Love Poems & Poetry

Jul 10 2011

I’ll Cut

I’ll cut
Because you can’t anymore.
I’ll wound
Because you can’t anymore.
I’ll cry
Because you can’t make me anymore.

I’ll tear this flesh away and
In it’s place
I’ll see your face.
Because I can’t hurt anymore.

I’ll cut
Because you can’t anymore.
I’ll wound
Because you can’t anymore.
I’ll cry
Because you can’t make me anymore.

When the pain and fear and guilt all go,
I’ll know
That you lied and my hate is justified.
But I’m nothing without you,
So I’ll cut.

This post was submitted by Justaboy.

(2 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)

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6 Responses to “I’ll Cut”

1. # pixieon 11 Jul 2011 at 7:22 pm

   I’m not exaggerating, but this is the best poem I have ever read.
   Among hundreds of poems this is the one that comes closest to what I’m feeling right now.
   Thank you.

2. # Justaboyon 11 Jul 2011 at 7:46 pm

   Really? I wan’t sure about it, it’s a style of poetry I’m not used to. I really like to make things rhyme…I don’t know if this one is really that good.

3. # pixieon 11 Jul 2011 at 8:44 pm

   I think it is. Poetry differs from person to person. It’s all about how it is viewed by whom, and what it means to that specific person.
   This just really spoke to me.

4. # Justaboyon 11 Jul 2011 at 9:15 pm

   Well, thank you a lot. I’m really inspired by a lot of what you do, and I appreciate what you have to say. :angel:

5. # Justaboyon 11 Jul 2011 at 9:18 pm

   ps. I’m just sorry that above all others something like this is what you identify with. I don’t think anyone should have to feel this pain.

6. # pixieon 11 Jul 2011 at 9:28 pm

   If you don’t feel pain, there’s no way you’ll ever be able to truly appreciate the beautiful things.

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