Mar 21 2005
Heartbroken
Heartbroken
Is there a better place,
To be right now,
Than to be home,
Listening to the crickets’ sounds,
Outside the windows.
Is there a better place,
To be right now,
Than in the bed,
Closing my eyes,
Falling into a deep sleep,
To forget about the days,
Forget about the nights,
Forget about you.
Heartbroken,
Nothing better than to sleep,
To forget that you are gone,
To forget your lies,
Forget the way,
You told me,
You never loved me,
Forget the way,
You looked at me,
When you left me,
I want to forget,
I want to leave this world,
Close my eyes,
Fall to sleep to stop the heart,
From beating.
I block my ears,
From hearing the sounds,
Like your voice,
Like when you sing to me,
Those lovely songs,
They sounded to tender,
Now they kill me,
They hurt me,
I don’t want to hear anything,
Don’t want to hear the waves,
Hitting against the sand,
Don’t want to hear the birds,
Chirping outside the windows.
Don’t want to see my face,
Don’t want to see you,
Don’t want anything,
That has to do with you,
I want to close,
I want to block away,
The world to stop the pain,
In my heart.
I want my heart to stop beating,
To stop bleeding,
From your words,
Your lies.
i absolutley loved it. This poem reminded me so much of me wondering about peopl.
So we all do feel the same things in the same way.
I know what you mean
I love this poem…it reminds meeh of my heartbreak..i can relate to it easily….
That\’s amazing
I can totally relate my current situation with this poem. It\’s so true. I feel the same!!!
your poem was best i have ever read
i can feel the pain
that was sooooo sad and beautiful i can realate to all of it and it was sooo heart felt it made me want to cry
It reminds me about the way i feel about somebody! I wish sleeping would make it all better.
gosh i can really realate to something like that! it\’s really sad~
such a gd poem! expression feelingz!
i can relate 2 it perfectly
as i read it i nearly cried :\'(
this is EXACTLY how i feel right now. it\’s nice to know i\’m not the only one who feels this way…
i like it
i know exactly how you feel…at first when you are with him everything seems wonderful but then as time goes on he stops doing the things he once did and it all goes downhill and you once again find yourself alone an heartbroken.
That was so great. It helped me alot Love sucks. I hate waking up and remembering that he is gone and wanting to go back to sIeep to ease the pain!!!!
wow this poem is deep
that is totally how i feel, i can so relate to how u input pain into the poem…well written
It hurts when the one you love more than anything in the world leaves. You Expressed the pain perfectly in this poem. I can absolutely ralate. You said it for all of us. Thanks!
hah this is how i feel and its hurting me so bad becasue my bestfriend is like a sister to me and shes gogin out eith him
[B]edwardin[/B][LIST]
This poem is amazing it really tells it how it is and how people really do feel this is one of the best I have read in a while!!!!!
when i read this it reminded of everything that happend to me
a guy hurt me
he took my heart from under me
and its like a thousand stabbing knives
wanderful
this poem was well gd, it remains me, of my x bf, he onley whant it one thing from me, and when he got it, he tould me tht he wasent gd for reletionships :\'(
that poem has made me realise how i feel about my life that is the way my x gf has made me feel 4 the past month n a bit but reading that i now see y feel so upset because sorrow is jus mans way of giving up and i [B]wont give up!![/B]
that was really good…i can really relate to the pain you feel about heartbreak. its horrible ๐ you have my sympathy
keep strong bruvva
xxxxxx
[I]It was soo touching.. I can feel the pain.. I felt like crying when i readi it… =\”([/I]
everything about that poem hits so close to what happened with my ex and it all seems so true
i know exactly how that is… not even kidding
wow,this was a very good poem,i can really relate to it automatically because i have been through something like this not too long ago,and yes i know it still hurts…
wow,this was a very good poem,i can really relate to it automatically because i have been through something like this not too long ago,and yes i know it still hurts…
i must say this poem is damn good.i felt the pain of the writer but would really like to tell those who are heartbroken to never loose hope because life reserved better for you my dear i\’m sure…
just had the same experience…. i can feel the words in the poem.. =(
this poem relates EXACTLY what i am passing through right now!!!
I WRITEN APOME ALL MOST JUST LIKE THIS
I loved your poem. It\’s a bueatiful poem.
Wow!!! thats really deep. i think im heading that way. I really loved it.
thanks to the person who posted this poem in this web page and i thanks to the owners of this website
and this is really what happens in the real life with all i
its having its meanings
wow !! this was great, really said how im feeling!!
u kno this poem dosnt discribe the way i feel at all but it was ok for ppl that r going threw that but id rate this 4/10!!
this poem was scattered in its thought yet created an emotional image that one can appreciate…pain is life so ponder life insearch of how pain may \’enlighten\’[email protected]
i know how you feel i want all those things to happen to me..but when i thought about it..there are better people in the world who will care for you much better just need to open your eyes
this peom was awsome it reminds me of the guy who broke my heart i like it alot good job
wow this poem is great i can relate i just dont wanna wake up to feel the pain either it hurts to lose the one you loved so much
there isnt much to say about this its too good ur too good this is simply the best
that relates to the relationship i was just in and how i felt after we split up and i still feel that was cause he was the love of my life.
