Sep 08 2011

I did you wrong.

Published by at 11:00 am under Thinking of You Poems

I remeber.
What we had.
You called it love.
I didn’t think we were there..yet.

What we shared.
Can’t be faked.
But what i always wandered,
why didn’t you ever realize your one mistake?

Why did you pick up the one ruined apple?
why did you pick me?
maybe because i was within easy reach?

But now it’s over,
it has been for a while now.
Why has it just hit home?

I was looking through our conversations.
I miss the times.
The times when i didn’t wish you away.
It all burnt in the end you see.
Can you not remeber me?

Because i do care.
Really i do.
I don’t wish to hurt you.
All i ever wanted was the best for you.
That’s why you shouldn’t have picked me.

Tears run from my eyes now.
I find this no surprise.
I’ve been holding back these emotions.
All i can expect is for my own ignorance to be crowned.
All you can expect is for me to take my bow.

Did it ever cross your mind
that maybe i left our trust,
because of what was earlier discussed?
Sometimes i get mad at you.
For not catching me.
For not realizing.

I’ll admit
I want you back.
but it’s too late now.
I’ve pushed my luck.

I think i was just beggining to understand.
The meaning, of the word called ‘Love’

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9 responses so far

9 Responses to “I did you wrong.”

  1. OneandOnlyon 09 Sep 2011 at 6:16 am

    – i wish i can rate this a thousand. Every word , every stanza is exactly what i am going through & wat im thinking about saying to my ex. BRAVO ! :’)

  2. Leighh<3on 09 Sep 2011 at 3:59 pm

    <3 aliceeee i love that my dear, its gooood 🙂 xxxx

  3. xxPlagueRatxxon 11 Sep 2011 at 8:12 pm

    thankyou OneandOnly and Leigh:) and i hope everything turns out to get a lot better for you OneandOnly:) thanks guys xx

  4. OneandOnlyon 12 Sep 2011 at 3:31 am

    Thank you & thanks to you we qot a chance to b at least friends {:

  5. xxPlagueRatxxon 12 Sep 2011 at 4:18 pm

    yay:) i hope everything only continues to get better for you:)

  6. Confused lilBunnieon 10 Oct 2011 at 4:00 am

    This is beautiful…truely amazing..
    I have to learn to write like you ^_^

  7. gothic angelon 12 Oct 2011 at 6:58 pm

    i felt every word you said i might no what your goin throu but i will be there for you 😆

  8. xxPlagueRatxxon 12 Oct 2011 at 9:16 pm

    thanks guys, and i’m sure you can write better than me confused lilBunnie and thanks gothic angel, i appreciate your support :3 thanks for reading 🙂

  9. Sjaakon 18 May 2012 at 4:35 am

    artist. Invariably someone will make a deolaraticn of the person’s demise, whether or not that is the case There are about a dozen comics in my Following list which have not updated in many moons. One of them even said See you next year! back in August (and has not yet resumed updates ) A few of them, though, have lost their sites (there are Registrar placeholder sites currently showing) and a couple of let their domain registrations lapse. While I do tend to worry any time an artist misses their expected next posting date by more than a week, and have occasionally contacted an artist with an Are you okay? e-mail, it’s the ones that languish long enough to vanish that actually leave me truly wondering if the person has met an untimely end.(Of course, then there are the ones that are deliberately taken down by the creators. A falling out with a host, for example, or a I’m starting over, and I’m wiping out the old version so that only the new version is there. , or in one case, a I got a publishing deal, but I have to take the comic offline or they’ll back out. )

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