Jun 23 2011
Can i just be with you nan
I can’t sleep,
Every night, there will be a tear,
I need you to hold me,
I need you here.
I will cry every night,
just wishing you were the one,
to hold me tight.
But you’ve died,
and i wish i died too,
i wish it would happen,
i just want to be with you.
I’m trying my best to make you proud of me,
I’ve always wanted to make you happy.
But now i see,
what a fail i can be.
I know you can see me,
you watch me everday,
but i cant care anymore,
you’re too far away.
It’s nearly your birthday,
do you know how much this kills,
All this pain building up inside me,
that all i can feel.
Can i just be with you … nan
its a nice poem… one can feel that sorrow, loneliness and regret reverberate in every line.. very touching indeed…