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Nov 07 2010

I hate you

You said you loved me,
You lied.
You told me you were sorry
I don’t take them,
Goodbye.

This post was submitted by idanceintherain.

(2 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)

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4 Responses to “I hate you”

1. # angel709on 08 Nov 2010 at 3:01 pm

   short, simple, to the point.
   im trying to get to the goodbye part

2. # pixieon 08 Nov 2010 at 4:54 pm

   I really like how the poem doesn’t rhyme, but at the same time it kind of does.
   Umm, you say in the fourth line that you don’t take “them” what are you talking about there? You don’t take apologies? Lies?

   loving the confusion!
   xoxo
   ^_^

3. # bransonsforeveron 08 Nov 2010 at 7:48 pm

   wish i could say goodbye

4. # shyanon 10 Nov 2010 at 8:36 pm

   Saying goodbye is alway’s the hardest thing):

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