YOU CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN SAYING BY THAT DESERT
its so nice.. it reminds me of someone that i really love so much..
[B]this is great i loved it[/B]
i know what u mean and noboby can really know how much hurt you\’re going through not even me because no one can understand what i am going through.
really love it…
i hv ben seaching for words to express me…then, i found out abt dis piece…It makes me wanna cry…
wonderful…touches the heart
The Best, It made me cry.
last year your my angel
but now you\’re just a stranger
you told me, you love me
you told me, you care for me
but now, you just ignore me
you told me you\’ll love me forever
you told me, you\’ll die for me
but now, it\’s just a lie
you told me, you can\’t live w/o me
you told me, you can\’t breathe w/o me
but now, why are you doing this to me
you\’re the reason why i\’m living
but now, you\’re the reason why i\’m dying
for me you\’re just a lie
for me you\’re just a stranger
i am always hearing my ex boyfriends voice in my head and i always try to block it out…but the the thing is whenever i try to stay away from him it seems like i think about him so much more…and thats what hurts the most!!
[B]I effing Luve Your poem keep it up!!
this is a realli g8 poem it touched me because of wat im going through i h8 my life n i just want to lay down and die
ii ABSOULETLY LOVE THiiS POEM!!
wow… this really speaks to me… i\’m feelin that… good job!!!
absolutly me i love this poem alot OMG i just realize that everyword is there is true thx alot
this is nice. i wish i knew when heartbreak ended. you get your heartbroken but when does it heal. if only there was a set time. of course it would never be that easy.
THAT WAS….GREAT .
[B]it just made me cry coz that is wat i felt ryt now…ouch as in ouch [/B]
i love it .. im going through the same
I just want to print the poem NOT the 101 comments. Please fix your print.
This poem is good it says whats in your heart and how hurt you are i think that i can say i relate to it cause i would also just want to forget about the person who hurt me ans has broken my heart. touching
I can feel ure pain 4 i am in da same position lyk u. i can totally relate 2 wut u sed.
its totally awsome
incredible!!!! exactly what i needed to hear..lol
i felt the pain inside of me…
your poem just touched my hart.
i loved this poem!! it reminded me of myself sooo much!!!
That poem was awsome, I loved it and its true, thats how you feel when you get heartbroken
This poem is totally true..i can relate the heartbreak..so sad..
Hay i really liked it! itss really awesum..its really good to speak your mind…..i rite tooo….
\”i fell for a guy but i alwayz end up hittin the ground heart first\”
well keep riting!
Later
it takes me there
and takes all away
jack daniels, jim bean,
what more can i say?
it takes me there, and makes it good
it makes the memories as they should
it takes me there and makes me smile
so i sip and sip some more awhile
but as i sip i sometimes wonder
if i didn\’t have this drink to live under….
but nevertheless i sip and sip
until a drunken sleep is where i slip
and then i wake up and all is gone
except my problems,
they still live on
and my stomach churns and my head aches
jack daniels, jim bean, you\’re all such fakes
you make it good, you make it fun,
but then the next day i can\’t face the sun
your drink won\’t forever mend my problems
so another way is how i\’ll have to solve them
[B]hey[/B] [I]umm what should i do wen my crsh likes me freind[/I]
hey omg ur peom is awesome it was sooo sad i can relate to it cuz i like this guy and he dosnt like me and hes soo sweet and everything but ur peom is soo sad dont stop writing
:eek WOW love it that is exactly how i feel. I have to admit though I hate being single. I miss TYLER :cry I acusered him of cheating for the 5th time any advies
:cry i feel u
[B]heyy i just got my heart broken and i dont no what to do and everyone hates me and i cant get them back but most of all i miss my boyfriend i love him but he said he didnt have time for a girlfriend so now i dont no wat to do i just really love him but he wont take me back what should i do and love your poems
Hi i broke up with my b.f. a while back and belive it or not i still have feelings for him. all the time people tell me to get over it but i cant :sigh for all you girl who has lost a guy that you realy care about listen to \’ Not Gonna Cry\’ by \’Marry J. Blidge\’ :roll [B]null[/B]
[B]I loved it alot[/B] 8)
hey thats pretty cool mine are okay but they dont make sense but the mean so much well yeah
i\’ve had my heart broken after being in a relationship with a guy for 3 years almost 4 he left me for my best friend i was best friends with her for 11 years.. i know where al lyou guys are coming from but you can get threw it no matter what… it will take a while but you can.. cause if can you can believe me. ๐
They lied to you so why the pain. Move on to a newer day.
They treated you like no good. So dont let the melodie do you good. ๐ก :zzz
:sigh The second paragraph is me tonight…..
MY BOYFREIND BROKE UP WITH ME 4 MY FUCKIN FREIND..I KNEW BOTH OF THA BIITCHEZ 4 8MONTHS I STILL LOVE AND WANT HIM BACK BUT SHE THA FUCKIN PROMBLEM!!!!! :cry
When my brother read a poem I had wrote for my first love, he threw my book onto the ground and smothered it with his foot. He told me…\”Thats what I think of that…..Thats exactly what this person did to your f**king heart……\” He was right. F**k him, Cause he F**ked me!
