Aug 23 2011
Come Back for Me
Silence.
Says.
More.
Than.
A.
Thousand.
Words.
And.
It.
Has.
Talked.
To.
Me.
She.
Said.
That.
You.
Vanished.
No.
Goodbye.
No.
Letter.
Or.
Note.
Just.
Vanished.
It.
Might.
Have.
Been.
Me.
Something.
I.
Did.
Something.
I.
Said.
But.
I’ll.
Wait.
Here.
Here.
The.
Place.
You.
Mind.
Has.
Erased.
My.
Arms.
Wide.
Open.
Will.
Never.
Close.
My.
Puckered.
Lips.
Won’t.
Move.
An.
Inch.
I’ll.
Wait.
Until.
Forever.
Ends.
And.
A.
Day.
More.
For.
Your.
Return.
For.
I.
Cannot.
Leave.
Behind.
The.
Past.
As.
The.
Past.
So.
I’ll.
Crouch.
In.
This.
Corner.
Over.
Here.
Don’t.
You.
Forget.
And.
Then.
Once.
Again.
I.
Can.
Go.
On.
But.
Until.
That.
Day.
I’m.
Frozen.
Hoping.
That.
You’ll.
Come.
Back.
For.
Me.
(5 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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Oh gawd…
The full stops, the emphasis…
It was all done very well. Each word punctuated perfectly.
The power, the emotions… it was nearly overwhelming.
Great poem.
Thanks so muuuuuch.
it was amateurish though. Not really methaphorllically it was more of just saying things.
thank you again though. Your compliment made my day sweet as honey and as happy as a monkey.