Jun 03 2011

Invisible love

Published by at 1:26 am under I Love You Poems

i don’t know when it started,
when hearing your name my heart melted.
but in your heart there is other,
compare to me she is much more better.

shall i keep this feeling forever?
afraid that a confession will bring you farther,
cause in your eyes will always be her,
and bottling this love inside not gonna make it lesser.

let my love be like air,
invisible but it keeps your heart beating,
if only you can see, you can stop me from breaking.

This post was submitted by srikandimerah.

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3 Responses to “Invisible love”

  1. pixieon 03 Jun 2011 at 3:31 pm

    much more better?
    ur grammar is horrible
    luv the last line, tho

  2. srikandimerahon 04 Jun 2011 at 2:39 pm

    dear pixie: u can refer to this link
    http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=even%20much%20more%20better

  3. pixieon 04 Jun 2011 at 3:36 pm

    haha. i stand corrected

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