meaning! so Kudos!:)

  2. pixieon 01 Jun 2011 at 6:07 pm

    thank you so very much!
    i write what im thinking, is all
    ^_^

  3. Katarinaon 10 Jul 2011 at 6:57 pm

    This makes no sense at all. What were you even trying to say???

  4. pixieon 14 Jul 2011 at 5:02 pm

    It doesn’t have to make sense. It has a different meaning to everyone.

  5. serena93on 14 Jul 2011 at 10:35 pm

    I like it, its simple but it works (:
    But I think maybe presentation-wise it might have looked a little tidier if you wrote ‘you’ instead of ‘u’.
    But other than that awesome job 😀

  6. pixieon 15 Jul 2011 at 9:08 am

    Thank you. I have been working on that. :p

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