Jul 20 2010

I hear your name

Published by at 7:58 am under Heartbreak Poems

I hear your name, I see your face,
And I cry,
Knowing, that it’s all a goodbye.
Im in pain;
And tears pour like rain, when you call my name.
It’s killing me, can’t you see?

I need you,
I miss you.
Dont you miss me?

It ended so wrong,
I thought we were strong;
We could get through it all.
Well, here’s my wake up call!
It’s all a goodbye,
You walked right away.
And I didn’t die,
My heart just slowly melted away…

I hear your name, I see your face,
And I cry,
Knowing, that it’s all a goodbye.
Im in pain;
And tears pour like rain, when you call my name.
It’s killing me, can’t you see?

What happened to all the promises,
You made?
All destroyed by lies.
A fairy tail life,
Thats all this was.
Like humpty dumpty,
We fell off the wall
But, what I’d give to fix it all!

I beg of you!
I hold on, to everything that I can.
All the memories,
Crush me down.
My heart it breaks;
My tears pour out,
And I find myself dancing in the rain.

I hear your name, I see your face,
And I cry,
Knowing, that it’s all a goodbye.
Im in pain;
And tears pour like rain, when you call my name.
It’s killing me, can’t you see?

By Carissa Lee

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3 Responses to “I hear your name”

  1. Anonymous Emo Kidon 12 Aug 2010 at 8:48 pm

    I miss my ex-boyfriend. He broke my heart into a million pieces and he doesn’t even care! I feel soo dead. Ever since he broke up with me. He is telling everyone I am a slut and no one wants to hang out with me nor talk to me. It’s really awful. I can’t take it anymore. It’s like I want to run away or atleast leave this cold, cruel world. Even my bestfriend won’t help me out with this shit. My parents won’t let me leave the city. It’s like my parents want me to suffer in this fucking world. I HATE IT!! I need a new life. </3 ;-(

  2. christinaon 22 Aug 2010 at 2:12 am

    this reminds me of my ex boyfriend who i went out with for 3 months damnnn i loveddd him sooooo muchh (jose) i cryyy everyday alott 2 due with tha facttttttt tht he cheateddd on me with my best friend and shes carrying his babyy.. sumtimes im really hurt tht i end up in situations tht dont get me ne where i started smoking pott and drinking idk from basically all tha bullshyttt!!!! he calls me crazzzyyy,slut,whore c***,bitch etc etc…….sum tymes i wanna jus end my life but all my real/true friends tell me im better than tht and a beutiful gurl and can do way better but i jus dont feel tha same 🙁

  3. Priscilla Valdovinoson 25 Aug 2010 at 9:38 pm

    I hear your name, I see your face,
    And I cry,
    Knowing, that it’s all a goodbye.
    Im in pain;
    And tears pour like rain,
    when i hear your name.
    It’s killing me, can’t you see?
    im trapped while your free, youre free.
    I need you,
    I miss you.
    Dont you miss me?
    It ended so wrong,
    I thought I could be strong;
    I could get through it all.
    But i can, i couldnt, i tripped and fall.
    I loved you, loved you more than anything,
    just the sound of your voice made my heart sing,
    but now its all goodbye,
    i still find myself asking why,
    why couldnt you love me, for me,
    why couldnt you see the love i see,
    Youre love went away.
    Mine had no choice but to stay,
    And thought id die,
    My heart was living a lie,
    I hear your name, I see your face,
    And I cry,
    Knowing, that it’s all goodbye.
    Im in pain;
    And tears pour like rain,
    when i hear your name,
    It’s killing me, can’t you see?
    im trapped, while youre free, youre free.
    What happened to all the promises,
    You and i both made?
    you say that in time it will all fade,
    time heals everything,
    thats what i used to think too,
    but now i know the truth.
    lif only back then i knew
    All destroyed by lies.
    i tried to say my goodbyes,
    but my love for you couldnt let me go,
    the depth of my love, youll never fully know.
    I hold on, to everything that I can.
    remembering how you just upped and ran,
    All the memories,
    Crush me down.
    My heart it breaks;
    its hard not to frown
    My tears pour out,
    And I find myself dancing in the rain.
    i love you,
    if only you felt the same,
    I hear your name, I see your face,
    And I cry,
    Knowing, that it’s all a goodbye.
    Im in pain;
    And tears pour like rain, when i hear your name.
    It’s killing me, can’t you see,
    i love you, i shouldnt but i do, i love you,
    if only you could love me too.

    && thats my take on your beautiful poem.

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