Oct 03 2010
“It,” Deystroyed Me
I lay here on the cold, freezing floor, half way passed out from pain, with tears building up in my eyes and a bloody chest, just wishing I would have made the right choice. As I watched my world crumble and flash before my eyes I thought twice about that. My past wasn’t perfect, behind it’s fairy tale shell lays a gruesome horror story of bloody clashes and defeats. You may wonder how that’s possible, yet I can’t explain it all to you. The unmentionable parts are hard to stomach. Might I just say I gave everything I had to “it,” a heart, a soul, a busy mind, something to do, nothing to hide. It wasn’t enough, “it,” wanted more. “It,” wanted to watch me fall apart, to cry inside and to break my heart. The though never crossed my mind. How could one chaotic soul, one incapable mind, one cold hearted, blood thirsty creature do so much harm? It makes no sence to me. I can’t even fathom what’s going on in “his,” mind right now… All I can say is that after all this poignant damage, there will always be deep emotional scars.
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wow…totally resonated with me, especially the description of “him” i completely relate. nice work
Thank you. 😀
I made a silly typo when I was cutting and pasting. I’m sorry, in the line close to the end, “The though never crossed my mind.” It’s supposed to read, “The thought never crossed my mind.” – This website is uncapable of editting your writing once publishing, so.. :sick:
great work
i love it
^_^