Shawn-T
Hey,
Well i recently broke up with my BF b-cuz he said he loved me but he was confused! He said that he started to like the girl that i hate the most in school! Now he tells me to give him time and that he wants to be my best friend while he unconfuses himself. I don\’t even know what to do, move on or let him have his time. Hopefully by the time he unconfuses himself it\’s not too late……….
I know how you feel. Don\’t worry. There are other guys out there who are MUCH better. I am going through the same :cry
:cry i really love the poem that\’s how i feel sometimes me and my boyfriend just broke up but hey am hurting but i can move on ladies don\’t sit and sober over him it will be okay go find u somebody else and have fun instead of stressing yourself over him
:cry i have been their 2 so well i so sad
I just got out of a good realtionship. At least your ex didn\\\’t say he loved you and then told you he loved your best friend, then take back he will always love you. But, I\\\’m not mad at either of them! ๐
Mk, That Was Gay.
:cry ๐ :cry ๐ :cry ๐ I LOVE THIS POEM BUT AT THE SAME TIME I DONT GIT IT!!! ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
:sigh hey i know how yu feel i mean my bf jst broke up with me and said hey lets jst be frens! i mean he broke up with me cuz of his frens i mean c\’mmon yu trow away love for yur frens!
well he saya he dnt want to be in a relationship for a while! bt knnow he is goin out with some grl! i mean it hurts i know! bt jst like every one else told me keep yur head up dn yull be fine!i promise ♥
:cry I don\’t know what I did to him to hurt me so much, Its been months since we where going out,, And I love him more than anything in this whole world I think a part off me always will.. It\’s not faree, I want to give him another chance.. But I can\’t, We have one out god knows how many.. And he said to me he never loved me, And yea.. Thats bout it.. god i hate him now, Cya all take care xox
i think that was kooly poem and no it did not make mme cry :zzz :zzz
it made me sad. i can relate though.[B]null[/B]
:cry my girlfriend briea sad she will never cheat on me but she did.
it happened like this, i told her give me her password or i was gone breakup with her and she gave me her password i guess she forgot i had it so i went on her page and i said some stuff that i did not want 2 read so i would like some help…….. WHO EVER WOULD LIKE 2 HELP ME JUST E-MAIL ME AT [email protected]
PLEASE IM ASKIN 4 ALL HELP THAT I CAN TAKE..
:cry my girlfriend briea sad she will never cheat on me but she did.
it happened like this, i told her give me her password or i was gone breakup with her and she gave me her password i guess she forgot i had it so i went on her page and i said some stuff that i did not want 2 read so i would like some help…….. WHO EVER WOULD LIKE 2 HELP ME JUST E-MAIL ME AT [email protected]
PLEASE IM ASKIN 4 ALL HELP THAT I CAN TAKE..[B]love hurts [/B]
hey im only 13 but ive already experienced my heart being broken but you have always got to remember gurls hold your head up high because any man that makes you feel that way is not worth the effort. You will be fine if you just remember this 1 thing…..Men are scum. Like I said im only 13 but i know that already x Take a piece of my heart to mend yor broken 1 x
sophie, 13 ๐ ๐
it\’s been 3 months now
since we\’ve broke up.
& it still hurts to see him whit that other girl.
:cry
cause hell. that\’s were he belongs. cause that\’s where i am right now. & he doesnt give a shit \’bout me.
:cry aww dese r sooo sad n i know how it feels 2 b heartbroken…i miss him so much n i love him more dan ever bu all he did was hurt me…i wish dis pain wud jus go away! :cry
THIS POEM JUST REMEBER ME ABOUT A TIME I HAD AN IT IS AN MY HEART THAT WHY I READ THIS POEM
:zzz :sigh :p 8) ๐ :grin ๐ :roll :eek :upset ๐ ๐ก :cry ๐ that was a good poem
Ah-Mazing :zzz
i have 2 words for you:
Ah Mazing!! :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz
Thanks i feel the same way :zzz
i need help i love this girl but im to shy to confront her. i really love her, a lot. but she loves someone else and that someone else loves her back too. if shes taken by that somevody, ill get very melancholy. :sigh :sigh :sigh
[B]I LIKE THIS SHIT HERE SORRY FOR THE BAD WORDS BUT MAN IM FUCKEN HEARTBROKEN CAUSE I LEFT THE LOVE OF MY LIFE SHE LOVED N SHIT N I LEFT HER FOR AN OBSESSION FOR ANOTHER GURL I WANTED TO BE WITH N NOW SHE DONT EVEN WANTS TO LOOK AT ME OR TALK TO ME I MISS HER SO FUCKEN MUCH DOGG–>>>WHERE EVER I GO I THINK ABOUT HER N WHEN IM TALKING TO SOME OTHA GURL IM THINKING ABOUT HER I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO I DONT WANT TO ASK HER OUT AGAIN CAUSE I KNOW SHE WONT GO OUT WITH ME NO MORE I BROKE HER HEART AS WELL WHEN I WENT OUT WITH THE OTHA GURL DAYYUM IM STUPID,THE LAST TIME I TALKED TO HER I TOLD HER I LOVED HER N I MISS HER N SHE SAID TO ME SHE DONT LOVE ME NO MORE N SHE DONT CARE ABOUT ME NO MORE N WHEN I HEARD THAT I WAS DOWN FOR A WHILE..I MISS HER KISSES N HUGZ N WHEN I TOLD HER \”I LOVE HER WITH ALL MY HEART DAYYUM LOVE HURTS..BUT WATEVA THATS HOW LOVE IS..{{{>>>FUK LOVE
[I]batang[/I]Okay i know how you feel becasue this just hapened to me!!! and yea u can find some one eles to fall in LoVe wItH okayy :cry ๐ :p :upset :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry ๐ :sigh :sigh :sigh ๐ก
It hurts when the one you love more than anything in the world leaves.that was really good…i can really relate to the pain you feel about heartbreak ๐ :cry ๐ :sigh
dude
i just broke up with my boyfriend after a year he thought he could yell at me whenever he felt like it and lie to me constantly and after being friends for four years and together a year he acts like he does not no me but i am stronger than that i will get over him and so can everyone else just believe in yourselves
i know how you feel like i have been talking to this guy and i thought i knew him but it was all a great big lie…. hang in there.. life will go on take the good with the bad and just roll with it!!!!!
