Sep 21 2010

If You Died Tomorrow…

Published by at 4:32 am under Love Poems for Him

If you died tomorrow I would cry until
I couldn’t cry anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would write your name until I couldn’t wrote anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would pick you up in my arms and carry you until I couldn’t walk anymore.
If you died tomorrow I would die too

This post was submitted by madelaine7.

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “If You Died Tomorrow…”

  1. Amandaon 21 Sep 2010 at 4:36 am

    rated +5

    This is so powerful, so short yet so amazing, beautifully explains the strength of the bond of love

  2. madelaine7on 21 Sep 2010 at 5:21 am

    Thank you so much for your kind comment. My ex boyfriend actually inspired this…we ask eachother deep thinking questions all the time and I asked him this and he answered what the poem says. (except for the last line.) I was so
    inspired I had to write about it 🙂

  3. baaby54on 21 Sep 2010 at 3:33 pm

    Such a meaningful poem.
    Your a fantastic writer.
    Its short, lovely and very detailed. Loved it ! 🙂

  4. angel709on 21 Sep 2010 at 6:29 pm

    i realy like this poem!

  5. Dannielle Lovesongon 22 Sep 2010 at 2:29 am

    It’s really good. I’m glad I got to read it. 🙂 Good job.

  6. lost_in_the_worldon 09 Apr 2011 at 2:11 am

    Oh God, that’s an amazing poem. The words you used were so strong and carried the message across so perfectly. Actually, it inspired me more than a lot of longer poems I’ve read have. Really, REALLY good job, I absolutely love it. 5 stars.

  7. saanjon 30 Jul 2011 at 9:22 am

    i need this………

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