Nov 20 2011

Beaten

Published by at 3:31 am under emo Poems

Broken heart, silent night
Frozen terror, brutal fight
Painful tears, scorching blade
Screaming as I start to fade

Tiny patters, running feet
Secrets kept, admit defeat
Tempting sorrow, no remorse
Thrashing round with violent force

Beaten body, scarlet blood
Darkened pathways, raging flood
Creeping conscience, building fear
Trembling because Death is near

Turning keys, slamming doors
Falling down, ice cold floors
Coming closer, flickering flame
Believing now that she is tame

Threatening actions, haunting me
Death is here now, count to three
Weakened muscles, jumping pulse
Knowing now that truths are false

Talking slowly, think I’ll care?
Decide defiance, shooting glares
Rhytmic rocking, want relief
Grinning with these blood soaked teeth

Fearless taunting, accepting death
Wincing slightly, one more breath
Close my eyes, craving peace
Wanting this but I’m released

Call my name, looking down
No more hits, no more sound
Scrambling back, running fast
Thinking freedom found at last

One more step, see the sun
Open doors, urge to run
Clutching hands, falling down
Picking me up from the ground

Hopeless crying, curse the world
Wanted heat, instead got cold
Lifeless pupils, no-one there
Yelling that this game’s unfair

Agony, one more time
Scarred mind, heinous crime
Refuse to fight, welcome pain
Hoping this time I’ll be slain

Strangest mercy, timeless lock
Faded soul, stop the clock
One last blink, relieved sigh
Smiling once before I die

This post was submitted by pixie.

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10 responses so far

10 Responses to “Beaten”

  1. SWeet.Candyies**on 21 Nov 2011 at 1:48 am

    Beautiful and deep
    YUr an awesome peom

  2. SWeet.Candyies**on 21 Nov 2011 at 1:48 am

    poet

  3. Maxon 21 Nov 2011 at 4:00 am

    I disagree with you.

    It’s not deep; I see, hear, nor feel any essence coming from her.

    It’s just a collection of characters with no sense whatsoever.
    I wasn’t dragged in, on the opposite I was utterly bored.

    And that is my truth. Admire it, despise it? It doesn’t bother me…

    Please find some other subject to write about, or stop writing at all.

    Yes it’s difficult to express yourself, you need to train your mind. Which you clearly have failed at.

    We all have potential you know, whether in some of us, us the humans, is more innate than others it’s up to chance, but you can still work with the couple of neurons you were born with. Connections, that’s all you need.

  4. pixieon 21 Nov 2011 at 11:59 am

    Do you know what’s sad? You think it’s crap, yet you sit here, wasting time, reading it. Do u have nothing better to do, Max?
    Oh, and thank you SWeet.Candyies for reading and for the kind comment.

  5. MissDemonXon 21 Nov 2011 at 5:46 pm

    First of all Pixie i love it i got hooked on the first line its really good and very expressive, secondly max who do you think you are criticizing people for what they feel to be good and others might think too, you probably have a lot of faults yourself.

  6. SWeet.Candyies**on 21 Nov 2011 at 6:59 pm

    Pixie>>>Thank you:)
    Max >>You are truely and human being that needs some serious help
    You must have some type of mental disorder if you can’t understand that no one want you here and that you are annoying as f***
    I’ve said many time ‘AND I GUESS I HAVE TO SAY IT AGAIN’
    F*** OFF

  7. pixieon 21 Nov 2011 at 7:02 pm

    Thank you so much for reading :p

  8. SWeet.Candyies**on 21 Nov 2011 at 7:12 pm

    Yur wellcome HUNN:)

  9. Shyon 26 Nov 2011 at 5:18 pm

    I love how each line flows together it’s really good

  10. pixieon 26 Nov 2011 at 5:25 pm

    Thank you for the kind comment.

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