Sep 03 2010

I don’t want to be that girl…

Published by at 7:02 am under Heartbreak Poems

I don’t want to be that girl
The one who sits at home and cries
The one who thinks of him and always sighs
The one who gets used
The one who’s abused
The one who’s seriously confused
I don’t want to be her
Her pain is great
The guy she loves is late
He has yet to figure out she’s the one
The one thats beauty far surpasses her looks
The girl you hear about in books
The one who holds him as her world
The girl who knows she doesn’t stand a chance
The one who risks it all at a dance
I want to be the one he loves
The one he cares for with all his being
The one he’s there for when she’s hurt
The one he would never treat like dirt
The one he knows could do so much better
Tho one when she’s cold he would give his sweater
The girl he couldn’t imagine his life without
The one he truly loves without a doubt
The girl he lets become his friend
The girl who stays with him to the end
The girl he would stay with through struggle and strife
The woman he would one day call his wife

This post was submitted by poetry writer 95.

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10 responses so far

10 Responses to “I don’t want to be that girl…”

  1. kyleeon 07 Sep 2010 at 2:52 am

    i cant tell u how heatfelt and painful this poem was for me. the words held so much longing, love, and meaning. i wish i could write something so true and as beautiful as this one. you are an amazing writer. never stop, please.

  2. ok17sanaon 08 Sep 2010 at 7:39 am

    I absoluteley love it!

  3. Jesson 09 Sep 2010 at 6:12 am

    This poem is most definite and sincere…. sighs.. :love:

  4. baaby54on 09 Sep 2010 at 4:14 pm

    This poem is absolutely amazing.
    Your a fantastic writer. ^_^

  5. Reetaon 19 Sep 2010 at 4:48 pm

    Right on the money girlie!!

  6. Dannielle Lovesongon 24 Sep 2010 at 8:46 pm

    amazing 🙂 I love it 😀

  7. brokenhearton 26 Sep 2010 at 11:26 am

    this poem is nice,,,, ;-( i wanna cry coz my heart is broken 2 day

  8. Janelon 08 Oct 2010 at 4:28 am

    You absolutely have talent and your expressing it in a beautiful way. I honestly don’t kno what to say. If someone said that to me I would be in tears….you are truly an amazing writer

  9. pixieon 23 Oct 2010 at 5:12 pm

    Awww…. that’s absolutely, without a doubt, the sweetest thing I’ve ever heard!
    :love: :whistle: :p 😀 ;-( :angel: :kiss: =] :woot:

  10. bransonsforeveron 08 Nov 2010 at 7:47 pm

    wow!! umm well ill just say thsi is how i fill.. if i loose him 🙁

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