Love Poems & Poetry

Aug 02 2011

Dancing in Veil

Dancing in veil
Face unseen
Crying to the sky
Conscience unclean
Wiping her tears
Under crystal light
She dances in circles
All through the night
The sun never rises
The moon does disapear
The stars their shining
But oh so sheer
No one to guide her
No one to take her back home
She knows not where she’s going
Only that she’s alone

This post was submitted by tiffanynichole.

(2 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)

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5 Responses to “Dancing in Veil”

1. # pixieon 02 Aug 2011 at 6:22 pm

   It’s .. amazing. The rhyming pattern was great, as was the ending (which, I’ve got to say, was one of the best and most riveting I have ever had the honour of reading).
   The title, too, was stunning.
   And your vocab was delightfully different and the words you used seemed to fit perfectly with your message.

2. # serena93on 02 Aug 2011 at 8:32 pm

   beautiful! an absolutly stunning peice! thank you

3. # tiffanynicholeon 02 Aug 2011 at 11:01 pm

   Thank you all so much!!! Your compliments mean so much to me!

4. # anonymousson 03 Aug 2011 at 5:43 am

   This shit is good as hell.

   ps: this is a compliment

5. # tiffanynicholeon 04 Aug 2011 at 2:33 pm

   Thank you!

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