Jul 24 2011


Published by at 6:21 am under Sad Love Poems

I’m fifteen! Okay?
I can’t do this everyday!
This pain that just won’t end,
No matter how many messages I send.

Because I know there’s no reply,
It’s the fact I can’t deny,
Because the one person, one human being,
Whom I desperately need to be seeing,

Just doesn’t care about me.
I’m being left to drown at sea,
And no matter how loud I scream,
Being rescued is just a dream.

She won’t be there to light the way,
She’ll neither come nor stop nor stay.
No one will guide me back to land,
And so I’m left a drowning man.

Maybe with age wisdom would come,
And I’d remember how to feel numb,
But I know that isn’t true,
Not after what she put me through.

The moment I saw her with him,
I knew she’d end it with a whim,
I knew but I hoped she’d love me more,
Instead my heart broke on the floor.

I just want for her to know,
That I love her enough to let her go.
But if one day she wakes to see,
That in truth she still loves me,
Then I’ll be waiting for her to save me.

This post was submitted by Justaboy.

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Drowning”

  1. anonymousson 24 Jul 2011 at 2:55 pm

    This is amazing dude! You made it rhyme, and it makes sense, that alone should be awesome. But you also gave it such an inredible meaning. Very impressive.

  2. Justaboyon 24 Jul 2011 at 6:58 pm

    😀 Thank you.

  3. serena93on 25 Jul 2011 at 5:43 am

    so young (: but so well done

  4. pixieon 28 Jul 2011 at 3:08 pm

    Dude, no.
    Stop doing this to me. Please.

  5. Critiqueon 10 Sep 2011 at 11:33 pm

    I’ve heard better.

  6. melissaon 17 Sep 2011 at 1:03 am

    wow , critique . that was amazing , so go away -.-

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