Jun 26 2011
Indispensable
I don’t wanna leave
I don’t wanna cry
Movements of sorrow and grieve
And my eyes are dry
All this time i didn’t hear my voice
It didn’t hurt when you carved my heart
You were the water and i had dissolved
Though i knew you were gonna flow away from the start.
Give me back my time
i never imagined i would want it back
hand over my life
though you have painted it black
Your’e the knife that cuts through hearts
Like a blade you stain
Just like hollow art
That’ll wash away in the rain
Oh why did i ever kiss you?
The poison still lies in my veins
Struggling to breakthrough
But you locked them your invisible chains.
Please don’t hurt me anymore
Please let me go
But i don’t wanna leave
And that is why you do so!
some of the lines were clumsy and were quite hard to read
i like the meaning, love the title, can easily relate
the ending has always been important to me, urs is spot on!
good job
thnx….i really appreciate criticism………it just helps me to grow:) 🙂
The graveyards are full of indispensable men – Charles De Gaulle