Oct 04 2009

It’s more than I can swallow

Crush it, Break it apart

Migs Rustia
 

Can you count all the times
That you’ve mended my heart
Just so you could again
Crush it, Break it apart?

Yet, you’ve got no idea
That I’m hurt all the while
Cause I hide all my pain
With a laugh and a smile

All my rage and frustration
They are secrets to you
I’m a pretty good actor
Cause you don’t have a clue

I have made it an art
It’s greatest learned skill
Hiding all of this damn
Fuckin pain that I feel

Yet sometimes it leaks through
Sometimes I botch my act
Sometimes you see my pain
Sometimes I can’t hold back

I regret if you noticed
I didn’t wanna seem shallow
But sometimes it’s too much
It’s more than I can swallow

(2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)

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21 Responses to “It’s more than I can swallow”

1. # tonikaon 15 Oct 2009 at 5:47 pm

   this poem speaks tha damm truth. :sigh

2. # rahulon 20 Oct 2009 at 10:23 am

   :cry

3. # Katrina on 02 Nov 2009 at 7:09 pm

   This is amazing
   great job.

4. # Kimberly phillipson 06 Nov 2009 at 10:01 am

   Yes..this is so tru..i try to fake a smile all the time,but my pain is always writen all ova my face. the pain hurts to much to keep bottled up inside,and eventually, you will only hurt yourself. if a man is hurtin you that much, you have to find your own happiness..thats what im going to do. :sigh

5. # Sallyon 17 Nov 2009 at 8:05 pm

   I fel soo much compasion with this poem. I understand how you feel. I started crying wijavascript:ac_smilie(\’:cry\’)th all the true feelings that you brought up in me through this poem. My world is just soo mickey mouse ajavascript:ac_smilie(\’:upset\’)t the moment. Its good to know there is someone out there who I can relate to. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Yours truley, Sally Jenkins x javascript:ac_smilie(\’:sigh\’):cry :cry

6. # Becaon 09 Dec 2009 at 1:43 am

   This was so well written. Me and my boyfriend, have done nothing but argue the past week, and this describes exactly how I feel. I\’d print this out and frame it if i could. Ha.

7. # corina wareon 09 Dec 2009 at 11:18 am

   I been heartbroken for a year and a half straight. Yesh life has been pretty sucky, but I\’m trying to get through one day a time. I consider myself in recovery right now. Becasue I\’m really trying to heal from all the humiliation and hurt. I love this poem. I can reelly relate. :cry

8. # Bon 23 Dec 2009 at 3:54 am

   I find this quite average, but mere words of frustration. I fear it fails to capture the feelings of the heart, but more the frustration of the mind. It does not captivate

9. # Janaishaon 06 Jan 2010 at 8:15 am

   [B]null[/B][I]I love this peom…. I read it every day for inspriration.! [/I] :cry :cry

10. # sarahon 21 Jan 2010 at 4:06 am

    its great *tear*

11. # Jonathanon 13 Feb 2010 at 12:34 am

    This poem helps me get through another day knowing \”thank you\” :cry

12. # Sarahon 17 Feb 2010 at 2:33 pm

    this is exactly how i feel now. i just went through a break up. your poem rox. im gonna share it with my friends :cry

13. # jazzon 26 Feb 2010 at 2:07 pm

    :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry ………………thats all i have to say

14. # vaibhav singhon 29 Mar 2010 at 9:25 am

    its true that sometimes someone hurt u and u feel that its too much but u cant do anything b\’coz the person who hurt you is your life…….and no one hate his life

15. # Aimeeeon 30 Mar 2010 at 4:21 am

    :sigh this is exactly how i feel. i love this poem , its my life, right there in words. thankyou.

16. # alex tayloron 08 Apr 2010 at 4:07 pm

    this is how i feel it like i am looking in to my hart :eek
    i love it xxxxx

17. # lucason 03 May 2010 at 7:31 pm

    I love this poem, remake one similer

18. # ashley joneson 26 May 2010 at 7:30 am

    :cry

19. # swation 02 Jun 2010 at 2:40 am

    awesome
    :cry :sigh :cry :sigh
    i feel better now
    🙁
    Hope will get my 🙂 back soon

20. # Joshon 12 Jun 2010 at 9:31 pm

    This iss sooo how I feel right now thx reading that helped alittel :grin

21. # Sanneon 17 Jun 2010 at 8:33 am

    I\’m gonna make a song of this poem.
    May I?

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