*omg, dis is excatly how i feel bout my ex…it just really hurts an di do wishmy heart could stop beating*:[ :sigh :sigh :cry :cry ๐ก ๐ก
good poem
:cry :eek
good poem
:cry :eek
Oh man, I knw how u felt I feel like busting out right now. Men wil always be men! I\’m feeling so ashamed for you, anyway we\’ll just have 2 kiss a lot of bustards before u get Mr right IF THERE IS!
:sigh IIVE FELT THAT WAY A MANY OF TIMES. ITS SO DEEP.
omg..i love these poems they are so sweet true like heart broken…and right now i am heart broken from some1 that i really loved and that i trusted…but no look how i am…. :cry
I felt alot like this…
I cried when I read this.. :cry
[B]Brushscript MT[/B] I am reading this because last night I lost my true love :cry this poem makes me cry.
i felt da same way too
that guy\’s an arsehole
erghh he put me through HELL!he\’s my first bf..he said he dont wanna leave me but at last he did..n also lied to me abt something that\’s way beyond my thoughts
i cried so bad for a long time its been a month since my x left me for someone else n since then i haven\’t stoped crying for her i love her and i cant stop loving her i miss her and want to get back with her.1 week b4 turning a year together she left me and im still trying to get back with her after everything.this poem says everything that im trying to do but i can\’t.i forward her voicemessages sying that she loves me and misses me.i send her songs relating to her or me or what she has done…. i miss her alot (please come back priceless.) i love this poem all true………
:cry my x brokee my heart too. i know exactly how you feel. i thought she meant it when she told me that she loved me. we were dating for 15 months. three days before she broke my heart she told me that i was the one she wanted to spend her life with. then i go to check my messages and theres one from her. it said i dont want to go out with you anymore. and a whole bunch of other stuf i shouldn\’t say. ever since that day i haven\’t been to sleep, i haven\’t eaten, and i haven\’t stopped loving her. :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
This is a very good poem! I feel your pain right now. this made me cry! And i wish i could sleep all day and erase the pain.
Exacly Hoow I Feel.
&& Thiink I Am Boout To Go Craazy Withouut Hiim.
gr8 :grin ๐ ๐ 8) :p :roll :eek :upset :zzz :sigh ๐ :cry ๐ ๐ก
:cry :sigh
my biggest mistake in my life in first place is to like this boi who broke my heart bad.has 3 years now but still am afraid 2 go out with some1 in case they break my heart!HATE HIM VERY MUCH!
I LOVE ALEX DECKER 4 EVER -N- ALWAYS.HE\’S THE MOST PERFECT BOYFRIEND I EVER HAD IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE.ALEX IS SO WONDERFUL.:) I WOULD JUST ABOUT ANYTHING TO GET ONE MORE CHANCE.THAT WOULD MAEN A LOT TO ME.SO IM NOT AFARID TO SAY IM STILL IN LOVE WITH HIM SO MUCH. ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
I too understand my heart is breaking and has been for a long time and the more it breaks the more i seem to disappear. The poem is great i have written a few myself but they are never to be read by anyone else. I feel the emotion from your poem and it\’s hard but im starting to realise the longer i let my heart break the long my life fades away before my eyes.
u knw wah, people say dt boiz r prikz, buh u knw wah galz dnt dsrv boiz dat love dm alot cuz all day do is tke u for grantage, dey tel u dey love nd put so many dreams in your mind nd dn break it demslvs. i was wiv sum whom i luvd mor dn ma slf, nd to b honst i still do, she usd to tel me dt she luvd nd she wud neva leav me, buh gues wah, she came out wiv dat all does feelinz i had for you wer a misunderstandin. i would neva want no one to feel lyk i do, i will neva 4gt ha nd she wil b alwz in ma heart cuz i love ha, nd wt tha hek mn love aint havin sum1 o being wiv sum1, its da name given to whne a person would do any thing to keep the person dey love happy. im heartbrokn buh i would neva want her to be.
