Dec 15 2010
Feeling pain
What does life matter?
When you can see the broken pieces of your soul lying in a scatter?
Just lying there on the floor…
You knew there was only one door…
When that door closed,
Everything you ever knew and believed was suddenly opposed
So what does life matter?
All it does is bring you pain
Once your soul is broken,
It’s going to remain the same
Why should I wait here without you?
When you’re so immune
And you say that you’re through
I shed one tear at a time
Each one a reminder of what was mine,
And what I lost,
Now I have to pay the cost
To go on without you in despair
Feeling pain with each breath of air
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this is so deep…im honestly cryin after readin this…readin this poem is like readin my life…thank u for postin this poem 🙂
I agree ;-(
Ohmygosh! I agree with Jae.
Its like reading a part of my life story. This poem is SO good, really deep and meaningful. You have talent! Use it, girl! 😉
Thank you so much for your comments! The only way someone has talent is if they try at what they do.. I dont try to write my feelings down on a peice of paper.. It just happens 🙂 as long as you write whats comming from your heart its not labeled as “talent” its labeled as having the strength to be true to yourself and not hide what youve been through as a person 🙂 🙂
Hey Elizabeth it true talent does come from the heart but im being honest that poem u wrote u writted with a broken heart but here’s something im gonna write its just something quick
Never say “I LOVE U”
If u really don’t care
Never talk about feelings
If they aren’t really there
Never hold my hand
If your gonna break my heart
never say ur going to…
If u don’t plan to start
Never look into my eyes
If all u do is lie…
Never sa hi
If u really mean goodbye
If you really mean forever
Then say you will try
Never say forever
Cuz forever makes me cry…
i wont even know what u gonna say but think about it most of the poems is written with feelings aspecially when ur hartbroken thank
This is a good poem but i know i have read it in a few other places like forwards on my phone. This poem has been around for a while now.
My plan has always been to divsocer a way to freeze time and sleep for a few extra hours every day. No one gets hurt and I’m rested and ready to live it up! I’ll let you know if I have any time-freezing breakthroughs.