Sep 28 2010

Mend my broken heart

Published by at 10:10 am under Heartbreak Poems

You were the best thing that happened to me,
You made me feel alive.
But something strange then did occur,
I took a long and lonely dive.

As I hit the ground,
My heart came out of my chest.
Forgetting every moment,
You were one of the best.

You lied to me then,
You lied to me now.
You said you loved me,
Sorrow, sick but how?
You had my heart,
But gave it back.
Hand from hand,
All shattered and cracked.

I try to mend my broken heart,
Every now and then.
But it’s too sick and unloved,
It needs you back again.

This post was submitted by Chloe97.

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Mend my broken heart”

  1. DJon 29 Sep 2010 at 8:36 pm

    I know exactly what you mean by this. I have felt this way so many times. And i still do.

  2. Dannielle Lovesongon 30 Sep 2010 at 1:41 am

    Awww, you can feel the sadness. You did a good job. It’ll get better and make you stronger in the end.

  3. Chloe97on 01 Oct 2010 at 8:53 am

    Naww DJ. I know, I have felt this so many times before. It hurts to have a broken heart. I hope you find that special someone. Yes Dannielle Lovesong, you can feel the sadness & thank-you. Yes, it will get better & make me stronger.

  4. mickey97on 01 Oct 2010 at 9:00 am

    aww chloe97 this is awesome love it xxx

  5. Chloe97on 01 Oct 2010 at 9:21 am

    Thanx Mickey97…just came to me after a break-up I had this year xxx

  6. samairaon 15 Oct 2010 at 4:56 pm

    lovely poem. I’ve only loved once. He left me me and i was in tears. Once a heart breaks it’s very hard to get yourself together agian. That once incident has made me hate love. I don’t ever want to love again. 🙁 anyway, best of luck in life and if you do fall in love again hope you get someone that loves you alot in return. take care and never give hope. =]

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