Nov 05 2011
Can’t have you.
i’m sorry i’m not perfect.
i’m sorry i’m here.
i’m sorry i didn’t end this
i couldn’t disappear.
i’m sorry that i’ve fallen
for you
i have
i don’t know why
i let myself fall
for a guy like yourself.
i could die
i want you to know
how i feel
and why
i would
but now i want to cry.
because i know i can’t have you
and that hurts me inside.
to know that i’ve fallen
for this untouchable guy.
(3 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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o: emily did u write this poem? 😉 😮
:sick: wow… ur poems suck.
the poem is amazing. the only thing that sucks here is your momma Max. get a life and stop belittling other peoples art just because you can’t create anything good of your own.
Ha, how considerate of you to mock yourself by calling this “art”. You have done my work for me. Thank you 🙂
Max
the saying goes, “a wise man speaks because he has something to say, a fool speaks because he has to say something.” considering you have nothing wise/insightful to say you must be the fool that has to speak only to hear his own voice because nobody else wants to hear it. you must live a very sad/meaningless life if you get your pleasures out of insulting other peoples work. of all the websites on this internet you choose to come here and comment where you aren’t wanted. but by the looks of it, even in your real life you probably aren’t wanted. for that i pity you. and this is the last comment i shall make to you because you truly are not worth my time.
Huh. How tragic. I guess you expect me to bow at your audacity of your attempt to diagnose a stranger. Well, at least you don’t seem upset, which is impressive actually. Since I’ve had to deal with inane people on here. But I agree with you on that enough is enough. I enjoyed the reactions though, if only I could’ve seen their faces! And I pass on the pity, you can keep it to yourself.
BTW I was just being honest, most of the poems here are disgusting.
max, i never called this art, so don’t try to make up words for something that you don’t know the intention behind, but also, thankyou for being honest and expressing your opinion. and thankyou to all the other readers:3
Poems…art that has the ability to bring the best and worst out of it’s readers – and just so splendid that people are callous enough to be outward about what nerve it struck with them. Projection…brought out by poetry…is beautiful. This poem, is beautiful.