Nov 02 2010
Heart Cage
Your bare chest,
On my naked spine.
A ticking glory within your heartcage,
Like a soothing massage against my skin.
Our finger intertwined on top of my calm breast.
Your whispers hushed in tangled curls.
I turn to gaze at your beautiful face,
Your eyes like calming seas,
And your skin has a glorious honey glow.
You look as Delicious as you taste.
With a kiss gracing my forehead,
that warms me to my toes.
I pull you close,
A passion crying out to you,
deep within my lust fulled bones.
So closer we become,
the closest that we can be.
Tonight our love burns bright.
Superb! The creativity and imagery put the reader right into your marvelous world of love and passion. I felt like a peeping tom and liked the feeling. Your talent is obvious; penning with the skill of an artisan. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Mac NcGovern
Magnificent! Loving the idea of the term “heartcage”!! :love:
Awwwww i love your poem 🙂
It’s amazing :love:
I reeeeally like your poem!! its reeeally good =] :love:
oooooooh, lovely poem :love: …i like it :woot:
Thankyou so much everyone! im glad you liked it ^_^
Loved it! You are very talented!! 😀
aw well thank you so much 🙂