Aug 02 2011
Everything will be Alright
He pulls you in,
You pull away,
He cries tonight,
For the things you say
You seperate yourself,
and no one knows,
you’ll die tonight,
as the blood flows
But what you don’t know,
and what you don’t see,
is how your life,
has affected me
You don’t know me,
That may be true,
But to your suprise,
I care about you
So say that it’ll be okay,
Say that you’ll last,
Say that you’ll remember me,
That you’ll forget all that’s passed
Go just a day longer,
Go on just one day more,
I promise it’ll get easier,
The bruise won’t be so sore
Don’t let the blood flow,
Don’t end it tonight,
You’ve got you’re whole life to live,
Everything will be alright.
Trust me, everything will be alright. I’ve been there I know.
By Tiffany.
(2 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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Yes, well.
I could tell you how perfect your rhyming was, and how awesomely you expressed everything..
Or,
I could just say:
Awww.
Thank you!
And like my favorite saying goes:
Night is darkest just before dawn.
or something like that.
It made me cry to be honest, but you know It helped me to. We’ve had around 6 or 7 suicdes within the last month, and one of them was my best friend, Whom I watched kill himself, I hadn’t seen him in forever, and I visted him. He has a lot of depression issues but I thought he was doing better, and I told him I’ll be right back, I had to go to the bathroom, about 3 min later I was washing my hands, when I heard the gun shot, I ran to him, he shot himself, and within 5 min he died, I cried for 3 weeks, I didn’t know what to think. I hated myself because I thought it was my fault I still do think it is. So I’ve been wanting to kill myself,;-( and this poem helped me.
So thank you so much Hun.
Sincerely, Alexis.