This poem is so beautiful so true. This is a poem dedicated to the one i use to share my life with. Its confusing love is a mess but at the same time it is AMAZING! I still love him. Ill always will.
a week agoo i truly lost my LOVE, he told me everyday that that he loved me and would never let meh goo..
&the day before he broke my heart, was the day he told me he wanted to grow old with me, &i believed him. but the next day he broke my heart & now isee him with some other girl. probably telling her those lines that were once minee, and my heart tears itself into more pieces than two. :cry :cry
this poem is so good i\’d like to make it into a song with my band please let me. :grin
This is amazing is just how i feel right now..Hope you find someone that wont make you ever feel this way again ๐
i loved this guy called we went out for 5 months then he brok my heart he had an x gf too that he really loved but she brok his heart so now that he brok my heart i think he took her revenge from me becoz she really hurt him alot. but becoz i love him for his happyness i pray that hse comes bak to him so get gets happy.
So i had this guy who i loved to death he was the one i loved. We were together for a year and two months. Then all of a sudden he left me he wants to date this freshman now. after all the lies he told me that he would always loved me all he wanted to do was get in my heart really well then tair it apart. :cry it was so painful. i cant let him go i need him in my life with out him im nothing. :sigh :sigh :cry
this happened to me to he told me he loved me and hed never let me go and he never cheat on me but he lied he cheated on me with my own cousin :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry i loved him so much we went out for olmost 7 and a halve monthes i think tha it was love but if it was he never would have cheated i loved so much wen we broke up i just wanted to kill myself like i couldnt deal with it he did the same thing to some other gurl to but they said that he really cared about me and i really cared about him to and i LOVED him so much and for him to cheat on my like that is really fucked :sigh :sigh up and sometimes i wish we could get back together :cry :cry then again i dnt want to cuz he lied to me alot and he never ment it and i should have know but i didnt and im so dumb cuz i fel for him and i shouldnt have said i loved u back he was my first love and other stuff he talked shit like hes tha shit wen he aint but im slowly moving on but if i see him i might just die i hope i dnt he a lieing cheatin son of a [B]null[/B][B]null[/B]
Loved the poem… It made me think of how i ended up loosing my first true love. He broke my heart so bad. We dated for awhil and one day he just walked out my door and never came back ever. I still love him to this day and i cant get him out of my head. I cant forget are memories at all. I just miss him so much and i wish i could have him back. My heart is still shattered and i cant even get another bf without me mentiong or saying or thinking about him. I just hurt so bad and i want him back. He bet on me and he got the money, and i hate him for it but somehow still love him,
hey i was heartbroken 4 months ago.. Our relationship was going so well bt his father didnt like me nd my mother didnt know at all. when my mom found out the first thing she said to me was that he didnt feel the same way i felt for him. next day he left me nd said it was for our good… i thought he really loved me nd wen you love sumthing u fight for it bt he didnt even try to tlk to my mom… i got so depressed i didnt eat or sleep i just cried. weeks later i got wif his other guys that told me he was going to help me forget him bt that didnt work nd wen my ex found i was going out wif sum1 he got mad nd started flirting wif my cousin they did it behind my back bt i found out nd felt like my world had fallen apart.. i told him i hate him nd i do for wat he did to me bt i also love him. i dont wat to do anymore cuz to my family nd friends nd boyfriend i have to act like everything ok wen its not at all… NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME!!!
I swear[B]null[/B] its really sad ae…! I mean wen loosing yah 1st love is real pain ful ae…! After dey teo yew dey will neva leave yew nd dat dey love yew heaps dey end uhb hurting nd breaking yah heart ae…! Buh i gues dea are bda ones owt dea ae…! :eek :sigh :sigh :sigh
this is an amazing poem.
i know that i have messed up many times.
&& i lost the one i love.
so you guys dont mess up.
know for sure when you find the right one.
