Love Poems & Poetry

Nov 24 2010

I’ll be in the sky

Can a frozen heart come back to life ?
Even when its been through a thousand lies ?

And can time flow backwards ?
To undo every little thing
It makes me mad
Sometimes even sad

I wish that I could fly
Beyond the sky

My heart bleeds
It’s love that it needs
But it seems
That nobody can give it to me

So I will be high in the sky
Waiting for the one
To bring my frozen heart back to life

(1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)

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4 responses so far

4 Responses to “I’ll be in the sky”

1. # mandyon 13 Dec 2010 at 6:48 pm

   It was okay but you should do some work on it, you definantly have the right idea for a foundation, keep it up and work a little bit harder! 🙂

2. # JoJoon 19 Dec 2010 at 10:44 pm

   thank you

3. # Mellehon 22 Dec 2010 at 3:26 am

   Instead of frozen, why not broken? I think it sounds a little better.

4. # JoJoon 26 Jan 2011 at 12:35 am

   I used the word frozen because I felt like it was the best way to explain my feelings.
   My heart isn’t broken into pieces ,it feels frozen.
   Like it stopped beating.
   I don’t feel nothing ,I feel no warmth ,no emotions.

   That’s why I used the word frozen

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