Mar 04 2011
Used to Pain
She told him the news
The words spoke in a hurry
her sight starting to get blurry
she told him he was busted
she was done
he started to worry
then he began to shake with furry
he grabbed her shoulders
she cried out in pain
he drug her to the kitchen
she shouted his name
he grabbed a knife
she just sat there now
he stabbed her in the heart
she was used to the pain
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your spelling isn’t the best it probably could be, but all in all? It makes one feel the pain as if you were there. Great job!
thanks, i know my spellings pretty bad..