Dec 18 2005
Beautiful Irony
Beautiful Irony
By Jennifer Holcomb
I begged you to love me
It couldn’t be done
emotion, passion, intimacy-you showed me none
I’m through trying now, my efforts exhausted my drive
The beautiful irony is now you need me in your life
Now you love me, it hit you head on
You show your passion, your fatal flaw is gone
Why do I feel this restless disgust
I should be happy, but leave you I must
I’m not fully happy, I’m searching for more
Maybe I’m destined to be dissatisfied, eternally bored
What answers are there–I pray to the Lord
The sadness engulfs me, it tightens my chest
I hate myself for hurting you, for looking at the rest
You’re a wonderful person, maybe it is you
Maybe you ARE the one, maybe I won’t see it till your gone
I’m not sure of the outcome, but I know one thing
This game is definitely through
You didn’t love me, now I can’t love you.
I [B]LOVE[/B] It.
Ha, I\’ve been throughthe same thing.
good job.
It was very accurate actually!
THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL IT HAS SO MUCH MEANING (so lil words so much meaning on one page)
THAT IS AWSOME I LOVE THAT POEM
thats exactly whats happened to me.i love this poem, its my life in text
oh my god, i realy loved it you know exactly what to say and how life is realy is!
this is the bomb. i mean grrrrrrrreat job to the young lady that wrote this
I just want to say thank you. U said everything I couldn\’t put into words.
send me some info on Jenifer Holcomb please someone.. anyone.. help meeee..
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this is so coool! it actually speaks my mind!
I THINK YOU\’VE BEEN THROUGH WHAT I\’VE BEEN THROUGH, IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY PLACED, EXQUISITE, MARVELOUS, SIZZLING HOT!!!!!!
I love this poem.. It reflects what i am going through right at this moment. This poem is really touching and so true!!!! Thanks…
amazing it captures true feeling and I love it.
amazing it captures true feeling and I love it.
o my god that is the greatest poem
this was hell good
:p
I love this poem… it reminds me of my ex!!! It is the best poem i\’ve ever read!! 🙂
the most amazing thing i have ever read.
i really love the poem you can scence the emotion from when the writer. than you for this poem i am using it for a project. it is my best find yet.
It was sad, really sad.. because it rings so true in my current situation .. excellent poem in nailing my emotional state.
dam its great like said b4 it has so much meaning it something i would never 4get it really good you can feel wut you were feeling at the moment. i swear its something ive been though and youll b able to get over it dont worry its hard but i think you can well just keep on writting stuff like this and belive me i think youll b 1 of the best poem people well great job and keep up. 🙂 :cry oh ps it mad me cry!!!
[B]Oh My Goodness. This Poem, I Can Fully Relate To. I Love It.[/B] 🙂 :cry :grin
wow….this is beautiful….i can relate to it so well…..you have talent…use it to its full extent!
wonder if its you
I have looked for you for 10 years I hope this is the right j. holcomb did you live in peoria or kenosha? 🙂
:cry I know exactly what you are talkn bout cause my ex called me and loves me now after she cheated on me :sigh
This piece is emmaculate, I think at one point in all of lives we all had that \”ex\” who came back begging for foregivness. It\’s one of the best feelings ever, especially when you could care less about them.
this poem is great
i can relate 2 it cus the same thing happend 2 me
the guy was a real jerk :cry :cry
I love this poem…i just got out a relationship like this…and he is still trying to talk to me…i gave him everything i had but he didnt want it so im through
:cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry it was really true! I love this POEM! Awsome![B]Awsome[/B]
Wow I really love this poem and i can relate ..i just got out of a rlationship were i loved him for 2 years and got nothing and now that i\’m done he\’s ready to give it all
This Poems beautiful, i love it!
i just got out of a 6 year relationship where i gave my all. Now iv given up giving, he wants me
[B]I LOOOOOOOOVVEEE ITTTTT ! ♥[/B]
today i barely got a girl that i have been chasing after for years! and she dumped my in two hours. i felt terrible. and this poem is so beatiful that it put a smile on my face i didn\’t think i would see for a long time 🙂
:sigh
I can relate to this poem in more ways than one. I\’m only 15 years young nd I have a lot to learn yet I\’ve been through this numerous times. Heartbreak is my everyday feeling. I put on a smile and a little laugh here and there, but in the inside my heart is crying and screaming in pain.
omg this is so true i just got out of the relationship and its really tough to deal with and now he wants me back
[I]darn. i can totally relate. me and this guy broke up last year and i started dating another guy. once i dumped this other guy, my old boyfriend texted me and told me he wanted me back. but i was over him but i took him because i wanted to get over the other guy. now im in love with him again but he hasnt changed and he\’s still a jerk. im stuck between the both of them. my heart is suffering two diffrent types of ache.[/I] :upset
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this describes how i feel! ahh :\'(
This would make a great song! Mind if I use it?
damn that was good
uttley brilliant
i love this poem i have been through the same thing also… 8)
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Jennifer ~ I realize you posted this a couple yrs back but I just came upon it & wanted to commend you on the exemplary job. Amen…you said it for us all lady & so elegantly, right to the point. I hope you’re still writing because what you convey in your poetry is powerful. Love this poem. Wishing you all the best.