Aug 07 2011

Dying from a broken heart

Published by at 3:31 am under emo Poems

I took the blade,
Put it to my skin.
The blade was dull
And the cuts were thin.
My eyes screwed shut,
My lip quivering in fear,
I pushed a bit deeper,
Hoped my end was near.
I carved a pretty picture
A heart to match the one i had
Its edges were ragged and sharp
I was numb, the pain wasn’t bad
I pressed even harder,
Watching the blood flow
My broken heart had
A blood stained shadow
I saw the blood mix with tears
I was sobbing while I cut
I thought bout the mess I made
Then I gave up, said so what?
I thought about my family,
The people on the net
I decided not to worry,
I had nothing to regret
My hands were trembling,
My whole body was soaked with blood
The way my blood was pouring
I feared we’d over flood
I pushed the blade
As far as it would go.
Dying from a broken heart;
Now everyone would know…

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8 responses so far

8 Responses to “Dying from a broken heart”

  1. dyingindarknesson 08 Aug 2011 at 11:46 pm

    I used to think no one knew how I felt until I read this….and it’s amazing…I love it so much. You’re keep it up. <:') <3 :love: ;-(

  2. pixieon 09 Aug 2011 at 10:46 am

    Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment.

  3. xxPlagueRatxxon 31 Aug 2011 at 6:20 pm


  4. pixieon 31 Aug 2011 at 6:40 pm

    Thanks for the read :p

  5. gothic angelon 12 Oct 2011 at 6:52 pm

    i know how you feel i feel your pain ;-(

  6. pixieon 12 Oct 2011 at 7:00 pm

    Thank you for reading :p

  7. Blakeon 20 Oct 2011 at 11:45 pm

    this is good i would cry but i dnt have any tears but i love it hope u have more

  8. pixieon 21 Oct 2011 at 12:17 pm

    I’ve no tears either, unfortunately.
    Thank you for reading.

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