Jun 23 2011

Drowning in my tears

Published by at 11:35 am under Sad Love Poems

when i reach out my hand,
i’m not allowed to hold you,
when i go to run to you,
something gets in the way.

I felt like giving up on us,
like, we could never be happy this way,
with every harsh thing,
people seem to say.

But i think of it now,
and why give up,
we can become stronger,
we can defend for eachother.

My mind is lost,
I’m losing everything,
At first, it felt my life was gaining things,
but i’ve lost. I brought you down too,
I shouldn’t of met you.

I could have left you out of this,
let you live a life full of happiness,
but i’ve dragged you down,
in my world…of loneliess.

I’m so sorry,
i should have stayed away from loving you,
but i couldn’t- you were the one,
i had true feelings for,
but i seem to be sinking down to the floor,
im drowning in my tears… :'(

This post was submitted by Kathryn Patricia.

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5 Responses to “Drowning in my tears”

  1. meghanon 23 Jun 2011 at 8:01 pm

    this poem make me sad and i wonder what happened to your relashionship with your loved one,cause no matter what you go through,anything you can always be together so be strong and tough it out

  2. Xx_DarkRaven_xXon 24 Jun 2011 at 3:56 am

    This is tru depression….. 🙁 ….it also makes me wonder……if u need a hug…I give God 1z XD 😀

  3. silentlove2010on 24 Jun 2011 at 8:24 pm

    its ok

  4. Josiah13on 24 Jun 2011 at 8:27 pm

    good poem. good poem. when i finished this i was almost drowning in tears.

  5. anonymousson 24 Jun 2011 at 10:59 pm

    You had a couple of gramatic and spelling mistakes, but overall I liked the whole idea of the poems. Some things could be tweaked a little bit to improve the flow, because some parts are just out there not really fitting anywhere. But I love the whole “drowning in tears” thing.

    P.s. @ josiah: lmao!

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