:sigh :cry
i love this poem.it made me feel free but i feel like killing myself as well.you got good skills making poems.i almost cried because i had this song by seconhand serenade called “your call”….. ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ;-( ;-( ;-(
last year your my angel
but now you\โre just a stranger
you told me, you love me
you told me, you care for me
but now, you just ignore me
you told me you\โll love me forever
you told me, you\โll die for me
but now, it\โs just a lie
you told me, you can\โt live w/o me
you told me, you can\โt breathe w/o me
but now, why are you doing this to me
you\โre the reason why i\โm living
but now, you\โre the reason why i\โm dying
for me you\โre just a lie
for me you\โre just a stranger
whoever did this i feel da same but just a lil diff thgh ;-(
Y did u said u luv me, wen all u did ws lt me go. Y did u said u luv me, wen nw all i fl is lone. Y did u said, u’ll grow old wid me, wen all i cn see u wd sm else. Y? Y sch a lie? Y did u evn luvd me
This hurts my heart because its about me i hurt my wife didnt cheat physically abuse her. I hurt her emotionally so bad i am such a bad person
This Poem describes how i feel . The week my little neice died me and my (6 month ) boyfriend on our 6 months anniversary broke up he broke up with me for my best friend . Because she is the pretty one . I still live in depression . I have to see several professionals , So those who judge can do fuck em selves because what heart break does to some may lead to the wost like i tried to commit suicide but i didnt wanna be selfish ,,,,
Wow it reminds me how I broke someones heart and I knew how they felt and I’m not proud of it anyway as a poet myself I honestly give this poem 2 thumbs up ๐ the #1 point of a poem is to portray emotion and I truly felt sad this was great
I Like It ๐ But It Brung Me To Tears ;-( I’m crying ;-( Not Because Its Sad Because It Brung Back Memories.. Memories I Cant Bare To See, Hear, Or Re Create. ;-(
But Know Thanks To The Poem ;-( I Am Going To Phone The Last Guy That Broke My Heart And Tell Him I Love Him :love:
I’m Just Scared To What He Would Say Back x ๐ฎ ๐ :straight:
i love this poem it is every thing im in right now and i really do not have anything to life for ;-(
i can relate so much to the poem!!!!! <3 ;-(
i also feel the same way like emma does! :love:
my stupid ex boyfriend named dakota, left me cause he ASSUMES that i hangout with to many guys so last friday which was the 17th, he broke up with me. i was so sad cause me & him did alot of sruff together that i really, really regret. i wish dakota could understand that he broke my heart into little, little peices. now, hes dating another girl & he feels bad for hurting me but i dont beileve it. well i wish me & him could be together agian cause right now im so pissed cause i thought he loved me but its NOT true. so i hate him & myself.
goodbye.
my heart is untouchable by complicated emoutins,but this has made me feel like I have more than three emoutions (love,hate,and sadness :love: :straight: ;-(
As I was reading this I wanted to cry so badly. Everything in this poem is exactly what has happened to me today. It is annoying that I cannot cry even at the saddest I have ever been..
wow i really liked that. i can actually relate to it right now. every line i read made my eyes feel up with tears. every word made me think of him. and it just kills me inside. you are a wonderful writer.
:alien: :bandit: ๐ =] ๐ฟ
My life exactly . Amazing <3
has i deep meaning, but its very very true. That life. ๐ :kiss:
aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww ima print this cause i just got my heart broken…… ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
this poem is the shit!! Reminds me of err thang im going threw just wanna go into a deep sleep fuck da bull!!
sad to say i know how this feels… : /
Beatiful poem, feel adsactly the same! ๐
so true….said all the feelings i had and sometimes still have…..wish the lies would fade away….
THIS POEM WAS REALLY SAD
IKNW WAT IT FEELS LIKK TO BEINQ TOLD LIES N BEINQ HEART BROKEN
FUKK LIES
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i feel like this alot inside of me but i can’t love for no one else.. ๐ ;-( ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ :_(
love the poem ma girlfriend wanted a time out and i dont know if shes lein to me i think she dont love me anymore but i dont want her to lie to me anymore i jst want the truth does she love me or she dont want to be with me anymore
my heart feel like want to stop beatin n leav dis world just go to sleep n never wake up ๐
love this poem! The best I read until now!
boys are players.
wow this poem is so frekin nice i love it ๐ฏ ๐
this poem reminds me of past. keep it up
that poem is really good my boyfriend just split wid me because of my m8 she wouldnt let me see him we both still lve each other xxxxxxxxx and its my mums wedding tmoz and christmas eve im trying to get bk wid him xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Secretly in love
we share our kisses and hugs
silently, without any of our friends knowing
every night is our best hours of laughing and comforting
never though i’m going to fall in love with you this deep
never or ever did i imagine we will serve this secret dark love
few times i remind myself
not to love you more deeply
as past teaches me so many time already
Few times i tried to hate you, forget you when there’s still a chance
sudden word, that scare me most
all end up the same
its not deeja vu, but its the truth and reality
I smile in front of you, showing you how strong i am without you
but actually i’m dying from inside
its too painful… so painful that i want to rip my heart this instance
to stop this feeling
to stop this crying
im drowning and sinking
and i cannot breath or gasp any air anymore
sinking to the bottom part of this sea
sea of sorrow
I LOVE THIS!
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i loved it it makes me feel and remember my ex he told me he loved me so much and told me tht he would never leave but he did and this is how i feel ;-(
i get wat da person saying in da poem, it sayin dat she wud rather be dead den to live her life down here on earth with a broken heart, some place better where there wud be no pain at all,
This was a good poem, I’m going to add it into a chapter of my book if that’s ok. I’ll cite it and also give all credit to you (: I loved it! Hope you all will read my book when its out ๐ it’s gunna be a huge hit!
๐ i love all the poem it tell the truth about people but they are all about my life love it ๐
=] my ex boyfriend didnt understand what was gining on witmy life so he didnt know why i wouldnt talk to him but then things got better but he broke up wit me ๐ :straight: ๐ฎ 8) ๐ :bandit:
xD xD xD xD xD xD ๐ ๐ in love this all poem ๐ but love will always hurt us. they does not understand our feellings love in love we should not againsts our family we know that our family dosnt like that guy who is our hearts but we can do any think for our love :love: :kiss: :woot:
gothica what happen to u nothink what u does not loke this poem and can u be my friendd than reply this sms plz :angel:
It was great it made me remember my ex i cant get over but it was great you should make more poems thanks ๐
Jass–> in my poem, i oredy mention it briefly… kinda hurt, but wut can i do… Love always do hurt us, but sum of us soo masochist that we dare to love and love again;holding a strong will that maybe we will find the right one sumday.. =)))) so… i think, love is interesting even it cost my feeling..
of coz can! ^^
Excellent poem.I am going through it to.You inspired me,and do another one.
