Jul 13 2011
I Need You
I’m not here for lust,
Forever’s not a must.
I just need someone to understand,
Someone to hold my hand.
I need somone to miss,
I need someone to kiss.
I need somone to hold me,
So I’ll forget what he told me.
I need someone to care,
Somone to be there,
Just for a while,
With neither games nor guile.
I need more than a flirt,
Who can take on my hurt,
If you’d dare brave me,
I need you to save me.
Love the almost light way that it rhymes. Love the way it’s both serious and playful.
It was cute and fun and very easy to read. There was a tiny bump in your rhyming, nothing unforgivable :p
I really really like this.