Nov 27 2012

emptiness is the price we have to pay.

Published by at 9:49 pm under Sorry Love Poems

the days pass by,
you hand i can no longer reach,
i miss you so much.
that it’s hard to breathe.

the light shines down
but there
it would be night
so i’ll close my eye’s
and just pretend.

i’ll pretend
this didn’t happen
and i’m still
all intact.

i’ll pretend
i’m okay
and food
is not what i now lack.

truth is too scary.
and it’s painful
to come to terms
that things do happen
that we can’t control.

i thought we could do it,
could conquer the world
but i was so horribly

i’m sorry,
for not being okay,
for not staying strong.
i’m sorry
my dearest,
please forgive
my weakness now.

but i’ll strive
to still carry on.

i can’t guarantee
i’ll look the same.
i’ll be frail
and considered
far too thin.

but for you
i try
to still get by
for you my darling
are the reason
i am still alive.

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5 responses so far

5 Responses to “emptiness is the price we have to pay.”

  1. adminon 27 Nov 2012 at 9:50 pm

    awesome poem
    great work xD

  2. xxPlagueRatxxon 04 Jan 2013 at 3:09 pm


  3. Maxon 06 Jan 2013 at 11:57 pm

    It sucks. You suck. Simple enough P:

  4. xxPlagueRatxxon 07 Jan 2013 at 6:40 am

    thankyou max, oh how i do wait in anticipation for your lovely criticism 😉 and oh, the joy it brings to my life indeed 😉

  5. Maxon 10 Jan 2013 at 12:31 am

    Why, you are very welcome.

    I must admit, the very own fabric of the satin bubble of sanity escapes my grasp when I read such pieces of work.

    It is my very own pleasure to lay eyes upon this perplexing piece of wisdom. Some may call it adolescent, but I prefer to refer to it as “misunderstood”.

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