Stunning! Very Dopee! Reminds Me Bout Me (5)Ex! xD
She was the perfect liar! It hurts to have the whole world crash right under you.
aThis is soo beutiful but not as pretty as my best guy friends poem (justin chad fuller )
good god man, this is very beautiful and relates to me in so many ways, i love it
wowa , this made me cry and cry ; thinking about that , :/ i broke up with my boyfriend after a year , and now he walks arounf with another girl on his arm , he was cheating on me all along , he would hit me , and he would bet me , i didnt know what to do im only 13 :/ now i relised i cant stand and sit there letting someone hit me , this poem litereally made me cry my eyes out :/ ; who ever wrote this , your fucking amazing! <3
:love: sexxxx man love it
i loved this lad so much and i went out with him but then he finished me for someone else which is my best mate which im glad she dont even like him,.. but i just feel like im dying from the inside i cart stop thinking about him at all or stop crying about him :'( </3 ;-( ;-( ;-( ;-(
Is it strange that i can elate to this…Im a guy i shouldn’t feel this, but i do and it hurts…
i feel like this andd i hate this feeling</3 i hate not being able to do anything or go anywhere without thinking of him. i have no one who i can talk to about this and this poem let me know im not the only left with these feelings.
god. love sucks. ๐
wow its the perfect poem at this time of my life…
If only they could see that only one little white lie
can so much harm when its lightend with the truth :/
No one is perfect and i guess we learn that the hard way
This poem is so good. that i start thinking about one of my x boyfriend . Because he did all of that to me. i still have feeling for him. but i should not still have feeling for him. :love: ๐ ^_^ ๐ :whistle: :woot: =] ๐ฏ :sleep: ๐ฏ :ninja: :straight: =] :kiss: :angel: :bandit:
this poem is soo nice.. ;-(
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A shooting star
like a love that never goes far
Everyday that we see each other
I see you with another
My love I have for you is hard for me to bare
But every second I get with you is like an answered prayer.
Although you may not know
You’ve helped me grow
If you leave now and never return
I may wish to burn
At least with a shooting star
I know I will se another
If you leave you will always be far
People say to move on, that there are others
I need a miracle, cause I wanna be your girl
When I’m with you my world seems to swirl
In six months I will be out of time
I want nothing more but to tell you how I really feel
But you have someone so I have to deal
Whin I’m With you it’s nothing but bliss
I wish for one more kiss
A shooting star
like a love that never goes far
Everyday that we see each other
I see you with another
My love I have for you is hard for me to bare
But every second I get with you is like an answered prayer.
Although you may not know
You’ve helped me grow
If you leave now and never return
I may wish to burn
At least with a shooting star
I know I will se another
If you leave you will always be far
People say to move on, that there are others
I need a miracle, cause I wanna be your girl
When I’m with you my world seems to swirl
In six months I will be out of time
I want nothing more but to tell you how I really feel
But you have someone so I have to deal
Whin I’m With you it’s nothing but bliss
I wish for one more kiss
i loved himm very much but he loved my best friendd hopefully i can forget and start a new love i love u ur my loveeeeeeeeeeee kiss me againnnnnnnnnnnn i want u i will wait night open for u the door every nightt my love i love u i love uuu
i loved himm very much but he loved my best friendd hopefully i can forget and start a new love i love u ur my loveeeeeeeeeeee kiss me againnnnnnnnnnnn i want u i will wait night open for u the door every nightt my love i love u i love uuu
love it that the same thing im going through ๐
im gayyy !
8)
this is gay ๐
You’re so damn right about this!
wow..nice poem..very meaningful..i can feel the pain bcz im going thru it r8 nw.. ๐
This poems is the same how my relationship was with a guy he was my true love but he broke my heart. Like how this poem go’s. ๐
This Was So sad i,ve been heart broken! dumped on my birthday.!he told me heloved me needed me in his life.!Lies* LieS *Lies!
amazing ๐ ๐ ๐ 8) ๐ฟ
Here I go to send it away
No returns or turning back
It’s the last to ever hear or say
Forever got taken away and now here is the never
It kills to know you do so well
When yet I dwell in the past
You don’t show unless I’m around but no not anymore
Here I go I’m gonna do it
Just only a little cut to the wrist I know i got this
I think of the bad to help me go
But your face and good comes to me
It ruins my moment to go away forever
You kept me good never bad
Now I lay in bed knowing
That even without you
I can’t do the worst to go
Now it’s my time to heal
From this day I just wish for you to go to hell
OMG i can fkn relate to all of this… ive been heartbrken over 5 times now and it HURTS like crazy.. i dont know how i get thru it i guess i jus do ….. love is heaven but hurts like hell
whenever i get heartbroken i just try to talk to new people to move on with my life if they cheated or lied and you guys were broken up its obvious it wasnt meant to be i just look around more and not let the past effect my future with friends or relationships
wow i just love it….thanx …recently um havin problem with my gf…..she is having a secret bf….iam planin to brakeup :straight:
His name was on my mind the whole time I read this poem and the memories we shared. . . I want to be so mad at him but I can’t, I hope the best for him in live and if our paths cross again in life I hope I will be ready to open myself again to him and take the risk to lose it all again.
