Mar 04 2011

Used to Pain

Published by at 8:55 am under emo Poems

She told him the news
The words spoke in a hurry
her sight starting to get blurry
she told him he was busted
she was done
he started to worry
then he began to shake with furry
he grabbed her shoulders
she cried out in pain
he drug her to the kitchen
she shouted his name
he grabbed a knife
she just sat there now
he stabbed her in the heart
she was used to the pain

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2 Responses to “Used to Pain”

  1. pixieon 06 Mar 2011 at 12:20 pm

    your spelling isn’t the best it probably could be, but all in all? It makes one feel the pain as if you were there. Great job!

  2. Dinosauron 11 Mar 2011 at 6:34 pm

    thanks, i know my spellings pretty bad..

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