Oct 06 2011
Boyfriend
Timothy we met
in a dance hall.
And boy did I fall,
For your handsome
looks and smile.
You had such charm
and so much style.
You bowled me over with
your humor and wit,
And on top of all that
you’re very fit.
Oct 06 2011
Timothy we met
in a dance hall.
And boy did I fall,
For your handsome
looks and smile.
You had such charm
and so much style.
You bowled me over with
your humor and wit,
And on top of all that
you’re very fit.
although its not much of a poem but its so nice and sweet that is published it anyway ..cheers 😀
Seems like you tried a lil too hard on the rhyming.
Just spill out your feelings & if rhyme then you rhyme.
Just say how you feel & it’ll sound better
but this is cute ! 😀