Jun 25 2011
Cold Fire
Every second I see you is another second spent standing in flames.
You can try and apologize but you know I cannot be tamed.
If it wasn’t for you I wouldn’t be sitting alone at lunch or running around teary eyed a bunch.
You told me you’d never hurt me that I was the perfect guy. But now you can’t even talk to me and I don’t see why.
I look over my shoulder and see you walking again and suddenly I’m standing in flames trapped and the pain is increased by a magnitude of ten.
You laugh and smile as he wraps his arms around you and kisses you slightly. I turn away feeling my breath leave me and my chest heave tightly.
I just wanna escape and never return so I never have to see that beautiful smile and feel myself in the flamesas I burn.
I’m not suicidal and I’m not even depressed, I’m just all alone in the world, and you took part of me away when you left.
I try and forget the pain, and forget the hurting, but the thoughts by themselves are too burdening.
Finally I just accept the feelings, and embrace the pain. It all drifts away and starts to unfold.I stand now not in warm fire, but cold.
love the theme. cold fire, i mean. says so much about the relationship
it also tells me much about ur feelings
the emotions in this r very boldly expressed
good rhyming – its almost… lyrical
nicely done
You’re a really good writer, this poem blew me away
awehh I love this poem… I’ve felt the same way before.. Makes me want to cry ;-(
Very beautiful and well…. Amazing :angel: