Jan 31 2011
Blind eyes
Every where I go every thing I do I seem to keep thanking of you, no matter what people say or what people do my mind is still thinking of you, I see your dirty blond hair moving in the wind I see your angel blue eye’s starring in to mine, you take my breath away with every single kiss, my heart flutters every time we touch, you’re the one for me but you are to blind to see cause you’ve been hurt many times before but open your eye’s and see before I am no more. I tried so hard to show you I care but you pushed me away like I was never there, so as I end this poem I have to say I’m taking my love back cause you just don’t want it anyway, I really tried to meet your needs but it takes two not just me, so as I say good bye I want you to know I did Love You more than you will ever know.
By: CHAD E. LYONS.
WoW u on point.
Damn, this is sick!(in the awesomeness way)
Would had appriciated it more if it had been layed out in stanzas. I could still recognize the rhyming though, which means your sentences were set up nicely.