yea thats exactly what im going through .. every line was true )’: i love it <3
I can feel your pain :'( my girlfriend just left me
that is soo true right now im all heart broken because of some guy that treated me like garbage on the last dday ;-( ๐
when same one tells you that i love you it means alot. Never reply it, when you don’t mean it-coze that means am building afoundation of my love to you in my heart
i lyk all of abv stories…………. all those contents hppnd wth me…… yet i dnt hv cmplains wth my lyf…. i cnt do anythng 4 it……. ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
A broken heart
I really love you,
but you love someone else.
When I see you,
I can’t close my eyes.
I just want you to say how much you care about me.
But you love someone else.
I just want to hear “I love you” out of your mouth.
I hear it in my mind,
It’s just like a sound.
But it’s just a dream,
Because you love someone else…
______________________
That’s exactly like my story i guess. i love someone but i don’t even know if he does but i guess he likes someone else maybe. It’s been like 3 years i love him… i will never be able to confess my love.
omg this is a heart breaking poem i know what this feels like coz i am going through the same thing ;-(
this poem real brought me to tears, I wonder how guys do it to pretend they love you when they know what they real want is just to take you down and leave you heart broken. I hate to admit it but I think I give to much of my sincerely love in relationships and give the wolfs a pleasure to stumble all over it.. ooh God I’m so heartbroken.
hey just broken up with my bf and it hard and he want me back should i take him back or should i leave him ๐ ;-(
sweety, please just take him back. You don’t want to loose him forever and if he wants you back and is completely sincere about it, you NEED to. The same thing happened to me. Me and my bf broke up. I read this poem and cried my heart out! but then i asked him if he still loves me he said yes. But before yu take him back you need to make him promise you that he wont do it again and assure him that it is LAST and FINAL chance. Hunn just take your baby back, i took mines back and thank GOD i did because i am so much in love with him that i can’t function without him. YES TAKE HIM BACK!!
** gudd luck **
Petty Impressive.I ur poem format it shows a grief inside of you.
Keep it up (Y) ๐
My soul is drowning in the tears you left me to cryโฆ
If you loved me at all you would never leave me to dieโฆ
Sad and aloneโฆ
Is the way to goโฆ
No love can ever cure the constant pain tht is building upโฆ
Until it finally bursts and leaves me in a peaceful restโฆ
I sit beside my grave watching you weep over my lifeless body..
Wishing you could take it all backโฆ
The way you kissed me was the way you proved ur loveโฆ
The way I hugged you made you understand when somethings wrongโฆ
Even if I say nothing was wrongโฆ
But now it is all over
And you feel nothingโฆ
No remorse after all the pain you put me through
All the tears I cried
And all the marks on my wrist
When you come back the next day
You see meโฆ in a peaceful rest beside the river gorge
MY BEST FRIEND IS TRYING TO BREAK ME AND THE GUY OF MY DREAMS TO BREAK UP AND IT WORKED ;-(
i love dat poem!!
<3
:love:
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romeo take me somwhere we kan be alOne..
i”ll be waiiting..
all there’s left to do is run..
u’ll be the pRiincE..n..
i’ll be z pRIincess…
iT’S a loVE sTOryy..
baby..jst sayy YES!<3
euhh sakii kntn haa poem laa..kav liike lii..oK
^_^
me and my bf just up today noow he got a girl what to do now? ๐
if I had to choose between loving you and breathing , I would use my last breath to say “I love you “
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow dis lovely ๐ ๐ ^_^ ๐ฎ ๐ :whistle: :p :love: :bandit:
Fantastic site. Plenty of useful information here. I am sending it to some buddies ans additionally sharing in delicious. And obviously, thank you in your effort!
May I ask, who wrote the poem?? I couldn’t find the author. ๐ :bandit:
๐ this poem is sooooo cute bro like omg you should be a pro at this crap… you are really good… my ex needs to read this like sraight up!
jojo gurl i feel you but… if he broke up wit you u need to leave his a#@… gurl he will realize wut he was missin. ๐ :love:
this is so cute i wish to forget everything they tell me…. i wish all the stof they tell is not true….. ๐ ๐ ๐
omfg ;-( ;-( ;-( ๐ ๐
I’m crying right now cuz thats how i feel
;-( ;-( ;-( ๐ ๐ ;-(
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Your poem. I can’t seem to like it but it is worth the effort to most. It just hurts me more. It reminds me so much of how I lied to him and how he will never forgive me for it, of how the feelings for him that I hold will never vanish or fade. even tho your poem is about how he had hurt you, it just reminds me so. I am sorry if I ruined your good mood if you are/were in one.
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