Jul 23 2009

Heartbreak and Redemption

Published by at 1:56 am under Sad Love Poems

I’ve been through a many pain and heartbreak,
And hurt all the more and one more time,
But nothing adds up to the strain and heartache,
Of lacking the courage to make you mine,
I’ve wept, oh sure I don’t care- I’ll admit it,
And I’ve felt all the grief of a thousand men,
But you know that I care even if you don’t get it,
For this heartbreak I’m feeling is mutual sin,
And I’ve cried and I’ve lied and I’ve hurt and been hurt-in

I’ve made bad decisions and closed up my curtains,
And then opened back up to my own self reveling,
But I’ve never quite felt like this feeling I’m feeling,

And I’ve got only you and myself to blame,
for you are the one who controls my game,
You’re the reason I smile and proclaim self redemption,
Your love takes my heart to a whole new dimension.

A dimension that not even I can explain,
With happiness and heartache as one in the rain,
And it pours and then sprinkles showing off in the sunshine,
All fed by the thought that you’ll want to be mine.

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5 responses so far

5 Responses to “Heartbreak and Redemption”

  1. candygrlon 24 Jul 2009 at 6:26 am

    loving someone is not an asurance that they will love you back…besides heartbreak wont kill you.. it makes you stronger,wiser and the next time you love someone you tend to be tougher :cry :sigh

  2. munroon 21 Oct 2009 at 3:42 pm


    awww…so sad..i love
    your poems…=)

  3. Cnodaciouzzzon 06 Nov 2009 at 7:46 am

    :sigh :sigh to think you allow yourself to endure all kinds of pain and all your pain ended up in hoping he\’ll be yours. so weird that the one person who can make us happy an also be responsible for our sadness.

  4. Emoloveon 07 Apr 2010 at 11:27 am

    i love your poem i absolutely do
    it is so sad :cry but also so true

  5. destinyon 05 Oct 2010 at 11:31 pm

    woooo cry: wonderful dennis 🙁

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